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dsbj

@dsbj

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#351

update was so intense..and mind blowing.. he really thought she was stalking him because she is writing anjali's story.. he will regret this soon when he finds out more about khushi.. he is furious and feel betrayed and hurt because she didn't tell who she is .. hope they meet again soon..
waiting for next already

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#352

Superb update
Arnav accused khushi and she didn't even say anything... I so wish khushi stood up for herself

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smile1412

@smile1412

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#353

Woah ! That was some confrontation n accusation ... Wonder what Khushi will do now ... She wd be more determined now I guess !!

Lovely update !!

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#354

Part 2 is mind blowing...did not expect Arnav to be at khushi's place so soon...he has done his research about her...but he did not know her completely...what she was going through...his accusations are baseless...she did not try to clarify things...as it was of no use now...it was a disappointment for Arnav to believe some thing he did not want to believe...beautifully written...thanks for the PM

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#355

wow wt a chap :)...starting from the way u have written khushi's condition her trauma..how she was reliving the moments once again...she wanted to make peace with her past but that aarti pushed her back to point zero...poor girl for her once again the painful past memories standing right in front with same intensity and this time its not only the anju's pain but arnav entry in her life is adding salt to her injuries too...the way she was searching the drawers for his water canteen...that lampshade shook wildly..her wobble steps..her attempts to stop tears...amazing writing yaar loved it...i have not read the chapter i have literally watched it through ur writing :)..

khushi's aunt and granny wt a strong women both r...granny though under some obligations she not able to voice out against aartti much but madhumai rocks here :)...u know sometimes one needs one single shoulder of support and positivity ...who can motivate u to move on or stand strong in life...and that anchor i found madhu here for khushi...loved the way she has shown light at the end of tunnel to khushi...

loved the way u have shown khushi writing a story, and how beautifully u have describe the addition of dialogues or emotions to give final touch up:)...that was cool..

lavanya works for madhumati...i guess she is that girl granny once mentioned...have to wait and see :)

hmm finally arnav and khushi face to face ...arnav totally out of mind in anger cause ..its not just the anju thing here he is disturbed as his heart the culprit too...how can he feel attraction towards her...but abh keya kerain ,akhir dil ka mamla hay ...yeh tou hoga .hee..lol

loved that one pull from his side and khushi landing on his chest and then the change of emotions ...beautiful writing dear...loved it...though arnav was spitting fire but like khushi wanted to clear all in the end too...hope she able to get all the courage and she takes positive step instead of going in shell...she needs to meet him on his face and throw back all the allegations which he pushed towards her with sound proofs :)..awesome chapter loved it :)

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#356

This part was worth waiting for. Fantastic!

wow Arnav is a typical Raizada and truly a son of his mother.

i wish khushi could have slapped his face, he has totally lost his mind. One thing i don't like that everyone just don't stop now blaming khushi and don't take her as human who has emotions, who can be hurt. OMG its about time. i wish at least one person, just pne person could have dare to put him/herself in khushi's feet.

Arnav is judmental, did he thought for one second that of khushi was really after him and met him with a plan on the trail, she would have call him as HE left his number and HE propose to know each other. Didn't HE feel khushi aloofness from him? I want Arnav to reach the hight of madness so that after that mist could clear away from his mind and he could think at least sensible.

I have a feeling the that the most sensible in the Raizada family are only Dadi and Akash too, i just my notion and i hope its become true because i want someone to understand khushi and read her mind and feel her emotions.

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smric

@smric

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#357

Here's my view on part 2

She is writing a thriller..with romantic scenes between a cop and a private investigator😳

Well we all know where that story will go😆

I loved the scene where you gave us a detail description of khushi sitting on a chair n typing away furiously..its like I can actually see her doing that.

N the conversation was very intense..my heart was beating fast while I was digesting Arnav's accusations. He is hurt that's why he is accusing her. But still she is getting hurt for no fault of her's.

I hope he comes to know her actual motive.

Thank you for the update. N it was as good as your every updates.

Thank you for pm

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Russell

@russelskhushi

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#358

seams like Arnav is more hurt becoz khushi hid her identity to him ..
khushi being quite was the best thing to do,,... it made Arnav bring out all his bitterness ... i guess he will now be able to see the other side of the story...
loved the update...

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#359

Awesome 2nd part Sandhya!! Poor Khushi felt so bad for her.

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Aishaqaiser

@Aishaqaiser

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#360

Intriguing update...
There are so many layers n aspects of this story!!!
Sometimes u'v to look at the other side...khushi s equally affected here...
Waiting for next...

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