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smat

@smat

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Simply amazing

Thanks for the pm

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@_CrystalFlames_

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Di you are awesome...

This os is just fab...

I loved the way you portray both arnav & khushi's emotions...

Arnav's possessiveness towards khushi...

His pain & anguish on seeing his love in someone's else arms...

Khushi's confusion on arnav's sudden marriage and those hurtful words...

Both love each other so much that both can feel each other's pain...

Arnav is damn scared when he don't hear khushi's voice & realised that she has closed the door from inside...

Atlast their misunderstanding got clear...

Thank god shyam is not negative here...

😊

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amita

@star_fan1

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

It was really a very sweet story

Loved it too much

Really like the thing that Shyam is not a villein here

And Arnav's getting panic not getting any noise from Khushi after that their misunderstanding cleared and Khushi coming with her mirchi was all so nice

Thanks for pm

Edited by star_fan1 - 10 years ago

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

oh my my faiqa u on fire ...lol...beautiful os can't tell u in words how much i loved it...i don't know y but the line "he sees the desired to be loved"...this line did some magic for me...its beautiful...faiqa from the start till the end the intensity was superb...amazing dear...

and ur analysis on their wedding too too good ...yeah indeed when they got engaged under the sun they were alone...and when they got married this night under the stars they were alone...knowingly or unknowingly its true both were there with each other no matter wt...

Edited by lalarukh - 10 years ago

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nagina

@jeb1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Awesome OS

Loved it

Thanks for pm me

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

What was he thinking
Wait so shyam wasn't cheating husband
Good to know
But then why did he marry her
Anyway his confusion was over
Wow seems she had fainted due to lack of food
And the way he panicked
Oh man that was something
But in the end it worked out for them
He is pretty possesessive of her isn't he
Can't take it if someone else sees her or touches her like he does
Hmmm interesting punishment for arnav

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Nice OS. I liked how you twisted the episode and not only gave us a happy first night but also Shyam as a nice person. I didn't see it coming.
This also has led me to question what would have ASR really done had Khushi harmed herself because of his actions? Would he have come out of his hating stupor?
Anyways I loved how you gave us a happy ending. Their marriage should have been a happy one not forced but here we got a happy beginning at least 😊 Thanks for that

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Really a fabulous OS.. loved it... aawesome

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saakhi01

@saakhi01

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Nice OS, thanks for d pm.

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raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Hey thanks for the pm. Loved the update. Wonderful enjoyed every bit of it. Superb. So there was nothing about shyam and Khushi disgusting now was shyam a vile. Arnav married Khushi forcefully but at last love overruled hate. Excellent

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