Arshi SS: Chiron CHAPTER 3 | UPDATED May 9| pg 25 - Page 19

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Posted: 10 years ago
So, I read the update as soon as I saw the PM... I was suppose to drive for a important meeting but ditched that for the first reading of the Coffins of Time... Then had to rush out so second reading happened a while later... and read it again just now... Why you may wonder AMan, but I need a minimum 3 reads to comprehend all that you are trying to impart... All the subtle nuances... Man sometimes they hit me in the face on the first read and some times they are as elusive as you...


After 3 reads I am still struggling to tell you all that what I wanted to say about "Coffins in Time - I"... First reaction is at last here is the much awaited back story of ASR... Thank God for saving the few hairs remaining on my head... But only the first reaction mind you... When one reads your story it is like developing a bruise (for want of a better word)... There are multiple reaction and multiple hues it takes...


I have already told I like this ASR... So no point in repeating myself... But the statement "...I could not for I was busy chasing normalcy, wanting to be like other kids of my age, wanting to fit in." you had me there... I did not expect it but how true for his character...


Thank god the year counting girlfriend relationship died a natural death... Imagining ASR with a permanent attachment like that makes me want to turn green and it is not from jealousy mind you...


What a place to stop at
All my thank Gods are taken back
I am back to pulling my hair out of my head

Edited by Heavens_Flower - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Heavens_Flower

So, I read the update as soon as I saw the PM... I was suppose to drive for a important meeting but ditched that for the first reading of the Coffins of Time... Then had to rush out so second reading happened a while later... and read it again just now... Why you may wonder AMan, but I need a minimum 3 reads to comprehend all that you are trying to impart... All the subtle nuances... Man sometimes they hit me in the face on the first read and some times they are as elusive as you...



After 3 reads I am still struggling to tell you all that what I wanted to say about "Coffins in Time - I"... First reaction is at last here is the much awaited back story of ASR... Thank God for saving the few hairs remaining on my head... But only the first reaction mind you... When one reads your story it is like developing a bruise (for want of a better word)... There are multiple reaction and multiple hues it takes...


I have already told I like this ASR... So no point in repeating myself... But the statement "...I could not for I was busy chasing normalcy, wanting to be like other kids of my age, wanting to fit in." you had me there... I did not expect it but how true for his character...


Thank god the year counting girlfriend relationship died a natural death... Imagining ASR with a permanent attachment like that makes me want to turn green and it is not from jealousy mind you...


What a place to stop at
All my thank Gods are taken back
I am back to pulling my hair out of my head


@bold: I have company. yay. good to know, i m not the only one requiring multiple reads. šŸ˜†

wow, you have put it so well. šŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update... I really loved this chapter.
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Posted: 10 years ago
I know your language skills are just impeccable and impressive showing one brilliant writer you are !!! As much as I want to be a part of this wonderful story , at times I have to read and re read to understand certain words n lines...Can you make the language a little more simpler to read? Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cineraria


Thank you behen. 😃 I need all the good wishes given that my effort hasn't yet been put in order.

Can Arnav stop the events from happening? The answer is relative. For example, in the incident of his mother's sari catching fire, he couldn't stop that from happening but since he knew it precognitively, he was ready with the water before the fire could cause any severe damage.

So it would depend on his position and understanding of what he sees to decide how he'd act given the circumstance. I guess more important than preventing the event is preventing it from causing much damage.


Ria , Theory of relativity of Einstein does apply here what are you saying though it is a theory..as all Laws of nature run around physics and these laws should be same for all non accelerating observers only if light of speed comes in action ...meaning either events or the person or the action has capacity of be happened with this speed and then it won't be observed by anyone except who did it or itself event had been gone through with it...and that is time dilation because time slows down around that observer ...

Really cute and beyond imagination concept you have here...loving it...as It makes me so happy reading this stuff and it's application on ARSHI and their love story...I do that a lot.😳

P.S. Sorry for my Einstein hint as I see things through Physics...coz I am a Physicist...
Edited by .ArshiHamesha. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mpuhan

I love this Arnav, taking all the shit in his life in his stride and trying to fit in instead of rebelling. The love story between Lavanya and Arnav is the usual love for the college goers. Pity it didn't last but one could tell neither of them were serious about each other.
A new adventure waiting for arnav in New Yorkā­ļø! waiting for the next update already


Thank you so much 😃 You pretty much summed up Arnav in this story.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Heavens_Flower

So, I read the update as soon as I saw the PM... I was suppose to drive for a important meeting but ditched that for the first reading of the Coffins of Time... Then had to rush out so second reading happened a while later... and read it again just now... Why you may wonder AMan, but I need a minimum 3 reads to comprehend all that you are trying to impart... All the subtle nuances... Man sometimes they hit me in the face on the first read and some times they are as elusive as you...



After 3 reads I am still struggling to tell you all that what I wanted to say about "Coffins in Time - I"... First reaction is at last here is the much awaited back story of ASR... Thank God for saving the few hairs remaining on my head... But only the first reaction mind you... When one reads your story it is like developing a bruise (for want of a better word)... There are multiple reaction and multiple hues it takes...


I have already told I like this ASR... So no point in repeating myself... But the statement "...I could not for I was busy chasing normalcy, wanting to be like other kids of my age, wanting to fit in." you had me there... I did not expect it but how true for his character...


Thank god the year counting girlfriend relationship died a natural death... Imagining ASR with a permanent attachment like that makes me want to turn green and it is not from jealousy mind you...


What a place to stop at
All my thank Gods are taken back
I am back to pulling my hair out of my head


Di as always you leave me speechless! You gave so much of your precious time to this, I am really really humbled.

Hehehe ASR in any form is a free spirit, one needs a special talent to get that spirit attach itself to oneself permanently. šŸ˜† šŸ˜† Only a certain Ms is capable ...

Thank you Di, your comments are always such a delight to read, they keep a writer going. 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: saakhi01

Awesome update... I really loved this chapter.



Thank you, I am glad you did. 😃
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Originally posted by: Barunz4ever

I know your language skills are just impeccable and impressive showing one brilliant writer you are !!! As much as I want to be a part of this wonderful story , at times I have to read and re read to understand certain words n lines...Can you make the language a little more simpler to read? Thanks for pm


Thank you so much for taking out the time to read behen. Ok, I never realized this that the language was becoming cumbersome, I usually right in shifts and try to put across a thought in a way I could best manage.

I'll keep it in mind next time. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.


Ria , Theory of relativity of Einstein does apply here what are you saying though it is a theory..as all Laws of nature run around physics and these laws should be same for all non accelerating observers only if light of speed comes in action ...meaning either events or the person or the action has capacity of be happened with this speed and then it won't be observed by anyone except who did it or itself event had been gone through with it...and that is time dilation because time slows down around that observer ...

Really cute and beyond imagination concept you have here...loving it...as It makes me so happy reading this stuff and it's application on ARSHI and their love story...I do that a lot.😳

P.S. Sorry for my Einstein hint as I see things through Physics...coz I am a Physicist...



Faiqa behen you are a Physicist!!! Wow, I mean, I wanted to be one when I was 14, trying to be a precocious kid but I ended up with Engineering like every average Indian kid who can solve a bit of Math. šŸ˜†

True, physics applies everywhere after all it is Natural Philosophy. Oh and I love your takes, missing the blaster thread. I'll be there after exams.

Thank you for being here for me, now if I make any factual error while citing any physical theory, you'd be there to correct me. 😃

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