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Posted: 10 years ago
As planned..my 49th post for saathiya..
It just makes my day..
Romantic sandhir
Naughty ranno..
N its awesome writer aseasoned wid regular updates and looongg chapters...what else do i want?
I really love this ff..
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 47
(monday morning...)
(office time...sandhir getting ready...randhir in blue shirt was struggling with his broken button...)

RANDHIR-shit..iss button ko bhi aabhi tutna tha...sanyuktaaa...

SANYU-kya hua randhir...
(sanyukta came running to the room and was about to fall but randhir caught her hand and saved her from falling)

RANDHIR-sanyukta...whats this?...aaise bhaag kyu rahi ho...kitne baar kaha hai dhere se dyaan se chala karo...aaise bhaag kyu rahi ho koi train pakadni hai kya tumhe...
(randhir said in little loud voice..)

SANYU-sorry...sorry...tum aaise chilla rahe the ..toh muje laga ki kya hua isiliye...

RANDHIR-phir bhi...take care of yourself sanyukta...aaise nahi karte...samajti kyu nahi tum...

SANYU-aare baba ok...sorry bas...now tell me ..aaise chilla kyu rahe the.. mere cutiee pie...
(she said encircling her hands around his neck and came more closer to him and stood on his feet..)

RANDHIR-woh yeh button tut gaya ...toh...

SANYU-offo..toh koi aur shirt pehen lo na...change karlo...

RANDHIR-nahi aaj muje yahi pehena hai...tumhara favorite shirt hai na yeh ...

SANYU-ha par...aaj kuch special hai kya?? meri favorite shirt pehenke office jana hai tumhe...

RANDHIR-har pal tumhare saath special hai mere liye sanyu...jab bhi tum mere saath hoti ho...sab kuch aapne aap special ho jata hai...
(randhir said with dreamy smile and kissed her left cheek..followed by a cute peck on her nose...)

SANYU-aww...my cutiee pie...thik hai...aapni shirt do muje mein button laga ke deti hu...

RANDHIR-nahi ...mein nahi dunga..tumhe button lagana hai toh aaise hi lagao...

SANYU-randhir..aaise kaise button lagaungi mein..tumhe shirt to deni padegi na muje...

RANDHIR-no..mein nahi nikalne wala shirt...aur agar tumhe button nahi lagana toh mein aaise hi office aaunga...

SANYU-offo randhir...thik hai...
(she came with thread and needle...and started sewing button of his shirt...)
(randhir very lightly placed his hand on his waist and pulled her towards him...)

SANYU-randhir...kya kar rahe ho...lag jayegi tumhe..chodo muje...


RANDHIR-ummhmm...no...

SANYU-randhir...

RANDHIR-tum chup chap apna kaam karo na...aur muje aapna kaam karne do..

SANYU-tumhara kaam?

RANDHIR-to just keep looking at you...
(sanyu lowered her eyes and continued with her work while randhir was just admiring his beautiful wife...)

SANYU-lo hogaya...
(but randhir was still lost in her...)

SANYU-randhir...
(she pinched his nose...)

RANDHIR-ohh...ho gaya...itni jaldi...

SANYU-sirf button laga na tha randhir...kitni der lagti hai usme...chalo we are getting late now...let me go now randhir...
(she said struggling to come out of his grip...)

RANDHIR-no..

SANYU-randhir please...
(he hold her nape with one hand while with other hand he held her waist very lightly and engrossed themselves in a perfect kiss...)
(sanyukta kept her one hand on his shoulder..while her other hand's finger were playing with his hair...)
(randhir was in naughty mood today...he doesnt want to leave her...soon the kiss turned into a passionate one...randhir pinned her to the wall placing his strong arm on her back so that she doesnt gets hurt...sanyukta clutched is hair into her tiny fist for proper balance...)
(soon they broke the kiss while sanyukta had her eyes still closed...)
(randhir cupped her face and joined there foreheads...)

SANYU-randhir...

RANDHIR-hmm...

SANYU-tum bohot naughty hogaye ho...humara baby kya seekhega tumse...
(she giggled...)

RANDHIR-yahi ki baby ke daddy...baby ke mumma se bohottt pyaar karte hai...i love you sanyukta...
(he said distancing his forehead from hers...)

SANYU-aur baby ki mumma bhi daddy se bohot pyaar karti hai...
(she placed her head on his chest..while randhir hug her and pecked her hair...)

SANYU-randhir..office chale...late hojayenge...
(she said breaking the hug...)

RANDHIR-hmm...chaliye...

(in the factory...)
(sanyukta was busy with some file in her cabin ..soon she received a call from floor...there was some problem with a machine...randhir was not present at that time he was out with some work related to factory)
(in no time she was on floor...and started analyzing the problem..in no time she rectified it and started solving it...)

WORKER-mam aap rehne dijeye hum kar lenge...

SANYU-aare nahi...mein karlungi...muje machines ke saath kaam karna bohot aacha lagta hai...
(she took spanner and started working on machines...)

WORKER-mam ..aap please rehne dijiye...randhir sir aayenge toh hume dantenge...

SANYU-aare nahi..kuch nahi karenge aapke randhir sir...

WORKER-mam please...humari baat maniye...please..rehene dijiye...
(she was doing her work when a sudden pain arose in her stomach...)

SANYU(im)-aauchh...muje suddenly pain kyu hone laga ...
(she kept spanner on table and settle down on a chair...)
(she clutched her stomach with her hands...the pain was increasing...she started sweating...she was suffocating...)
(she stood up and was about to go out to take some fresh air but she collapsed in a strong arms...yes randhir arrived...)

RANDHIR-sanyukta...
(he picked her in his arms and headed towards her cabin...)
(he placed her on couch and sprinkle some water on her face...

RANDHIR-sanyukta...utho...utho...
(he patted her cheeks...)
(slowly she opened her eyes...)

SANYU-ran..randhir...
(she was about to wake up but randhir didnt let her wake up and hug her...)

RANDHIR-sanyukta tum..tum floor par kya kar rahi thi..meine maana kiya tha na...phir kyu gayi tum waha...
(he said breaking the hug...)

SANYU-woh randhir kuch problem...aagayi thi...

RANDHIR-toh mera aane tak wait nahi kar sakti thi tum...kya zarurat thi aaise jaane ki...kuch hojata toh...ha...kyu aaisa karti ho tum...kyu aapna khayal nahi rakhti...
(he said with a little angry voice...)

SANYU-sorry...

RANDHIR-what sorry..subah bhi tumne aaisa kiya...why you do this sanyukta...?
(he said with little moisture in his eyes..)

SANYU-randhir muje...
(she said clutching her stomach tightly...)

RANDHIR-kya hua...ha...sanyukta kyu hua...tum...

SANYU-randhir...pain ..pain horaha hai...
(she said with tears in her eyes and placing her one hand on his shoulder as it was unbearable for her...)

RANDHIR-what...come on lets go to the doctor...
(he lifted her ..placed her in car and ran his car straight to hospital...)
(after some time...doctor was done examining her ...and sanyukta with help of nurse came out with doctor...)

RANDHIR-doctor..what happened...??
(he stood up and very carefully made sanyukta sit on chair...)

DOCTOR-today her first month got completed right...nothing to worry mr shekhawat...she is fine...its normal pain...jo kabhi kabhi hota hai ...nothing to worry about...
(doctor said with assuring smile..)

SANYU-doctor...sach main koi problem nahi hai na...baby...baby toh thik hai na...

DOCTOR-yes sanyukta...ofc..baby is fit and fine..dont worry...

RANDHIR-thank you doctor..we take your leave now...

SANYU-thanks doctor...
(with these they left hospital...and were on the way to home...)

SANYU-hum ghar ja rahe hai??

RANDHIR-hmm...
(he said without looking at her...)

SANYU-kyu??

RANDHIR-what...???
(randhir halted the car ...)

RANDHIR-itna sab kuch hogaya phir bhi tumhe factory jana hai...no...hum ghar jayenge...you have to take rest...

SANYU-randhir i m fine..doctor ne kaha na ki its just normal pain...aur aab toh muje pain bhi nahi horaha ...

RANDHIR-toh phirse pain hone ka intezaar karna hai...ek din rest karogi toh kuch bigad nahi jaane wala...bas aab alteast for two days no office...

SANYU-offo randhir tum samajte kyu nahi...

RANDHIR-tum kyu nahi samajti ...

RANDHIR-randhir you are now overeacting...aaisa toh kuch na kuch every month hota rahega...kabhi pain ..kabhi kuch aur..toh kya meine aaisa do teen din ki chutti lekar rest kiya karu ghar pe...no ...bohot rest le liya meine...aur tum toh aaise bolte ho jaise mein khud ka khayal hi nahi rakhti...sirf tum akele rakhte ho...ofc mein maa hu baby ki...muje bhi uski parwah hai...i think you are just overreacting...itna sa kuch hota hai toh tum hyper hojate ho...humesha aapne strict rules muje follow karvate ho...sanyukta yeh maat karo ...sanyukta woh mat karo...randhir i m not dumb...muje samaj aata hai ...mein aapna khayal khud rakh sakti hu...
(she was blabbering all these while randhir was just looking at her blankly...)
(she looked into his eyes and a sudden realization struck her mind...shit what just she said...she hurted him ...he was hurt by her words...his eyes were telling that he is hurt ...what just she spoke...he is overreacting...his care ..his concern...all these is his overreacting...)

SANYU-randhir..i didnt mean that...i m sorry

RANDHIR-yes...sahi kaha tumne...i m overreacting...haath dhooke tumhare peech pad jata hu na...sanyukta khana khao...sanyukta dawai lo..sanyukta yeh karo...sanyukta woh mat karo...sorry...i just overreacted...i was binding you with all these...humesha tumhe rokta hu ..yeh maat karo sanyu...woh maat karo...aapna khayal rakha karo...hain na...aapne strict rules se meine tumhare liye problems kar di hai na...

SANYU-no randhir...aaisa nahi hai...suno please...
(she said sobbing...)

RANDHIR-muje jo sunna tha meine sun liya...i m overreacting...sorry...now you are all free...free like a bird...tumhare jo dil mein aata hai...tum woh kar sakti ho...meine tumhe nahi rokunga...
(with these he wiped his tears and started his car..took a u turn and headed towards factory...)

SANYU-randhir please...i m sorry...mein ...mein nahi kehna chahti thi yeh sab...

RANDHIR-insan ke dil mein jo hota hai na...wahi uske zuban par aata hai...muje laga ki mein tumhe jaanta hu...tumhare dil mein kya hai...muje samaj aata hai...par no...i was wrong...muje toh pata his nahi ki tumhe yeh sab aacha nahi lagta...

SANYU-randhir...no...
(she broke down into tears...)
(he parked the car...and straight away went inside ..while sanyukta was expecting him to open her side of the door...but no he didnt..coz of ill words she uttered few minutes ago...)
(he went inside his cabin...and bang his fist on the table...)
(he was angry as well as upset...tears took place into his eyes..his blood red eyes...but he composed himself...and engrossed himself in work...)
(in some time sanyukta entered his cabin...)

SANYU-randhir...
(she called out his name standing at the door of his cabin...)
(but he didnt responded ...he dipped his face more into his file just to convey her that he is too busy...)
(she wiped her tears and entered inside...)

SANYU-muje pata hai...tum kuch busy nahi ho...randhir please...meri taraf dekho toh sahi...
(but still he didnt responded...he was somehow controlling his tears...)

SANYU-randhirrr...
(she gave up and turned and went to her cabin...)
(at night...)
(sanyukta was sitting on bed..waiting for him to come with her medicines..she was sure he will come and then she would make up with him...)
(he came inside with tray...she beamed ...)

SANYU(im)-muje pata tha randhir..tum..zarur aaoge...mujse bohot der tak naraz nahi reh sakte tum...

RANDHIR-yeh lo...take your medicines...
(he kept the tray in front of her and went outside room...while sanyukta was expecting ..that he will sit in front of her...and will say ...BAACHA CHALO TAKE MEDICINES...and as usual she will make faces...he will anyhow compel her to take medicines...and after that he will say THATS LIKE MY GOOD BAACHA...but nothing like this happened today...sanyukta got the know the importance of his care , his concern , his love...and today she hurt him ..hurt the person who loves her the most...the person whose day start with her and ends with her...the person who cant imagine living without her...the person who consider her as his life...the person who cares for her more than anyone else in this world...)
(she quitely took her medicines...and some drops of saline water appeared into her eyes...she wipped her eyes...and caress her belly...)
(while randhir was looking at her hiding behind the door...)
(after some time...she came out of room and went to kitchen to have some water...she found him siting on sofa with his laptop on his lap ...and totally lost in his work...)
(she went to him...)

SANYU-randhirrr...

RANDHIR-hmm...
(he said looking at the laptop screen...)

SANYU-i m sorry...muje woh sab nahi kehna chaiye tha...i m really sorry...

RANDHIR-sanyukta bohot late hogaya hai...please jake soo jao...

SANYU-randhir please..dont do this to me...

RANDHIR-mein kya kar raha hu...you are free to take your decisions...i m not forcing you on anything...
(he replied sternly...hurting sanyukta more...)

SANYU-tum bhi chalo na so ne...muje aur baby ko tumare bina neend nahi aati...

RANDHIR-muje thoda kaam hai...muje der lagegi...
(saying it again without latching his eyes with hers..)
(she was sad...she turned and went to their room...)
(after almost two hours randhir tip toed to their room and found her sleeping...)
(he settled beside her...covered her with duvet...)
(he switch off the lights and lay beside her and as usual kept his palm on her belly...and called it a night...)
(randhir was fast asleep when sanyukta opened her eyes...she felt his palm on her belly ...she smiled sadly and placed her palm on his...)

SANYU(im)-randhir..mein tumhe hurt nahi karna chahti thi...i swear...i m sorry...
(she closed her eyes and slept...)
(next morning...)
(sanyukta opened her eyes ...)
(she found randhir packing his bag...)

SANYU-randhir...kaha ja rahe ho tum...

RANDHIR-mein 3 days ke liye banglore ja raha hu...

SANYU-kyu...aaise suddenly...

RANDHIR-woh..mr gupta ke saath meeting hai waha..aur kuch factory related kaam bhi...

SANYU-muje bataya bhi nahi...

RANDHIR-ohh sorry...kal mein bhul gaya batana...meeting kal hi fix hui lekin tum so gayi thi...isiliye tumhe batane ke liye uthaya nahi...aur factory ke kaam se...

SANYU-randhir...i m not asking about the work or meeting...i mean tum banglore ja rahe ho...muje pehle kyu nahi bataya...

RANDHIR-ohh...i thought ki tum meeting ke baare mein ...

SANYU-stop it randhir please...kyu kar rahe ho aaisa...why you behaving like this with me...
(she said getting up from bed..)

RANDHIR-dekho sanyukta...

SANYU-no...tum kahi nahi ja rahe ho muje chod ke...
(she hug him tightly...)

RANDHIR-sanyukta...please..let me go...

SANYU-nahi please...mat jao na...

RANDHIR-i have to go sanyukta...
(she broke the hug and look deep inside his eyes...)

SANYU-toh tum aaise muje punish karoge ha...

RANDHIR-mein kon tumhe punish karne wala...

SANYU-randhir please...dont say like this...please mat jao ...mere dil nahi maan raha...please...i love you...

RANDHIR-sanyukta i m getting late...aur sirf 3 din ki baat hai...i know you will manage...aur ha ..mein aman ko sab samaja diya hai..tumhe koi bhi query ho usse puch lena...aur jab office jaogi toh take the car and go...car thik se chalana...slow chalana...
(he said stuffing his laptop into his bag...while sanyukta was looking at him with hope...he will not go...her heart doesnt want him to go...something wrong is gonna happen...)

SANYU-randhir...muje darr lag raha hai...
(she said holding his wrist...and making him face her...)

RANDHIR-kis baat ka...

SANYU-pata nai..but...please dont go...

RANDHIR-sanyukta...tumhi kehte ho na work comes first...then...dont worry i'll be back soon...

SANYU-randhirrr...

RANDHIR-ok...mein chalta hu...see you soon...aapna khayal rakhna...aur...aur...khana thik se...khana...and ..take medicines...
(he said looking at her for the first time after the previous day incident...)
(she ran and hug him tightly hiding her face deep into his neck...)
(he to hug her...placing his hand on her back...)

SANYU-randhir please jaldi vapas aana...i'll miss you...come soon...tumhare bina nahi reh paungi mein...jaldi aana...aur aapna khayal rakhna...take care...i love you...
(she said crying hardly making his collar of shirt wet...)
(he rubbed his palm on her back..consoling her...)

RANDHIR-i'll be back soon sanyukta...dont worry...you take care of yourself and baby...bye...lo-love love you...
(she hug him more tightly...)

RANDHIR-sanyukta...please let me go ...cab aagayi hogi ...
(she broke the hug...)
(he made his way to the main door...and turned back to have a view of her...)
(his heart ached seeing her crying...her messy state...her wet eyes...her red nose...)

RANDHIR-bye...

SANYU-bye...

(and randhir left for banglore...)
(while sanyukta was all alone in mumbai...)

PRECAP : sandhir missing each other😭...and boom...dhamaka...😲


so end of part 47
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Posted: 10 years ago
The update was as usual awesome!!
n this one was really special n touching😭
omg !! He cares for her but wat did she say ?? 😭
n rd going away😲😭
fabulously penned👏 emotional as well!!!
cant wait for d nxt update!!!
plzzz update soony.. i request u!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
PART 48
(sanyukta closed the door...and sat on sofa holding a soft cushion in her hand...she wasnt crying now...she was lost somewhere...she was feeling restless...there was no randhir in her sight..the whole house was silent...no giggles...no randhir's voice audible...nothing..)

Kyun na bole mo se mohan kyun
Hai roothe roothe mohan yun
Kaise manaaun haai kaise manaau

.she is alone today...for the first time after there marriage...she is alone...these loneliness was killing her up...the empty house was eating her up...tears made there way to her eyes...she wiped her tears and lovingly caress her belly...)

Kyun na bole mo se mohan kyun
Hai roothe roothe mohan yun
Kaise manaaun haai kaise manaau

SANYU-baby...aap mumma ko sun rahe ho na...ha...dont worry ..papa jaldi aajeyenge..hai na...aap ho na mumma ke saath...ha...papa aajayenge...woh aapse aur aapki mumma se bohot dino tak dur nahi reh sakte...he loves you and mumma alot..

Un binn kate naa raina
Unn binn aawe na ik pal chaina
Unn bin jeeun tto kaise main jeeu'n haay..

(she said crying harder...dont know why she is crying today...her heart were giving her some wrong negative vibes...she was talking to her baby for the first time..but actually she was convincing herself...)

Bahe naina Bhare morey Naina
Jhare morey naina
Mohe naina sune naahi kehna, bahe morey naina

Bahe naina Bhare morey Naina
Jhare morey naina
Mohe naina sune naahi kehna, bahe morey naina


(she somehow composed herself ...got freshen up and made some thing to eat for her...she doesnt want to have anything but if randhir got to know these ...then he will hate this...he will not like it...so she decided to make roti and randhir's favorite sabzi for her...)
(she was in no mood of going office today...she cooked food for her and called aman ...she informed him about her absence today in office and to handle everything for today...)
(it was 12 noon...)
(she was waiting for randhir's call)

SANYU-randhir ka call kyu nahi aaya aab tak...?should i call him...yes...

Haan Naino ke dwaare aane ke waade baandhe
Aise bolo kaaahe
Chokhat pe dil ki aahat rakhi hai taako pe hai torey saay


(with these she took her phone which was lying on center table and dialed his number...but it was switch off...she tried 5 times but the lady utter the same thing..switch off...)

Unn binn unhe manaye
Unn bin kabhi jo unko rijhaaye
Unn bin chhale hai mora ye jiya


(she settled down on sofa...waiting for his call ..it was 1.30...she was hungry now...)

SANYU-sayad flight late hogi...ha ..isiliye randhir ka phone switch off aaraha hai...i m sure jaise hi woh land karega ..muje zarur call karega...i know...mujse itni der naraaz nahi reh sakta randhir i know...uska gussa temporary hota hai...woh ..woh mujse aab tak naraz nahi reh sakta...hain na...randhir...

Bahe naina Bhare morey Naina
Jhare morey naina
Mohe naina sune naahi kehna, bahe morey naina

Bahe naina Bhare morey Naina
Jhare morey naina
Mohe naina sune naahi kehna, bahe morey naina



(she stood up and went inside kitchen for lunch...)
(she took a plate in her hand...served herself with roti and sabzi and came to living area...and settled down on sofa...)

Haan
Komal badi hai saansan ki dori
Roothe se bhi toot jaaye
Baawan tarah se jee ko manaaya
Khoje ajaunh tori raahe

(she took a morsel of food and hold it in front of her mouth...but she was not able to eat...flashes of randhir making her eat food came in front of her...she smiled and put the morsel in her mouth...)

Unn bin unhe main paaun
Unn bin unhe main garwa lagaaun
Unn bin unhe mora jee lage haay...



(she ate her food...and took her medicines too...)
(she again settled down on sofa and switched on the tv...she was surfing channels.but acutally waiting for his call...)
(she was now getting tensed and restless...why didnt he called her till now...is he ok...he is fine...she switched off the tv...and a lone tear appear in her eyes...)

Bahe naina Bhare morey Naina
Jhare morey naina
Mohe naina sune naahi kehna, bahe morey naina


(she placed her palm on her belly...)

Bahe naina Bhare morey Naina
Jhare morey naina
Mohe naina sune naahi kehna, bahe morey naina




SANYU-dekho na baby...papa ne aabhi tak call nahi kiya...aab toh mumma ne khana bhi khaya..medicines bhi li...phir bhi...
(there was a phote frame of them on the corner table...)
(she took the frame in her hand...it was a very cute and lovely picture of them...she touched the frame specially on randhir's picture...)

Bahe naina Bhare morey Naina
Jhare morey naina
Mohe naina sune naahi kehna, bahe morey naina

SANYU-dekho randhir...mein aapna thik se khayal rakh rahi hu...meine khana bhi khaya aur dawai bhi li..aur...aur mein aaj office bhi nahi gayi...rest kar rahi hu ghar pe...

(soon she heard her phone ringing...she took it and smiled as it was randhir's call...)

SANYU-hello..
(she said with a relief in her voice...)

RANDHIR-hello...i landed safely...flight late thi..aur phone switch off tha...aabhi dekhe tumhare miss calls...

SANYU-its ok...tum thik ho na...how was your journey...?

RANDHIR-ha mein thik hu...how are you? you fine...??office nahi gayi?

SANYU-ha mein thik hu aab...ghar par hi hu...rest kar rahi hu...office jane ka maan nahi tha..aur.meine khana kha liya..pata tumhari favorite sabzi banayi thi...aapni medicines bhi thik se le li...
(she said in one go...)

RANDHIR-good...
(randhir smiled ...)

SANYU-randhir...

RANDHIR-hmm...

SANYU-i miss you so much...jaldi vapas aao na...

RANDHIR-miss you too sanyukta...i'll try my best to come soon...

SANYU-ok...me and baby are waiting...

RANDHIR-howz my baby?

SANYU-thik hai..bohot miss kar raha hai tumhe...mujse puch raha hai ...papa kab aayenge...
(she broke into a sad smile...)

RANDHIR-jaldi...

SANYU-hmm...

RANDHIR-ok sanyu..i talk to you later...aur raat ko shanti aunty ko aapne saath bula lena...akele maat sona...thik hai...

SANYU-hmmm...

RANDHIR-bye ...take care...love you...i'll call you at night...

SANYU-ok..waiting...bye love you...
(convo ended...)
(sanyukta took a breathe of relief..)

SANYU-baby..papa ka call aagaya...mein kaha tha aapse...papa aapse aur mumma se bohot pyaar karte hai..woh zarur call karenge...
(the day went like this...sanyukta took a nap for some time...read books..watched tv...talk with her mom...somehow her day passed...)
(it was 8 in evening...)
(sanyukta was preparing pasta for her...she made it the same way randhir likes it...soon she ate her dinner...and settled down on sofa...)
(she informed shanti aunty about randhir's trip..and aunty agreed to stay back with sanyukta at night...)
(on the other side...randhir opened the door of his hotel room..and threw himself on bed...he was hell tired...the long hectic day it was...he was tired as well as hungry too...)
(he order for pasta to the room service and went to get freshen up...)
(after some time his pasta arrived...he ate it...and lay down on bed...and dialed sanyukta's number...it was 9.45 pm...)
(sanyukta was waiting for his call...)
(she was playing with the flip cover of her phone..desperately waiting for his call...soon the cell phone vibrated with randhir flashing on the touch screen...)

RANDHIR-hello baacha...
(sanyukta smiled...finally he called her baacha...what a relief...she closed her eyes...)

RANDHIR-hello...sanyu...are you there?

SANYU-ha...ha..bolo

RANDHIR-kaha kho gayi thi...

SANYU-nahi bas...kaise ho?

RANDHIR-thik hu...what about you?dinner kiya..dawai li...

SANYU-ha dinner bhi kar liya aur dawai bhi le li...

RANDHIR-kya khaya dinner mein aaj?

SANYU-pasta.aur tumne?

RANDHIR-same pasta...
(and both of them laughed..what a telepathy they have...)

RANDHIR-par why pasta sanyu...kuch aur kha leti...

SANYU-aaj muje pasta khane ka bohot maan tha...isliye

RANDHIR-ok...kya kar rahi thi?

SANYU-bas kuch khas nahi..tumhare call ka wait kar rahi thi...

RANDHIR-hmm...and shanti aunty ko bulaya na ...

SANYU-ha bula diya...woh thodi der mein aajayengi...

RANDHIR-ok...

SANYU-randhir...

RANDHIR-hmm...

SANYU-tum aab tak mujse naraz ho kya?

RANDHIR-nahi...
(he smiled...and sanyukta closed her eyes..)

SANYU-pakka...

RANDHIR-ha pakka...nahi hu tumse naraz..tumhe pata toh hai..mein zyada der tak tumse naraz nahi reh sakta...tumse baat kiya bina nahi reh sakta...

SANYU-hmm...once again sorry randhir...muje

RANDHIR-bas aab...its ok...

SANYU-randhir...tumhari bohot yaad aarahi hai...jaldi aao na...

RANDHIR-sanyukta...tell me one thing...you are alright na? tum mujse baar baar jaldi aane ko kyu keh rahi ho...subah bhi muje jane nahi de rahi thi...kya hua hai..you not feeling well...pain ho raha hai kya tumhe...ha baacha tell me...

SANYU-nahi randhir aaisa kuch nahi hai trust me...mein bilkul thik hu...woh toh muje pata nahi kuch ajeeb lag raha hai...darr lag raha hai...maan ghabra raha hai mera...i dont know why i m feeling restless...but aab thik hu..sayad tum mujse naraz the na isiliye...now i m fine ..relax...dont worry...
(she smiled..)

RANDHIR-ok..aab tum so jao...ek dum shanti se...kuch nahi hoga sab thik hai..mein bhi thik hu yaha...tum bas aachese so jao..aur koi bhi gande khayal aapne maan mein mat lao...baby ke baare mein socho..you will feel good...thik hai...good night...take care..i love you...

SANYU-love you to randhir...good night take care...
(convo ended...)
(sanyukta heard the door bell and she opened..shanti aunty was there at the door ...both the ladies slept peacefully...)

(on the other side...)
(randhir took his wallet and opened it...there was cute picture of sanyukta in his wallet...)
(he caress her picture...)

RANDHIR-i miss you so much sanyukta...ek bhi din tumhare bina nahi reh sakta...aur baby...woh toh aabhi iss duniya mein aaya bhi nahi hai...aabhi se aapni aadat laga chuka hai humara baby...
i know sanyukta..tum muje hurt nahi karna chahti thi...i know you...tum muje kabhi hurt nahi kar sakti...ha kabhi kabhi tum kuch bhi bol deti ho par tumhare dil mein kuch nahi hota...tumhara dil bilkul saaf hai..aur yahi baat muje aachi lagti hai tum mein...i love you sanyukta...tumse zyada der tak naraaz reh bhi nahi sakta...nahi hi tumare bina reh sakta hu...i love you...
(he kept the wallet open near his heart..as sanyukta's picture touching his heart...and slept...)

(next morning...sanyukta was getting ready for office...)
(randhir's call on her cell phone...)

SANYU-hey randhir...good morning...

RANDHIR-good morning...baacha

SANYU-kya kar rahe ho ?

RANDHIR-bas getting ready...aur tum

SANYU-mein office ke liye nikal rahi hu...

RANDHIR-ok ...drive safely ok..

SANYU-aare nahi mein cab se ja rahi hu...so dont worry...

RANDHIR-ok...thats good...

SANYU-hmm...

RANDHIR-ok then..catch you later...bye .take care...bye love you...

SANYU-take care love you...
(she settled in cab and headed towards office...)

(on the other side...)

RANDHIR-sanyu...i m coming back ...evening 8 pm...surprise...thanks mera kaam yaha jaldi khatam hogaya...
(with these he too got himself busy in work...and desperately waiting for evening to crept in to meet his life and his soul...)
(the whole day was like this...)
(randhir was finally on airport...his flight was on right time...till 8 he will be in arms of his sanyukta...)
(the journey was as usual boring...randhir was going mad in excitement...as if he is gonna meet sanyukta after ages...)
(after few hours his flight landed on airport...and he was standing outside airport for a cab...but no cab was seen ...)

RANDHIR-yeh kya aaj cab walo ki strike hai kya...chod randhir..taxi pakad le...
(he called for taxi and after lot of efforts finally he hire one taxi...)

RANDHIR to taxi driver-aare aaj kya sabki strike hai kya...aur yeh raste kyu itne khali khali hai...aaj mumbai ko ho kya gaya...aur aap iss wale raste se kyu le rahe hai ...yeh toh long cut hai na...

TAXI DRIVER-sahabji aapko nahi pata kya...

RANDHIR-kya...

TAXI DRIVER-aare mumbai mein do bamb dhamake hue..aabhi 2 gante pehle...ek woh king's circle ke waha aur ke park street ke waha...isiliye curfew lag gaya hai sab jagaha...aur yahi ek rasta hai jo khula hai...baki sab par police ne curfew laga diya hai...

RANDHIR-what????park street...
(randhir shouted...he was not able to register anything...)

TAXI DRIVER-ji sahabji...

RANDHIR-sanyukta...
(randhir's senses came to a hault...he lost his breathes...his heart was running a marathon race...)
(is she fine...is she safe...coz its the same area from sanyukta will hire a cab for her for getting back home..and bomb blast before 2 hours that means pick traffic hours and office closing time...means the same time ...sanyukta must have left office...)

PRECAP : randhir searching for sanyukta...😭 but no clue...is she fine...or...😭


so end of part 48
hope you all like it
do share your views
with loads of love
MANALI
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Posted: 10 years ago
oh my god...yeh kya ho gya...and cliffhanger...oh my god ab neend kaise aayegi
ek to mera comment post hi nahi ho rha...oh my god it was so good...last update ka maine pm kiya tumhe

yeh update to super se bhi upar awesome tha...

aage kya hoga????


i am so tensed...

awesome writing yaar...really awesome...

you are one gifted writer

sorry thda zyada excited ho gyi update padhke
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Posted: 10 years ago
ITNA SANNATA KYU HAI BHAI...
ONLY 4 LIKES AND 2 COMMENTS ON PART 47
AND ONE COMMENT ONE LIKE ON PART 48



KAHE AAISAN KARAT HO...KI HUA...PARTVA PASAND NAHI AAVAT KA...BAATAIDIYO...


LOL😆 MY BHOJPURI...😆

AAISAN NA KARO...COMMENTVA KARAT RAHO AND LIKEVA MARAT RAHO...

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Posted: 10 years ago
amaaazing update., love this story a lot and loved how randhir forgave her after all they both love each other so much...hope that sanyukta and baby both will be fine...plz update the next part soon...😊
Love😛😊
Lakshita😳⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow!!! Cliff hanger ...luving dis story ... Nxt upd8 jldi plzz ...cnt wait to read wht happens nxt..
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Posted: 10 years ago
First of all a big wala sorry for such a late


So as to compensate I will cmmnt on both the parts separately


Cmmnt on part first


The update was superb as alwz


Sandhir so happy together
Both r so excited for the baby


Sanyu r uska machine se pyaar
She's so passionate for it



Rd so worried for her
He cnt see her in pain


Bt sanyu got little irritated
Rd got hurt
Sanyu so guilty trying to manofy him bt this tym he's very hurt

Avoiding sanyu
Sanyu so broken
Missing his care concern n love


Rd leaving for Bangalore
Sanyu having negative vibe she don't want him to go


All in all mind blowing update
Loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Cmnnt for next update


Awww sanyu missing rd so much
Rd too feeling restless without her


Sajyu doing all things which rd used to do for her
Taking care of her

Taking to baby
That scene was so cute



Sanyu was right rd cnt stay angry with her
Finally he's okay
Both r so happy


Rd planning to surprise sanyu
He's so excited to meet her


Bt yeh kya naya twist
Bomb blast
Rd so wrried for her
He's dying



Cliffhanger


Cnt wait
Update soon


Love u
Keep smiling

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