Arshi FF: Saffron Fields #14// Link Thread 15 Pg 1.

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A_BA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Congrats on the new thread Jenny😃

I'm bookmarking this for now!

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chavvi16

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

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unres
well finally she gets it
but i so dont wanna bash that woman
trying hard not to but cant help it
if only she had thought rationally before
but did she
no wonder they are in this mess
this is the second time she has screwed things up
first being with aarav and his paternity issue
and now this
i agree with manya on one thing
no man is worth this stupidity
what did it give her
but more heart ache
and made sure that her ties with arnav are forever broken
well i know astha shouldnt have said about aarav and all
but she is a mother too
so she had to tell them why
and the reason for their divorce
glad her father knows now
must be so disappointed that he failed as a father
hmmm seems its happening lot with father's in this story
three fathers dealing with their kids
arnav lost his kid but navin and sashi havent
so they better gear up
walls are beginning to form
last chance my well you know what i mean
lavanya knew she had no chance left
even if khushi didnt come in picture
but due to her stunt well arhi will drift apart
well it puts things into perspective
they will have to wait till he is officially divorced
test of their love you could say
but its not fair right
not on khushi
not on arnav for sure
but thats the way it is
khushi is blaming himself
and she might just start distancing
which is best solution
but what about arnav
does he not deserve some love and happiness in his life
am worried what happens next

Edited by chavvi16 - 10 years ago

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Archna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

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Unres:-

This was ultimate chapter you wrote jenny. Speechless. Marvellous update.

My heart was beating even before reading it. I was about to sleep but then received your pm and my sleep vanished.

God Khushi is taking strong step. Arnav will be devastated. He is trying to make her believe in them but guess he is failing miserably and he is just trying to fool his heart that she just need time and will be back. But deep down he also know that it's too late. Khushi's last line broke my heart. Lavanya is successful in destroying him completely.

Shashi and astha's part was awesome. A mother in mission to save her child from bad world. I loved her today. Arnav might not agree with her in this but I agree with her fully. He will thank his mother one day. There is two side of a coin and the side which Astha choose is correct for me. I would have done same for my child.

You write this part so wonderfully. Every emotions come so naturally. Didn't feel like I am reading a story for once. It was flowless.Beauty of your story telling.

Part with shashi waking up with lavanya in the morning was too good. How miserable he must be after knowing truth of his daughter and he can't even get angry on her. He knows the truth now and once she be fine I really want him to have talk with her for what she did.

But finally looks like lavanya's mind has open and she really wants to get over with obsession of arnav. But damaged has been done and now arnav will never forgive her for this act of hers.

And yes, yes, yes...there will be sunshine, there will be rain...there will be romance...there will be hotness(LOL) ...soon...but not just yet:))

I am counting on you for this line you write. Make it soon yaar. I am dying for their romance and sunshine in saffron field.

Thanks for beautiful update. Loved it

Thanks for pm too.

Edited by archnahardik123 - 10 years ago

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kushiarnav1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Counting minutes just started refreshing...hoping for an update..

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Umar Taweel Mang Ke Laye Thay Char Din..

Do Aarzo Main Kat Gaye Do Intezaar Main..

#Bahadur Shah Zafar

Hum intezaar kr rahe hain Jenny..

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

congrats on new thread
waiting for update

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pixiegirl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: IPK007
Reserved for chap 37

Walls..

Coming up Monday Evening, US time :)

Hasn't Monday PM, US time, come & gone?? 🤔

Where art thou, writer sahiba?? Getting quite antsy here you know... 😒

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Kamala

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Waiting for the update eagerly...

I hope the walls is not between Khushi and Arnav , a fence may strengthen their relationship , but Walls, isn't it too much ?😭