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ASRphanki

@ASRphanki

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Beautiful update Sandy..

I loved evry description..and the last part..cant wait to read more on Arnav's reaction !!

Happy Belated Valentines !!

Congrats on new thread 😊

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Congratulations on thread 2 Sandhya!! 🥳

Wish you many more threads of excitement!!😉

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Sj236

@Sj236

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

congrats on the new thread.

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mrin0709

@mrin0709

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Wow.. 2nd thread already. . well deserved..

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Congrats on the new thread Sandhya.

Sorry I am late with my comments. AD and flu has kept me out of form most of this week.

Got a sneak peak into what happened to Khushi and their family after the incident. What a trauma for a eight year old girl to undergo.

First lose your best friend right in front of your own eyes, then the police and I am sure the Raizadas too must have made her life hell. Not to forget they must have thrown out Shashi from his job, and all the gossip and blame must have made them flee Nilgiris.

I cant imagine how sad it must have been for the loved ones of Khushi to see her suffering like this, the nightmares, the guilt, the loneliness, the sorrow, oh God, how did they cope up with this nightmare which was real.

Loved the love story of Uma and Srinivas Rao. Great lady Uma is indeed, to have stood against society in those days, marry the one she loved and then bring up children in these close minded societies. I think Khushi should spend more time with her grandmother and get her spunk about life.

Now was Lakshmi's daughter kidnapped too. I somehow find that girls getting kidnapped might be part of a bigger scandal than we can imagine now and Anjali also might have been kidnapped under this scam.

I feel so sorry for both Arnav and Khushi. Of all the people, they had to get attracted to each other.

Loved the way Arnav was trying to impress Khushi and her aunt.

But the entry of Aarti into the picture changed everything. She still has so much hatred towards Khushi even after so many years. Khushi was herself still a small kid for crying out loud, how can the entire family have so much hatred on a little girl.

I can understand that their loss is unimaginable but what was Khushi's fault in that entire episode???

And the most shocking reaction for me was from Arnav. He just went away without even looking back once.

What a messy situation this is!!!! How will Sandhya pull them out this mess is something to be seen.

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Rayolight

@Rayolight

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Congrats on the new thread!

And the news is out so early in the story! Intrigued to know where this is heading...since he already knows who she is...and hes only met her once before...

Of course since it is your story...its going to be different...but now i'm like sooo eager to know whats gonna happen!

Loved the writing and flow as usual..

Cheers

Rayolight