~SAATHIYA~..A SANDHIR FF - Page 44

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg what a mind blowing update

It was so heart wrenching
U really penned it beautifully

Poor rd cnt see him in this condition
He was dying to see his sanyu n baby safe

It was really very emtnl


Finding her like maniacs
The way u penned his emtns was commendable


Plz jldi se sanyu ko mila do
Cnt see rd like this




Wow golden jubliee
U truly deserves it di


U r awsme


Update soon
Cnt wait

Love u
Keep smiling
Edited by newmoon18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: manuzz






OMG ...50th part...🥳🤪


thank you to all my lovely regular readers who always share there views on each and every part...appreciate me..sometimes when i feel low motivates me... and of course how to forget silent readers who are hiding behind the curtains but loving my ff...🤗


my heartiest thanks to all...🤗
omg i m gonna write 50th part of SAATHIYA...😳
please some body pinch me...not hard ha...dukhe ga phir...😆

guys keep showering your love and support on me...i want it ...i m greedy...😉

i will promise to entertain you all like this...😳

thanks for such a tremendous , warming , immense support...😳

you know i was not at all sure about the response i will get on my ff...i was little bit bit scared...but no i was wrong...the response is overwhelming ...🤗

part 50...golden jubilee part on the way...

with tons of love

MANALI

🤗




congrats di.. u deserve it🤗
love u n ye waiting for nxt like mad😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Love the parts but please don't make it a sad ending don't let sanyukta die
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Posted: 10 years ago
Congoo
n plz update part 50 jaldi
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Posted: 10 years ago

😳PART 50😳

(randhir stood up supporting wall ...his organs seems to fail...his heart stop beating...his senses stop working...his legs unable to move...his hands were freeze...his eyes forgot to blink even for once...tears also didnt supported him...they refused to come out...he was body didnt supported him...he was paralysed...)

(somehow he gathered some courage...and came out from his state...and headed towards cold room...)

(he was standing in front of door ...)

(some where down in his heart knew...the lady...the lady who was pregnant and died is not his sanyukta...no she is not sanyukta...he knew she will never leave him alone...she cant go like this away from him...she loves him unconditionally...she will keep her promise...but the situations that were playing in front of him...his poor heart's voice was fading at every passing second...)

(he clenched his fist...and closed his eyes and took a deep breathe...)

(he slowly opened the door...but immediately closed it...the smell inside the room...the smell of dead bodies...any person normal person would die by just smelling it once...)

(he placed his palm on his nose...unable to take that smell...)

(he took out his hanky and tied onto his nose and mouth ...)

(he again opened the door...and finally entered inside...)

(it was not cold room ...it was a grave yard...all dead bodies...the smell..the dim light in room...he closed his eyes...and headed towards coat number 32...)

(as informed by doctor...coat number 32...the lady who died...who was pregnant...)

(he straight away went near the coat...)

(his heart ...his breathes...nothing supporting him...)

(he took small steps forward...and looked at the death body...)

RANDHIR-ha...its not sanyukta...yeh sanyukta nahi hai...yeh sanyukta nahi hai...

(he smiled and ran outside the room...)

(he moved the hanky from his mouth and took some fresh air...)

(he settled down on a chair...and hide his face in his palms...)

(what a pathetic view it was...cold room...his senses haulted entering it...the smell...the sight...no one should visit the place...not even in there wildest dreams...)

(but he was relieved...it was not sanyukta...it not his sanyukta...the lady was someone else...)

(meanwhile doctor came to him...)

DOC-young man...is she your...

RANDHIR-no she is not...she is not my wife...woh meri sanyukta nahi hai...

(he said with a ray of in his eyes...)

DOC-ok...

(doctor placed his hand on randhir's shoulder and left...)

(randhir came out of the hospital...)

(he was walking aimlessly on road...)

RANDHIR-kaha ho tum sanyukta...kaha chali gayi tum...

(he was talking to himself...)

RANDHIR-kaha kaha nahi dhundha tumhe...har jagah dhundh liya...tum kahi nahi mili...mujse koi galati hogayi kya sanyu...ha...bolo meine koi galati ki kya..ki tum mujse aaise ruth ke dur chali gayi...bolo na...i m sorry...i m sorry if i hurt you...please come back to me sanyukta...i m sorry...please wapas aajao...i love you...

(he sat down with a thud under a tree...his back resting on the tree...)

(its more than 7 hours now...his search is still on. ..but he failed...no sanyukta in his sight...its 4 am in morning...sun is about to rise...birds started chirping...but this poor soul...for him the night is never ending...no sunrise on his life..because he is lifeless soul siting under tree...and his eyes glued up in the sky...)

(it was still dark...but a ray of sun touched randhir's face...yes sunrise took place...the ray of sun entered into randhir's eye..making his eyes blink...he immediately rubbed his eyes...)

(he was about to stand up...but his phone rang in between...it was some unknown number...randhir picked it up absentmindedly...and held the handset near his ears...)

RANDHIR-hello...

THE PERSON ON OTHERSIDE- is this mr randhir shekhawat...?

RANDHIR-yes...lekin aap kon ???

PERSON-dekhiye...muje aapko kuch batana hai...

RANDHIR-please i m not state to talk...i m sorry...

(he was about to cut the call)

PERSON-its about your wife...

(he chipped...)

RANDHIR-what...

(a ray of hope arose in his eyes...)

PERSON-aapko mein aabhi ek address sms karta hu ..aap yaha aajaye...aapko aapki wife yahi milegi...

RANDHIR-what...sanyukta...is she fine...?? meri baat karvaiye usse please...

PERSON-see right she cant talk...aap aajayie...aapko wife mil jayegi...and yes she is fine...

(the man said genuinely...)

RANDHIR-ha aabhi aata hu...please take care of her...i m coming...i m coming...

(randhir cut the call and stood up...)

(he was relax...finally some clue about sanyukta..he quickly wiped his tears..and waited for msg to pop in his cell phone's inbox...)

(in some 5 minutes the msg arrived...the address was clearly typed in the msg..with each and every landmards , directions clearly mentioned..so that it doesnt become hard for randhir to find out the place...)

(he quickly ran in the direction...and after some time..he reached the place...)

(it was small cottage...and it was decorated in old school style...there was big garden outside...he opened the main gate and slowly went inside...)

(he stood in front of the main door...and the read the name plate...mr and mrs d'souza...)

(randhir pressed the door bell...)

(after few minutes an old age couple opened the door...)

(yes the same old age couple which they met at hypercity one year back...the first day of there marriage...sandhir in hypercity...sanyukta admiring the old age couple...there fun and masti ...randhir teasing sanyukta...there wish to have there old age like this...how the complimented sandhir...blessed them for there successgul marriage life...all the memories made there way to his mind...)

(yes the old couple saved sanyukta...the old couple saved randhir's life...they brought an injured sanyu to there house and took great care of her..)

RANDHIR-uncle aap...

UNCLE-come in gentleman...

(randhir entered...and look around the house...it was so beautifully decorated...)

UNCLE-aap...sanyukta...sanyukta kaha hai...

(aunty offered him a glass of water...but randhir denied all he want right now is sanyukta...)

UNCLE-randhir..have some water first...be calm...she is all fine...

(uncle smiled..assuring a broken randhir...that his wife is all fine...)

(randhir took the glass and drank water in one go...yes he hadnt eaten anything nor have drink water in last few hours...)

RANDHIR-uncle sanyukta...

UNCLE-she is taking rest beta..dont worry she is fine and your baby too is fine...

RANDHIR-but...

UNCLE-i'll tell you everything...kal shaam..mein aur wife park street pe the...i think it was 5.55 pm ...just 5 minutes before the blast ...hum waha taxi ke liye ruke the...hum taxi mein bethne hi wale the ki utne mein we had a loud voice...it was bomb blast...people started running here and there...kitne log maar gaye...kitne injured hue...un log mein se ek sanyukta thi...thank god woh bomb blast ke spot se dur thi...isiliye woh bach gayi...she was lying unconscious on the road...her forehead got injured...meri wife ki naraz uspe padi...meri wife ko yaad aaya ki yeh wahi ladki hai jo hume ek saal pehle hypercity mein mili thi...nayi nayi shaadi hui thi tum dono ki...hum dono ne milkar usse bachaya..aur usse yaha humare ghar lekar aaye...humare neighbours mein se ek doctor hai..humne unhe bulaya aur sanyukta ko unhone treat kiya...doctor ne hume bataya that she is pregnant...and her baby is safe...sirf choti se chot aayi hai...sar par...baki she is alright..

(randhir was just listening to them...slowly and steadily he was becoming normal...god knows how is gonna thank the couple...thank you word is so small...)

UNCLE-phir hum uske hosh mein aane ka intezaar karte rahe...kyuki na hi sanyukta ke pass uska cell phone tha nahi koi identity proof...jiski help se hum tum tak pauch sake...so we had to wait until she come back to her senses...it was 2 am when she opened her eyes...my wife was with her...she called out your name...humne usse pucha..tumhare baare mein...but she was so weak to answer anything...isiliye humne uspar zyada stress nahi diya...my wife made her sleep...and she is sleeping now...relax she is fine...meri wife uska sanyukta ke saath thi puri raat...uske kapad badal rahi thi...taki woh sukoon se so sake...tab uske trousers ke pocket se yeh card nikala...

(it was sanyukta's card...sanyukta randhir singh shekhawat...md sandhir group...)

UNCLE-iss card ke through humne tumhe contact kiya...and you are here...

RANDHIR-uncle...uncle...aapka kaise shukriya karu...i dont know...thank you .uncle...thank you...you saved my life today...aapko pata nahi aaj aapne ...mujpar kitna bada ehsaan kiya...thank you so much uncle..

(he kneel down before him...and joined his hands..thanking him for saving sanyukta...)

UNCLE-nahi beta...just stand up...dont say thank you...

RANDHIR-no uncle...aaj thank you word bhi chota hai aapke saamne...aapne muje meri zindagi wapas di hai...meri sanyukta...i owe you my everything...thanks...thank aunty...thanks..for saving my wife ...and my child...thanks a lot...thanks...

(he broke down before the old couple...)

(he started crying hard...)

UNCLE-beta...utho...come on...be strong now...she is fine na...now dont cry...she will not feel good...if you cry...hain na...

(uncle hugged randhir tightly..consoling him...)

(randhir wiped his tears...)

RANDHIR-uncle...mein sanyukta se mil sakta hu...

UNCLE-ofcourse...why not...

(she is that room ..he said pointing at the door of the room...where sanyukta was sleeping...)

(he went to room and opened the door...)


Kismat se tum hamko mile ho
Kaise chhodenge yeh haath ham naa chhodenge

(he stood at the door step..and saw his life...his sanyukta...all safe...she was sleeping...her forehead had bandage on her forehead...she was sleeping keeping her palm on her belly...just like every night randhir use to sleep...)


Kismat se tum hamko mile ho
Kaise chhodenge yeh haath ham naa chhodenge


(he went inside...closed the door...and was taking small baby steps...towards the bed...)


Phir se banatee takdiro ko, armaano kee janjiro ko
Jaanam abb naa todenge

(all the flashes of the dreadful incidents that took place before some hours were flashing in front of randhir...)


Kismat se tum hamko mile ho
Kaise chhodenge yeh haath ham naa chhodenge
Phir se banatee takdiro ko, armaano kee janjiro ko
Jaanam abb naa todenge
Kismat se tum hamko mile ho
Kaise chhodenge, yeh hath ham naa chhodenge

(finally he saw his sanyukta...all safe...he was looking at her as if he is looking her after ages...tears of happiness formed in his eyes...happiness of finding sanyukta...happiness of getting his life back..happiness of being with her...happiness of seeing her safe...happiness that sanyukta kept her promise...she didnt left him alone...happiness of all his dreadful and fearful thoughts were proved wrong...happiness of listening that their love...their baby is safe...)


Kya kahu kaise lagate hai dil pe julfo ke saaye
Koyee bhula rahee jaise manjil pa jaaye
Ya koyee dil tufaan kaa mara, dard kee laharo me aawaara

(he settled beside her and caress her hair...lovingly...a tear drop fell on her hand...)


Koyee pyara pyaar ke saaye pa jaaye

(she opened her eyes only to find her randhir in front of her eyes...)


Kismat se tum hamko mile ho
Kaise chhodenge, yeh haath ham naa chhodenge
Tukde dil ke ham tum milke
Phir se jodenge, yeh shisha phir se jodenge

(there eyes got lock for a long time...)


Phir se banatee takdiro ko, armasno kee janjiro ko
Jaanam abb naa todenge

(sanyukta's heart ached seeing randhir's miserable state...his puffy and red eyes...his messy state...his red nose because of crying...his messy hair...his drained cheeks...his shirt tug out...)


(while randhir's heart was relieved seeing his wife , his sanyukta , his life all safe...what kind of situation he has to pass through in past few hours only he knows..he smiled looking at her...)

(he leaned forward and kissed sanyukta's forehead...)


Yu sharmaatee yu ghabraatee aise simatee simtaayee
O mere balam yu hee nahee mai, jaate jaate laut aayee hu

(while she rub his tears with her thumb...)


Prit meree pehchaanee tune, meree kadr toh jaanee tune
Abb dil jaaga hosh me chaahat abb aayee

(randhir cupped her face and hastily kiss her forehead , her eyes , her cheeks , her nose , her jawline , he left no portion of her face being untouched ...he was kissing her all over her face like a maniac...he kept on kissing her for a long time...as if a small kid whose favorite toy is being snatched away from him...)


Kismat se tum hamko mile ho
Kaise chhodenge, yeh hath ham naa chhodenge

(she cupped his face...and kissed away his tears...)


Tukde dil ke ham tum milke
Phir se jodenge, yeh shisha phir se jodenge
Phir se banatee takdiro ko, armaano kee janjiro ko

(she kissed his forehead to console him...and joined there forehead...and both of them closed there eyes...)


Jaanam abb naa todenge
Kismat se tum hamko mile ho
Kaise chhodenge, yeh haath ham naa chhodenge

SANYU-ran..randhir...

(she wispered in low tone...)

RANDHIR-sshhh...sanyukta...please kuch mat kaho...

(she said holding her ckeeks in his palm and still joing there foreheads...)

(she rub her hand on his back to console him...while he just hug her tightly...as tight as possible...and again started crying making her kurti wet...)

(they stayed like these for long time...there was no exchange of words..it was not needed also...there eyes spoke out everything..they found solace in each others embrace...the room was silent but still it had a melody of love playing in background as the two souls.. two love birds...where melting in each others arms...)

(after very long time randhir broke the hug...he looked into her eyes...)

(she closed her eyes...and he very slowly..very gentle started sucking her lower lip...sanyukta wrap her hands around his neck...he was caught her upper lip and she hold his nape for a pulling him more onto her...she voluntarily opened her mouth so as randhir could enter it...and randhir entered he mouth..letting out all his pain..all his agony ..all his frustation ...all his dreadful experience all his sorrows..all his cries into the kiss...and sanyukta also let him to do so...he tasted all her mouth and after sometime released the kiss thinking she might get lack ofbreaths...)

(he again pecked her forehead.. and this time he smiled...he smiled after a long time...and rub his nose with hers...)

SANYU-randhir...

RANDHIR-hmm...

SANYU-baby ko bhi chaiye kissy...woh bhi tumhe miss kar raha tha...

(randhir's lips broke into a sweet smile listening to her words...)

(he leaned backward..and caress her belly after a long time...he leaned close to her belly and kissed her belly...and very lightly kept his head on her belly for some few seconds...)

(she lovingly caress his hair...while he lifted his head up...)

(he took her into his embrace and took a nap for some time...)

PRECAP : randhir still disturbed of all the incidents that took place...how will sanyukta handle him...😳


so end of part 50...

lo mila diya sandhir ko...aare woh kabhi dur gaye hi nahi the re...

aab khush ho na sab...mein bhi khush hu aab...

chalo toh fatafat comment karo...

aaj toh comment aur like banta hai boss...

50th part hai bhidu...comment aur like mangta aapun ko...nahi toh aapun ruth jayegi...

ok thank you for reading this...

keep reading...

with lots of love.

MANALI

🤗

😳


Edited by manuzz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
yayy!!!! i was waiting for so long...bas page refresh kar rhi thi aur wait kar rhi thi...sone bhi nahi gyi as neend to aa nahi rha hain

waise thanks unhe milane ke liye...and congratulations...😳😳😳

and awesome update...woh to already understood hain hain na...


best ff i have ever came acrosss


thanks a lot and congrats again
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nitzrushi

yayy!!!! i was waiting for so long...bas page refresh kar rhi thi aur wait kar rhi thi...sone bhi nahi gyi as neend to aa nahi rha hain

waise thanks unhe milane ke liye...and congratulations...😳😳😳

and awesome update...woh to already understood hain hain na...


best ff i have ever came acrosss


thanks a lot and congrats again


thank you so much
😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update... congratulations for 50th part... finally sandhir r together with their baby... randhir condition brought a tears in my eyes... u r absolutely superb writer no doubt in it... as before i said i really love ur selection of songs... keep updating ur beautiful writing and plz pm me...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: megha1996

awesome update... congratulations for 50th part... finally sandhir r together with their baby... randhir condition brought a tears in my eyes... u r absolutely superb writer no doubt in it... as before i said i really love ur selection of songs... keep updating ur beautiful writing and plz pm me...



thanks re...thank you so much..
yes i will pm you next part...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Voowww
this is one of the best updates
ur 50 part was just awesome
keep writing

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