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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#61

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Another beautiful update.

Meera is an amazing kids and I love the cute friendship she has built with her ASR. Her wink, her private joke, her ability to enjoy the ridicule, her enthusiasm of selecting and gifting ASR, her reluctance to let him go and seeking warmth in him embrace. It all speaks a lot about the pedestal Meera is putting ASR and in a way accepting the change in her life with open arms.

With Khushi it's not that easy, and I'm glad that Arnav realizes this and is determined this time to give it as much time as required, that he "have come prepared, this time". Khushi is gonna take time to realize and understand that she really don't have to walk lane and do all this alone. She will take time and Arnav have a long job cut out for himself to make her realize that he is more than "Just a friend".

But it's also true that Khushi's being knew that Arnav is more than just a friend coz the way her arms raised on her own and she seek solace in his embrace, to let go her tears, and even gain some strength from him before moving apart and looking at Meera, says it all.

I feel sorry for Arnav when he wistfully looked at Meera and realized that his son is as will not page able to enjoy the little ridicule like Meera did.

Edited by rk2127 - 10 years ago

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aafan

@aafan

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#62

What a beautiful update!!!loved Hw Arnav was able to break through the first wall Khushi had erected around her heart

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Shyamala

@shyamidutt

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Beautiful update. I actually love the pace and the story you weave. I savor every word. It's a simple and realistic story but there is something in the way you write. It like soothes the soul. I don't know what it is about the way you write but all I feel at the end of each update is sheer happiness. There is some magic in the way you string those sentences. I can never tire of praising the magic of your writing. Like music. Sometimes the notes captivate you so much you don't even listen to the lyrics. Just the music is enough, and then you realize the lyrics just make it even more melodious. Am I making sense? Well thank you so much for writing this story for us. God bless you!

Shyamala.

Edited by shyamidutt - 10 years ago

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segad

@segad

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#64

the pace is as befits the subject matter. An exploration of emotions, old and new.

This is not a fast paced action flick, so the pace is wonderfully matched with the words.

Loved it

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sudhalata1

@sudhalata1

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Fantabulous would be an understatement. Great . Arnav has succeeded in cracking the wall which Khushi has erected around her heart. And Meera is so adorable

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Anu567

@Anu567

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Mirabell,

As usual, you surpass yourself with every chapter. This was breathtakingly beautiful, and of course we were all like 'oh, please just kiss her already' about Arnav and Khushi's subliminal conversation. They seem to have known each other deeply and well at some point in time, and the memories and nostalgia that sweep Khushi in the end are not all about recalling NK alone at this stage...yes, the pace is slow, but I reckon you are setting the stage for the internal denoument, always a tougher task isn't it than a linear start-stop kind of story? In fact, that is one of the things that most distinguishes your work, so don't even think of apologizing for it!

Please, please continue your Saturday updates...pretty please? I know I am being selfish much...but this is my Saturday morning pick-me-up...and something i so look forward to along with my coffee and leisurely newspaper read!

Will wait for your next update now, and wait to see Khushi and the Weeping Willow work out their closeness, along with Meera and Mohan! 😛

Best,

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

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ship13

@ship13

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Beautiful update, loved it. 🤗I really feel for khushi in this story and one can sense every single emotion that you are conveying. The fact that khushi bursts into tears when Arnav has to leave was one of the best moments in the update, which spoke volumes of khushi's attachment and comfort with Arnav. So glad that the others were also a witness to it. Looks like Arnav has also made it a point to not let go of khushi like he had earlier. Khushi seems to be avoiding the chance of any hope when Arnav tries to tell her more than once that she is not alone. Looking forward to the next update whenever you get a chance. 😳