ARSHI/OS: A New Beginning with Curator...Marriage Special - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Really Am amazed...
Am still awe with your teri meri post before it fades away this one...
I really enjoyed reading this especially with your edits...

The fab point is that u made shyam a brother in her eyes...
That was a twist...

👏

ArShi marriage is a very special bond which brought them together...

How would it be if the great ASR proposes khushi?

It will be like anyother story...

CVS brought this track to get them together...

HAPPY ANNIVERSARY fellow ArShians.


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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
wow beautiful os loved it thank you for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
nice os dear
loved it

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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
awesome
great work
love it
👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
os is great.. twist with shyam as brother is lovely
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
There are few stories you read, OSs, SSs, drabbles...which present such beautiful alternate scenarios to the original scenes that you find yourself wishing this had happened on the show.
This was one of them.
Would have been a treat to see Barun and Sanaya enact what you have so beautifully penned.
Loved it! Keep writing more. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
amazing shot! accha tha.. shyam ko khushi ka bhai bana diya.. arnav ki tadap yeh sochkar ki khushi ne kahin khud ko kuch kar toh nahin diya was beautiful described.. apni aur dusro ko kismat likhne wala arnav singh raizada khushi ke aage haar jata hai.. khushi ke pyaar mein woh kashish hai ki arnav ka gussa, guroor, akad, status sab pani ho jata hai.. loved the shot..

thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
great os
wish something like that had happened in the show
loved it

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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
What a surprise😊
I read this twice and this took my heart away.I couldn't imagine him going through with this piercing pain.He was shattered holding her in his arms.


He gathers her in his strong yet safe cocoon...caressing her cheeks with his hand calling her with the softest voice ever ..."Khushi!!! please open your eyes..." then a fear takes over him...he checks her everywhere ...there was no blood...What if she took some pills or poison...No ...No ...She can't ...He jerks her up ...yells at her...threatens her...pleads her...and then kisses her over her forehead by closing his eyes ...gathering closer to his heart...where his heart picks up her heart beat...Yes her heartbeat... His tears flow down under a small appearing smile...He brings her face closer to his ...kisses her nose, cheek , eyes, everywhere he can...and keeps his forehead over hers...while his tears bring her in senses...and their eyes meet with each other after the hateful moment...and here she sees her Arnavji...the one who always lets her peep ,in his soul...


Shyam, as a brother, a well wisher.Nice for a change👏
Our Sanka and her innocence is what grabs him and brings him down to his knees .His ego , his challenges all go poof in the air when it comes to her, her safety and her life.No doubt, he way possessive towards her then how can he see her in someone's arms.He hardly could bear NK touching her or shaking hands and they were just joking around.Love him and his possessiveness.

haha, she is going to make him eat chili, she revives so quickly.yes she is Khushi, his khushi who brings smile and peace to him.

Too good👏⭐️👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
RES-
😲 Faiqa so much to catch up with just your work😳

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