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esha85

@esha85

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Posted: 10 years ago

#281

Congratulations on the new thread...sorry the late reply...i had this chapter open on my phone for one week but got to read it yesterday only. Well it turned out to be a double treat for me... as i started reading Chapter 4 I realised that I am missing something and it turns out that I had not read Chapter 3 also!

Well after reading both updates all I can say is this 👍🏼.. Loved the way you brought out Khushi's inner turmoil and the fact that the women characters are so strong and independent in your story...having a guilty concience can actually eat you up from inside and lower your life line...this has actually happened to someone very close to me and i know firsthand how it feels like to see your loved one suffering and not being able to do anything to help them...

Chapter 3

I can understand why Uma tried to change the topic of Laxmi's daughter getting lost...i have a feeling that the same fate befell on her as it did on Anjali...Again very eager to know what exactly happened to Anjali but won't hurry you up...i like the flow and pace of this story..don't want to change anything...

Arnav and Khushi meeting...that was really interesting...can see our boy is really charmed by Khushi...can feel arshi having a difficult love story in this one..

Chapter 4

Don't know what to say about Aarti...can understand her pain of loosing her daughter but i don't understand why see can't see that she has lost a lot more through her behaviour...i actually pity Arnav and Aakash...so far she comes across as someone cold, someone trapped by the traditions and customs to a point that she does not realise where her real happiness lies...

Anyway can't wait to see what happens next...😊

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kanthi_chks

@kanthi_chks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#282

Not a problem, Sandia 😉
Take your time :)

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Kishmish

@Kishmish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#283

Ah Watermelon ! love the fruit (thank God I have not been on the watermelon diet !) 😆

But love the name Sandhya ...

No problem for the delay ... I know how demanding AD can be ...

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rk2127

@rk2127

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Posted: 10 years ago

#284

Thanks for the note.

Btw watermelon is my favorite fruit. Sweet and juicy 😉

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MEsw

@MEsw

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Posted: 10 years ago

#285

Hi,

when's next part?

I can totally understand Arnav's mothers reaction...she has lost a child, and it is hard to forget and forgive, even when the person might not be responsible,...it is human psychology and survival instinct to blame it on others...it is easy...I know she is not dumb... She knows that it can't be khush's fault...but as a mother she can not forgive her...and especially when she is not ready to accept that Anjali is gone for ever...it is also survival mode...she can't give up...

I can understand Arnav's state of mind too...he was attracted to her ...

But here it is about family...even though no body said against khuhsi...including nani, chacha, chachi, or Akash...but I don't think they all have given her a clean chit...nani and Akash are against Arnav's mothers uptight nature...they are not with Khushi...it's different...

I am not sure Akashi has turned this after his divorce or he in some way blames himself for Anjali's disappearance and have started drinking and all and that has resulted in divorce?

But for Arnav. ...as a brother he can't accept that he fell for a person who is responsible ( In a way ) for his sisters disappearance...

It is not about right or wrong for him...it is about family...how ever they are...right or wrong ...

Deep down he can logically analyze that Khushi as a small child can't be responsible for Anjali's disappearance ...but for him it's not about that at all...it is about his sisters memories...his mothers sentiments...his responsibility as a older brother...

There comes a time in a life when you have to take sides...and than you have to decide are you on the side of truth or not...that time hasn't come for him...but it will come...

For. khuhsi...she might have come to face the past...face the demons ...to start a fresh...to visit all the places...that can remind here of Anjali...and face them with bravery...

But she might not have never ever thought to come face to face with Raizadas...never have thought to be attracted to HIM...this is her worst ...even unthinkable nightmare coming true...I don't know what is she going to do...as now her dadi and aunt also witnessed their reaction to her...I think her aunt will be already to get in to her truck...and go fight with Raizadas...and her dadi will be all protective of her..

They might even try and parcel her back to Bangalore...

But will she be strong and stay...or give up and leave?

I wish I can get in to your brain and get the whole story...or I can hypnotize you and make you blurt it all out...or may be I can get a mind reader and read your mind!! So many options ...ha ha...

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amita

@star_fan1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#286

Its very intense update

Arthi's suffering, her loss and anger is understandable but how can she ignore her other children and family members

In last chapter you told about Laxhmi and her daughter was missing from last two years but after that she become more protective towards her other child Vijay

How can Arthi distance herself from her other children they to are starving for their mother's love and warmth, if anything, her loss should have brought her closer to her children, her family

I don't know how will you present her character in coming updates but till now i hate her for her high headed and egoistic behavior

Even after Arnav explained everything happened she is still blaming him.

Arnav's family is in so much mess due to that one incident

His dadi is really a sweet lady I liked the way you have characterized his dadi and Her thought processes

Manorma also seems kind and lovely lady that's why Akash and Arnav love her too much

Akash is a drunker but interesting person didn't understand about his divorce matter

I feel sad for Akash, his dialogues give a hint that he is craving for his mother love and attention.

Now coming to Arnav in this update you shows Arnav as family man but want to now what is Arnav's personal thinking on all this matter

When he was thinking about Anjali he thought if she was alive, she wouldn't have been thinking the same about Khushi.

Does this mean Arnav realizes Khushi is not at fault?

Is he avoiding Khushi and her family for his mother?

Really want to know his point of view in this matter