arshi ss:Hamesha ~ A Heartbeat Away #2, Epilogue, pg 69, Updated 6/21 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
Her day dreaming was amusing to read but then it was a mirror of her innocent thoughts. Poor Khushi has to bear Arnav's share of teasing too because no one really wants to be on the receiving end of that brooding man while with her, they can enjoy the lazy banter and easy teasing.

Shyam's words were not really surprising because we have seen the worst. What came as a beautiful surprise were Arnav's words that not only defended Khushi but also gave away the implicit trust he has in her. It is unbelievable how a 'tum theek ho' has the power of taking us down the memory lane even today.

My respect for Mamiji gre a little more and I really look forward to see how she gets the weddings arranged. Anjali's reaction, however, is eagerly awaited. I am sure Shyam has a role to play but I hope his role is given a logical ending here (unlike the show).

Waiting for the next part.
Update soon. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: thangam100

chapter 1 - 19 link is not working, can u check it, and can u pm me, thanks


Thank you for letting me know thangam100 here is the working link - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4119969/arshi-ss-hamesha-a-heartbeat-away-chapter-1-19

Will PM you as well. Hope you like Hamesha
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: swtsam

awesome. ..loved it...


Thank you swtsam. glad to hear the chapter feels good to read.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sk2405

Her day dreaming was amusing to read but then it was a mirror of her innocent thoughts. Poor Khushi has to bear Arnav's share of teasing too because no one really wants to be on the receiving end of that brooding man while with her, they can enjoy the lazy banter and easy teasing.

Shyam's words were not really surprising because we have seen the worst. What came as a beautiful surprise were Arnav's words that not only defended Khushi but also gave away the implicit trust he has in her. It is unbelievable how a 'tum theek ho' has the power of taking us down the memory lane even today.

My respect for Mamiji gre a little more and I really look forward to see how she gets the weddings arranged. Anjali's reaction, however, is eagerly awaited. I am sure Shyam has a role to play but I hope his role is given a logical ending here (unlike the show).

Waiting for the next part.
Update soon. 😊


what a lovely thought about Khushi bearing the teasing. You know, you are right, I think that is one reason all the raizadas like her for ASR's bride. On the show anjali and nani almost immediately took a liking to Khushi.

brooding man.. sounds so good.. haha am a little crazy about ASR.

Thank you for liking ASR's reaction to Shyam's accusations and also mamiji. Yes she can be crass, rude, lazy but there was potential in her character. I specially used to enjoy her interactions with lavanya. And implicit trust.. you used the perfect words.. right from the first moment they laid eyes on each other I think an inexplicable dori was formed between the two, and here in hamesha they have had a few weeks of easing into the relation. he had to trust her. bas.

hehe thanks for waiting eagerly.. makes me feel like writing quickly.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rk2127

Yup 'nothing to fear when aarwen is here'!!!

The update did scared me with it's beginning, with Khushi being happy and in daze of ASR's confession and there angry ASR striding towards terrace. But the twist was awesome when ASR told Khushi that she need not explain herself for Shyam's deceitful words. Now that's true love which can never be complete and right without trust.

And ASR trust Khushi period.👏 you liked the twist.. hehe me happy now.. I had a feeling Shyam might try as hard he wants to poison his saale saab but Arnav Singh Raizada would not fall for it, specially since in Hamesha Khushi has been super truthful to him. I somehow understand his reaction in the show because he was in the dark and also since he is always impulsive. I did want to capture that impulsive wild side of him, and not make him too sensible, hope that moment felt right.

Felt sorry for ASR when Anjali didn't listen to him and distanced him with calling him Arnav and not chotay. That time he must have really felt helpless and powerless as opposed to what he told Shyam. sometimes it feels like his life will always be a constant struggle.. maybe he needs a hug.. I am ready to run and fling my arms around him hehehe..

I loved mami's come back to orange saree. She truly have a good heart especially for her kids, she would do anything. For Mamiji 👏. I remember her being delightfully rude to some perpetually mean guests at shantivan who were passing snide remarks at anjali. just steered her love to pyala bahuriya this time.

And now for aarwen, for including another of my favorite scene from the serial. The running hug from Khushi when Arnav ask's her 'tum theek ho' in kidnappers place, she shakes her head and runs to hug him. Haye! 👏 ohhh hugs to you. I love that hug as well. how he smiles and how her feet dangle in the air..


I was looking forward to your thoughts on this chapter rk2127 since it was a tough one to untangle. yeaa three claps from you... and three claps right back to you for being such a fantastic reader.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: foesb

First and foremost congrats on the new thread😃 now coming to the update it was fabulous as usual. I think you are in a mission to replace all the bad moments that was shown in the drama with splendid ones😊 Arnav never had any question over Khushi's faithfulness, he knew and and trusted his heart and acted accordingly. But now I feel like there will be more hardships ahead of them as still Anjali seems to be reluctant to see the truth that's right in front of her. Khushi's gesture towards a broken Arnav was amazingly portrayed. For me it was the most beautiful scene in the entire update😊 liked the way mami acted too, she proved there is a lady with a sensitive heart beyond the loud make up she wears. Looking forward to see how you will unfold the story.


thank you foseb.. I never thought i would make it to a second thread.

hahaha you are absolutely right.. it does seem that way doesn't it? i had planned for the story to end with their wedding, and mami insisting on seeing the wedding through it gives me only the next 24 hours to bring in all my favourites.. hope it all doesn't feel too contrived and continues to flow well in the story. do tell me if sorting out of things feel forced in anyway.

trusting his heart.. lovely way to put it..

aww you liked the final scene with them together. I just saw them in another very sweet scene.. next update will have a hum bhi aapse I love you dammit.. oops hope i didn't spoil the surprise.. hehe.. but am hoping you enjoy the moment..

thanks a lot for the beautiful comment.






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Posted: 10 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: KeerthiRajkumar

nice update
waiting for anjali's reaction
arshi is enough for each other


**sigh** just reading the last lines makes me all dreamy and happy. they complete each other perfectly.

Thanks for liking the chapter. yes right now Anjali is sulking and not letting me into her room, as soon as she tells me what is going on in her head I will know what to write in the next chapter.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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you liked the chapter so much Anita? yeaaa... thank you
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank you Prettycool!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shaliniranjan

Whoa Rhea...that was one gripping update from you...first time I was actually enjoying reading the love story between Mama and Mami... Hello hi bye bye 😆

And congratualtions on the new thread...may there be many more 😉


haha love story of mama mami.. like khushi maybe you should also ask Arnavji for some spicey details..

Thank you so much for saying the chapter was gripping.

By the way I have to tell you I was reading your update and loved your sentence constructions. Mine always become a tangled mess.

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