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smileyhug7679

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Wow finally the truth is out and I am so glad astha saves her son
I understand it wasn't her decision to make but somebody needed to tell that he is not to be blame completely

Finally I see light at the end of the tunnel la wants to get over him I hope she sticks to it

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bablubli

@bablubli

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Jenny...thank you for yet another outstanding update!

Too many thoughts at the moment jostling for an expression...will come back with them once I have them sorted out in my head. I saw your note on the update - I wonder about your thought processes as you are writing an episode...and I can completely imagine the writing/rewriting routine that you writers must go through. Hell...I struggle with penning my comments here! So, don't worry about the precap not making it in this chapter.

Anyway, so Sashi knows about the child's paternity...least expected to see Astha come out with the truth, but as I have said before...the truth is greater than anything else and I don't care how it comes to the fore. It needed to...for Arnav's sake, for Khushi's sake, for the families' sake...why, I would go so far as to say for Lavanya's sake - part of her issue is the guilt she is harboring.

Though there is a long way to go for her on the path of healing and moving forward, the fact that the father knows about it may be one less thing to be burdened with...although guilt could easily be replaced now by shame. Only time will tell. I hope atleast now she allows her family to help her and they take her rehab seriously.

Hope you & your babies are doing well. Love & 🤗.

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bkamber

@bkamber

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Hi Jenny,
You did great!! These are dark chapters and your flow of the sequence of events is smooth.

This is my short and quick response...I will be back later after work.

Shashi Gupta - I think you meant Shashi Kashyap....😊

Proud of Astha for taking the bull by the horn...Shashi appears to be rational.
Damage is done though. Arnav is still paying the price. At least he has Astha. Khushi is...don't know what word to use for her....numb for now.
No shoulder to lean on.

Please...Please...please...don't have Khushi talk to Loony. I don't want Khushi feeling anymore responsible...timing of events is everything. I hope the previous teaser is Khushi leaving for the airport.

I will comment some more later...work calling. 😊

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Srilatha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

I feel bad for Shashi , he came to know about the truth of his daughters marriage when she was in a critical condition. Astha , I think every mother will do the same when her kids are pointed out without their mistake . A mother will defend them and will blurt out the truth even if it hurts the other person.

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deepthi

@deepsdspeed

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#105

finally lavanya decided to get over him..and her father came to know the truth..

but the damage has been done..

cant wait for next chapter..

thanks for the pm

Edited by deepsdspeed - 10 years ago

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sweety421

@sweety421

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Nyc update... m glad sashi got to know the truth... It was needed... but feeling so bad fo Khushi... can't take this Lavanya anymore...
Plz make it alright soon... tc...

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arshi21

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

Take it slow jenny! There is no hurry.

I think the quality of chapters matter and you have been FANTASTIC so far.

The emotions..the turmoil..ALL SO SO SO human and natural had it been real.

I am so amazed at your capability to grasp human emotions at varying situations. So real. And the magnitude of it that you convey so easily is commendable!

I am loving it. Though my heart is breaking and I am disliking lavanya more and more by each update and also somewhere I am pitying her, I want her to get well or whatever it is that she has to do in order to leave Arnav and move on...

And I want Arshi's happiness. I know we will get there but this is so so sad.

Sigh.

I am loving the updates though :)

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Aruni.

@Aruni.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

I dunno what to say. 🤔

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rulama

@rulama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#109

Jen...

Don't apologise... That was a good chapter... Well written worth the wait...

At last it was Astha who revealed the truth and her maternal instinct kicked in...👏👏👏 Oh Boy! Am I glad at least to see a normal parent other than Shashi Kashyap! She has refuted Shashi's accusation by revealing Aarav's paternity lay elsewhere and not with Arnav and Arnav's innate goodness and love for the child did not let him drag Aarav's name into the court to be mudslinged...

Just loved it so far... So it was Lavanya's thoughts With or without you...

But what is Khushi upto? Will Arnav meet her????

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hararnav

@hararnav

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Posted: 10 years ago

#110

for once i am glad astha took decision on arnavs behal and talked to Sashi abt Aarav...

enuf of hating arnav everyone. though what la did is very wrong and has disturbed so many lives, atleast she is ready to move on now... lets hope this works,

now time to worry abt khushi... hope arnav goes to her before she takes any rash decision of leavin him