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melanie

@Black_kittykat

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#131

The prologue is interesting... can I have the link for ur blog plz 😊

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xBabyAngelx

@xBabyAngelx

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#132

Really good piece of writing

Very well written

Poor Khushi has gone through a terrible life without her fault.

Her life has destroyed by her own mother.How can mother be like that,I think she got the worse mother in the world

It was horrible,she got raped at the age of 13 by her mother's customer

Looking forward to read more

Continue soon

Thanks for blog link.

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PagliTitli

@PagliTitli

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#133

Its ironic that for a story titled Paradise, Khushi's life seems like the furthest thing away from it.

Her childhood sounds like an absolute living nightmare. Poor girl's been through more in a few years than what others may face in a lifetime. No one should have to grow up so quickly as she did and go through such horrifying experiences, that too essentially all alone.

Waiting for more eagerly!

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Justme1

@Justme1

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#134

Interesting prologue...
Looking forward to the story...
Hope to read further.

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Uzii

@Uzii

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#135

Hey waiting for the update sweetie

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Anu567

@Anu567

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#136

Basanti,

Clear forgot about the blog update, and was waiting...and waiting...and waiting for chapter 1! Then realized you said blog update. Please do send me the link, girl. Will write back after I have read it.

Best,

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swtsam

@swtsam

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#137

poor khushi...feeling terrible for her...gosh her mother is such a cruel bitch...continue sooon...

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Pastellitesoulx

@xMIC.Dropx

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#138

Damn the 1st chapter is so painful than i imagined after reading few comments.
I have no words to explain khushi's life and her torment...her mother is such a heartless bitch...for god's sake khushi is her own child.such bitches shouldn't deserve kids...
Thankfully i am following u on twitter.so got a read the blog link.
Continue soon.

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sheen.sk

@sheen.sk

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#139

hi,
i just read prolouge..
& after reading it, i so wanted to read the first chp.. but
my bad luck that you have removed the chp & continuing on blog..
this is the first time i m reading your story & i really wanted to be part of it..

so pls pls can i get your blog link plsss.

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Justme1

@Justme1

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#140

Hi

I cant see chapter 1?
Have you posted it already?
Did I miss it or is it on a blog?
If it is on a blog can you give me the link please.
Many thanks

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