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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: khyr00n
awesome os

Thnx khyr00n😊

glad u liked it

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: salooni
loved the story di
beautiful

wow salooni, seems like u r free for sometime,

thnx for reading and commenting dear.

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: jasbin
lovely

Thnx jasbin😊

Edited by .ArshiHamesha. - 10 years ago

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sushmitasahu

@sushmitasahu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Wonderful OS

Loved it

U have an amazing way of writing

Keep going

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sushmitasahu

@sushmitasahu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#95

Wonderful OS

Loved it

Ur way of writing is amazing

Keep it up

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Arshi diwanee

@Panther007

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Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Dat was amazing...while reading it..its reminds me the best ever dialouge of khushi from ipk...

'Kuch rishte ajeeb hee dor mein bandhe hote hain...Takrar se shuru hote hain , nafrat ke saaye mein panapte hain..Girte hain, padte hain , par kaayam rahte hain.

Nafrat badhti jaati hai aur rishte ki gaanth aur gehri hoti jaati hai..Itni ki ek din nafrat bhi aur badhne se sharma jati hai , aur woh rishta sirf ek bandhan ban ke rah jaata hai.

Lekin sirf nafrat waala!!!

Kabhi kabhi aisa lagta hai jaise nafrat ke us maahol mein kuchh to hai Jo humse kehta hai ki is un sune, anjaane se, un kahe se ehsaas ko ek mauka to do... Par jis rishte ki neenv hi nafrat pe rakhi gayi ho, usse kuch bhi ummeed lagana Naadani nahi to aur kya hoga?

Aur shayad yeh naadaani hum kar baithe hain Warna kyun itni nafrat ke baawjood humein aapki yaad aa rahi hai? Kyun hum aapse ladte hain, jhagadte hain lekin aapke jaane ke baad aap hi ki raah dekhte hain Hawaaon se aapki baatein karte hain?

Jst feel to share it here...😃😃

Lovely ending with arshi forever..loved it

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: latersbaby.
Dat was amazing...while reading it..its reminds me the best ever dialouge of khushi from ipk...
'Kuch rishte ajeeb hee dor mein bandhe hote hain...Takrar se shuru hote hain , nafrat ke saaye mein panapte hain..Girte hain, padte hain , par kaayam rahte hain.

Nafrat badhti jaati hai aur rishte ki gaanth aur gehri hoti jaati hai..Itni ki ek din nafrat bhi aur badhne se sharma jati hai , aur woh rishta sirf ek bandhan ban ke rah jaata hai.
Lekin sirf nafrat waala!!!

Kabhi kabhi aisa lagta hai jaise nafrat ke us maahol mein kuchh to hai Jo humse kehta hai ki is un sune, anjaane se, un kahe se ehsaas ko ek mauka to do... Par jis rishte ki neenv hi nafrat pe rakhi gayi ho, usse kuch bhi ummeed lagana Naadani nahi to aur kya hoga?
Aur shayad yeh naadaani hum kar baithe hain Warna kyun itni nafrat ke baawjood humein aapki yaad aa rahi hai? Kyun hum aapse ladte hain, jhagadte hain lekin aapke jaane ke baad aap hi ki raah dekhte hain Hawaaon se aapki baatein karte hain?

Jst feel to share it here...😃😃
Lovely ending with arshi forever..loved it

latersbaby😊 ❤️

These dialogues of hers are the message of her soul to him.Gives us peek into her soul that how much she has been loving him but all this time whatever revenge and all she was doing to be away from him had no meaning.After this she never teased him up to this level and he was allowing her to do whatever , never complained either .Both were connected and bonded so strongand still calling this relationship as hate there comes the Tagline

Nafrat paas ane na de

after she finds him

it changes to

mihabat door jane na de only in between them

now teh time was this society and their nafrat because of Rasams and customs and their nafrat but their mohabat never goes down

Thnx dear

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: sushmitasahu
Wonderful OS
Loved it
U have an amazing way of writing
Keep going

Thnx Sushmta😊

Glad you liked it dear.It is a nice feeling to know how do readers perceive the very same piece of writing and come forward to show the appreciation.😊

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anzana

@Bista-anzana

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Posted: 10 years ago

#99

soo amazing..
In a flip moment dere was very fellings.
Feelings of Betray, Hate ,Love, Trust, concern.
Sum up Outstanding OS..

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Tooba Mahir Mukhtar

@mahirmukhtar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#100

Wow that was one intense ride yaar! Your words have a deep touching intensity and the flow of character's emotions is quite gripping! 👏👏 Each and every scenario is sketched so beautifully that i felt as if it was happening infront of my eyes! Many writers miss on that intensity but i must say gal that you have it in abundance in your writing! ⭐️⭐️

Coming towards your OS "A night to remember". It certainly was a night to remember first as a bad memory in Khushi's mind, where she didn't want to forgive him then as a good memory where he showed her his caring and loving side by taking her to the hospital! 😳

The most important thing that i loved about your writing was the female lead's mental strength, she didn't bow, didn't break as he snarled and showed her his hate, not even when he married her and not even when she knew that it had all along a game, a revenge plan for him.

Loved Anjali's dilaogue, what a strength packed scenario! And also the dialogue uttered by Khushi in the hospital when she said that he was going when he had said that he won't leave her that deeply touched my heart! 😳 I am going to read all of your stories slowly and steadily, (just bear with my donkey cart speed yaar! 😆😉) and will also comment on them, long ones i promise! 😉

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