ARSHI/OS..~A Night To Remember~ .. - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: DurgaS

This one I liked. 😳 From temple to cliff top, in one night, wah! What I liked is everything happened in front of all, no secrets hidden, no bojh on the heart, whew. Anjali gives a thappad to Arnav and chooses Khushi, this should have been there on the show.

Enjoyed this shot Faiqa. Thanks. 😊


Chalo Kuch to hai jo acha hai...😆

Again Thnx for taking time ...


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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
wowww..well written👏...that night is perfect...sab kuch ek saat huyi😳...:i know u wll come back,but i dont want to b with you"...uff well done khushi👏..kya sentence hai...thank you😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: ChocolateArshi

wowww..well written👏...that night is perfect...sab kuch ek saat huyi😳...:i know u wll come back,but i dont want to b with you"...uff well done khushi👏..kya sentence hai...thank you😛



Thnx Chocolate😊

Glad you liked it...especially Khushi's POV
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
Very emotional...😭 Liked the way u said ASR's emotion after Khushi left n jumped off the cliff..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Awesome... Story...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: ..BlackSwan..

Very emotional...😭 Liked the way u said ASR's emotion after Khushi left n jumped off the cliff..


Thnx Titili😊

Glad you liked the display of emotions by Arnav seeing Khushi's hand slipping through his.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: Linsie

Very emotional OS...


Thnx Linsie😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: mit0905

Awesome... Story...👏


mit0905😊

Thank you
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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
unres 😳

that was so painful 😭 .. khushi went through so much .. heart break .. betrayal .. emotional trauma .. and what not .. i liked that she stopped Garima from pleading before arnav .. and good that she left him than ..
you write beautifully and quite poetically ..
I am disappointed with this Arnav FD .. 😡 ... He went back to khushi only after knowing that she was not Garima s daughter .. 😡 ..before that he didn't realize that he loves her .. ? .. khushi should not have forgiven him so easily ..

but i guess it was an OS so .. i will also prefer a happy ending 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: Dr.AALUSLOLWA

unres 😳

that was so painful 😭 .. khushi went through so much .. heart break .. betrayal .. emotional trauma .. and what not .. i liked that she stopped Garima from pleading before arnav .. and good that she left him than ..
you write beautifully and quite poetically ..
I am disappointed with this Arnav FD .. 😡 ... He went back to khushi only after knowing that she was not Garima s daughter .. 😡 ..before that he didn't realize that he loves her .. ? .. khushi should not have forgiven him so easily ..

but i guess it was an OS so .. i will also prefer a happy ending 😳


LOLwa😊

Thnx for reading and commenting and taking time , really appreciate that😊

OK in red , I wrote it while he was sitting in the car , he was hurting more than her yet just like in the show he didn't pay heed to anything and married in the temple...and in the middle of the road he broke the glass of that trust nd love without listening to her and even after listening to her...that is teh Arnav I showed in this OS...it was not SS or FF or even TS...just OS...

but that was my thing...because I was angry at him at those moments when he was so unfair and harsh on her in the show.

I wrote another scenario of this version ...

the link is here

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