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soppy

@soppy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

Hey can I have the blog link please ?

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SS88

@SS88

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Posted: 10 years ago

#122

That was extremely disturbing. Poor Khushi . No one's childhood should be that traumatic. And I'm not even talking about the horrific rape. It's as if life is throwing all of its ugliness on this poor child. I hope she somehow manages to escape this hell. And soon.

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PriyaUk

@PriyaUk

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Posted: 10 years ago

#123

Oh ... No one !! No one !!!
No child should deserve this type of childhood.
My heart cried ( and disturbing too ) for the child (khushi )who went through all the ugliness in her life which is very very horrible .

Still that pour soul dreamt for her father who will take her away from the hell .
And to last she herself became the victim.
Tears came when reading it.
Very very heart wrenching chapter.
After all that khushi has became very strong to face the world.
Hope in future she gets all the love that she missed in her early years.
Thank for the pm.
Got the link.
Will be waiting for next update.

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ship13

@ship13

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#124

Prologue sounds really interesting. Would love to read this story. I will send you a PMS with my email I'd. Please add me to your mailing list. Thank you so much. 😳

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bhagyathara

@bhagyathara

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Posted: 10 years ago

#125

that was heartbreaking but its the real face of the world .

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aashi

@aashizin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#126

Hey dear plz add me in your blog list n allow me to access it sending blog link

My id

aashizin@gmail.com

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Sultan_Of_Swing

@Sultan_Of_Swing

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#127

I have sent the link to the blog to everyone who has requested. Since there are restrictions with regards to posting blog links, drop me a PM to get the link.

Thanks

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rosalineak

@rosalineak

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#128

Looks interesting...

Can u send me the blog link...

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Maham Iqbal

@candyjan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#129

Thats superb dear

Plz continue soon

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aashi

@aashizin

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#130

Hey dear finally read first part I must say you r awesome author I have no words to describe my feelings towards khushi who tolerated so much in childhood , every child always remember their childhood with happiness but khushi childhood was like nightmare, I felt so sad to see how her mother avoided her, n selfishly lived her life,

But khushi emerged as strong child who tried to face hurdle, when she herself made decision to have education n now I think she will lead her life leaving this hell

U penned down whole upd superbly I felt disgust with khushi's mother who turned khushi's life hell

Can't wait for next part