ARSHI/OS..~A Night To Remember~ .. - Page 11

Originally posted by: akai

Nice os dear

Originally posted by: Bista-anzana

soo amazing..
In a flip moment dere was very fellings.
Feelings of Betray, Hate ,Love, Trust, concern.
Sum up Outstanding OS..

Originally posted by: mahirmukhtar

Wow that was one intense ride yaar! Your words have a deep touching intensity and the flow of character's emotions is quite gripping! 👏👏 Each and every scenario is sketched so beautifully that i felt as if it was happening infront of my eyes! Many writers miss on that intensity but i must say gal that you have it in abundance in your writing! ⭐️⭐️

Thank you dear😊 glad u felt it that way

Coming towards your OS "A night to remember". It certainly was a night to remember first as a bad memory in Khushi's mind, where she didn't want to forgive him then as a good memory where he showed her his caring and loving side by taking her to the hospital! 😳

nafrtat paas ane na de

mohabbat door jane na de

The most important thing that i loved about your writing was the female lead's mental strength, she didn't bow, didn't break as he snarled and showed her his hate, not even when he married her and not even when she knew that it had all along a game, a revenge plan for him.

She knew whatever he is saying or doing is unbearable for him too and she was so right...

Loved Anjali's dilaogue, what a strength packed scenario! And also the dialogue uttered by Khushi in the hospital when she said that he was going when he had said that he won't leave her that deeply touched my heart! 😳 I am going to read all of your stories slowly and steadily, (just bear with my donkey cart speed yaar! 😆😉) and will also comment on them, long ones i promise! 😉

Originally posted by: Dhrenu

Fab shot

Originally posted by: PhoenixKhushi

Oh, I loved it so much!!! It's got a great flow... A dream like quality.. Yet rooted in reality...

Awesome!!

👏

Originally posted by: neha_shah

Lovely os

Originally posted by: meeti12

Superb