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tina_1234

@tina_1234

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Super beautiful part
I m waiting for Mohan to meet khushi nd meera

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bhavis

@bhavis

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Yet another amazing update when you say the journey is slow. Does it even matter if its such an emotional ride. I am one of those who enjoys my journey far better than the destination. 😃

I found the theme of the chapter as Chemistry:

Chemistry between Arnav and Meera: I love this bonding. Meera effortlessly have bonded with Arnav. Sometimes kids see what we adults can not see. Arnav also tells her about Meera and Mohan. Is this some subtle way of saying that there will be a rocking chemisty between those two as they meet aswell. Their journey from a total stranger to friend to sibling will be worth reading and am sure will the major factor for ARSHI to decide their future😊

Chemistry between Arnav and Khushi's family: Your Arnav is such a sweetheart.He is a family guy and can easily be liked by Khushi's family for him going an extra mile.

The rocking Chemistry between ARSHI: This was through out the chapter. Their silence spoke volume. Their interaction did even more. I loved the patient Arnav that you have portrayed 👏. I fell in love with this ASR yet again. He is trying hard to make things work this time and is determined. 👍🏼.

And then the hug it showed how much Khushi needed someone to console her for her first time. It was more a mother that gave in rather than she herself and yet she gave in her inhibitions showing that if a mother in khushi is satisfied then only a Khushi as a woman will be able to accept Arnav as a man😃

Did i forget to mention Manorama and Buaji. Manorama is a real mother here who is watching her daughters action and Buaji is just being buaji😆.

Update soon

Edited by -Bhavi - 10 years ago

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Anu567

Mirabell,

As usual, you surpass yourself with every chapter. This was breathtakingly beautiful, and of course we were all like 'oh, please just kiss her already' about Arnav and Khushi's subliminal conversation. They seem to have known each other deeply and well at some point in time, and the memories and nostalgia that sweep Khushi in the end are not all about recalling NK alone at this stage...yes, the pace is slow, but I reckon you are setting the stage for the internal denoument, always a tougher task isn't it than a linear start-stop kind of story? In fact, that is one of the things that most distinguishes your work, so don't even think of apologizing for it!

Please, please continue your Saturday updates...pretty please? I know I am being selfish much...but this is my Saturday morning pick-me-up...and something i so look forward to along with my coffee and leisurely newspaper read!

Will wait for your next update now, and wait to see Khushi and the Weeping Willow work out their closeness, along with Meera and Mohan! 😛

Best,

iwas thinking about the same about kushi's state...i guess we have to wait😃😃😃 .

hoping kushi open up to her mother-in-law when she asks she is more than daughter in law ...

but writerji the way u written arnav thinking about his son wow can somebody reduce his pain and understand hislonliness...asthis stage will kushi understands him...

thanks for the lovely chapter...

cheers..

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Totally loved the update Meera!!! ArShi are getting closer each day,I know it is going to be a long journey for Khushi to love Arnav again.

Don't worry about the schedule as AD can get hectic, please update at your convenience as I for sure would follow the story as it is damn good!!!!!

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docs

@docs

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Very beautiful portrayal of meera-asr bonding...true the end is the goal but the journey is what makes it memorable ... Take your time M will wait for the updates :)

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#76

This journey could not be better paced at all. Take your time.. It's very considerate of you to let you readers know . We have been spoilt by you frequent updates!

Life throws many curveballs throughout. Many would say it is fate and accept it that , others would say write your own destiny. I prefer the latter..

All the ladies have been smitten by Arnav ..he's their knight in shining armor, yes he has own agenda and he's prepared to wait as long as it takes but will not give up a fighting chance.

I persistently get a the impression that Manorama will play a pivotal role, reassuring Khuhsi to pursue a new life.

Arnavs despair over his son Mohan is heartfelt, I feel Khushi may help in her field as a speech pathologist..

Whilst reading this update, a favorite and very meaningful song came to mind.. To me this depicts Arnavs thoughts - 'Tera bina zindgai se koi shikwa toh nahin, Lekin tere bina zindgai toh zindgai bhi nahin... (Aandhi)

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orchids8888

@orchids8888

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Thank u for gmail...😃

You are an awesome author... Thank u for this beautiful story🤗

The way you have woven this story is fabulous👏

Khushi please open your heart before Arnav... Khushi's daughter & Arnav's son also require parents love... It will be genuinely beautiful if Arnav & Khushi follow their true feelings & become one...

Khushi loves Arnav deeply & Arnav also loves Khushi deeply...❤️ They are genuinely soul mates❤️

Hope so Manorama unites Arnav & Khushi

Waiting for the lunch in Shantivan

Please dear, try to update once a week if possible like u have done till now... Pretty please