Originally posted by: Dr.AALUSLOLWA
unres 😳
that was so painful 😭 .. khushi went through so much .. heart break .. betrayal .. emotional trauma .. and what not .. i liked that she stopped Garima from pleading before arnav .. and good that she left him than ..
you write beautifully and quite poetically ..
I am disappointed with this Arnav FD .. 😡 ... He went back to khushi only after knowing that she was not Garima s daughter .. 😡 ..before that he didn't realize that he loves her .. ? .. khushi should not have forgiven him so easily ..
but i guess it was an OS so .. i will also prefer a happy ending 😳
LOLwa😊
Thnx for reading and commenting and taking time , really appreciate that😊
OK in red , I wrote it while he was sitting in the car , he was hurting more than her yet just like in the show he didn't pay heed to anything and married in the temple...and in the middle of the road he broke the glass of that trust nd love without listening to her and even after listening to her...that is teh Arnav I showed in this OS...it was not SS or FF or even TS...just OS...
but that was my thing...because I was angry at him at those moments when he was so unfair and harsh on her in the show.
I wrote another scenario of this version ...
the link is here
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