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Honkytonk

@Honkytonk

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#221

That is one very broken family!!! Must be a difficult household to have grown up in for the boys. Many thanks

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#222

Dear S,

Thanks for sharing those pictures...Is Khushi's house pictures from real resort?? if so...where is that place???

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#223

👏⭐️👏

mind blowing part

really arnav mom is soo strict

why she is not believing her son that

he didn't recognize khushi

and

the big question why is she blaming khushi for anjali kidnapping?

she was also a child at that tym😕

and also she has gone through a lot just because of that incident

This ARTI really needs some counselling

she has made her whole family sufferred due to her such natiure and attitude

loved arnav chachi and chacha charracter

and

arnav family tree

shows they really need KHUSHI in their family😊

as sumitra wish

continue soon

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#224

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beautiful pics

loved them

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sivatharshini

@sivatharshini

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#225

Awesome update, love it !! Looking forward to read more .

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bkamber

@bkamber

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#226

Love the pace of the story so far. I don't like boringly slow. 😉
We now have Arnav's family tree...larger than Khushi's.
Khushi the child in her family and for Arnav we have 4 + ?.
Both families affected and the depth of the pain can only be defined by how they carry on.
This chapter brings to us the Raizadas in their finest and the coldest.
Aarti grieves silently and stays aloof while others embrace each day and each other with the past remembered but not confined by it.
Aakash seems more troubled, failed marriage, alcohol abuse and mention of Khushi put him in another time and place. Deep. 🤔
Enjoying the ride so far.
Take care.

PS - Nice pictures!!
👍🏼

Edited by bkamber - 10 years ago

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reema.gcpatra

@reema.gcpatra

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#227

very good story and writter. Love the mystery

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archmink

@archmink

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#228

I guess it was hard for raghuvendra to live with Aarti after everything happen so he decided to move to Mumbai ... Even though I'm not a big of Aarti Raizada I somewhere agree with her that Anjali is still alive... I guess it would make any human a bitter person after loosing a child not knowing what really happen to her is she is still alive or dead .. I kind of sympathized with her state ... But she is still holding on to her fake pride ego and still very class conscious ... I don't think she sees manorama as her equal ... But I like how Manu and pratap both support Arnav ... Aarti lookes like didn't have time for her kids and that's why Anjali had found a companion in her childhood in Khushi and I think somewhere Arnav and akash both knows that ... That's why Arnav was thinking that he Knows what Anjali ne thinking had she been there to see Khushi now ... And akash is the example is their mothers negligence or should I say too busy in her class and status conscious
It might still be too early to say all this at this point in story
I'm excited to see akash's reaction now that he was so shocked ...

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saschades

@saschades

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#229

awesome update

thanks for pm xx

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BarunFan1212

@BarunFan1212

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#230

Oh! Loved ch4. It was a long one. Thanks for the PM and a long interesting chapter.

It was sad to see that Arthi as a head strong, un emotional perfectionist. It's like the good old Royals who does not care for any emotions for their loved ones. They are only bound to their traditions and loyalty to their status.

I felt bad for Arnav. First time he is attracted to a girl and now he feels shame of him self for falling for the girl who was the cause of his sisters disappearance.

It was so heart wrenching to see they all hold Khushi as the reason for Anjali's disappearance. Though she was a kid her self.

Is there any one who could bring talk some sense to these Raizada's?

I could see none of the family is cable of confronting Arthi and how Khushi and Arnav's relationship is going to grow?

It's sad to see the condition of Akaash. Is he like this because is of Anjali or Arthi or because of his divorce?

Sandya, first of all I have no words to say about your writing, The brilliance of you bringing out each character is nothing new for us. You are one of the great writers of this forum and thanks for again taking us into another journey with your amazing writing.

I'm looking forward to travel this journey with you and see what in store for our poor Khushi and Arnav?

All the best for your writing.

And thanks for the beautiful pictures too.