arshi ss:Hamesha ~ A Heartbeat Away #2, Epilogue, pg 69, Updated 6/21

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Rrpdxb
Awesome !
Arnav trusted kushi, that s the big thing, but at the same time he's sister not trusting him, hope site will wake up frm deep sleep. Luved the interaction between mama ji and mamiji 😳, mamiji tusi great ho 😆,

Poojali ko convince Karna tho mushikal hei .
I was imagining Asr kushi wala cute hug
Thanku dear for the pm 🤗.

Eagerly waiting for next.

Hi Ritu so big mystery of your name is resolved. haha thank youj phar liking mami mami.. and also young couplewa arshi.. you imagine their hug.. when I write I do too.. whenever ASR smirks I end up dreaming about him and stop writing completely. no wonder my updates get delayed.

thank you ritu..will update soon.

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: prerna1
nyc update dear
so arnav trusts khushi...

yes he trusts her prerna1. Doesn't that feel nice? a little more Shyam nonsense to deal with, but hopefully after all those punches Shyam has left for good... thanks for liking.

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Arilip
Thanks for giving Arnav brains...not like cvs who made ASR brain dumb that he forgot everything about torturous time of khushi's engagement ...

I highlighted all your comment. You know arilip for some time I thought ASR would react violently and impulsively as he did, but not being able to figure out truth even after the magical holi or the sublime heer ranjha was just bad writing. Soon he was not even the tycoon working in office, but always at home. happy to oblige with this intelligent Arnav. Thank you.

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Arshika_arshi
thats nice...loved reading it...

nice to see you again arshika.. thank you

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: eishe10
Amazing update

Originally posted by: shiv456
wonderful update

Thank you for always leaving behind a sweet comment. hope you continue to enjoy the story.

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Barunz4ever
Awesome updatell! !!
Loved how you have potrayed Arnav's character. As it should have been in Ipk too. After Shyams revealation they had totally butchered Arnavs character..Unlike Ipk you have showed him strong and powerful enough to not succumb to Shyams filthy tactics n not in need of any stupid tricks from khushi to throw him out .

I am very grateful for your compliment Barunz4ever. Remember those three days of excruciating silence when he let Shyam speak against Khushi? Finally when he spoke it was only after Khushi had pleaded for him to look for the truth in her eyes. I remembered that and wrote those dialogues about him not needing an explanation. And the best part is also that here I got to have Khushi tell him the truth about Shyam.

haha fanfiction writing is too much fun and readers like you make it even more special. thank you.

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KeerthiRajkumar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

nice update
waiting for anjali's reaction
arshi is enough for each other

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foesb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

First and foremost congrats on the new thread😃 now coming to the update it was fabulous as usual. I think you are in a mission to replace all the bad moments that was shown in the drama with splendid ones😊 Arnav never had any question over Khushi's faithfulness, he knew and and trusted his heart and acted accordingly. But now I feel like there will be more hardships ahead of them as still Anjali seems to be reluctant to see the truth that's right in front of her. Khushi's gesture towards a broken Arnav was amazingly portrayed. For me it was the most beautiful scene in the entire update😊 liked the way mami acted too, she proved there is a lady with a sensitive heart beyond the loud make up she wears. Looking forward to see how you will unfold the story.

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rk2127

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Posted: 10 years ago

#39

Yup 'nothing to fear when aarwen is here'!!!

The update did scared me with it's beginning, with Khushi being happy and in daze of ASR's confession and there angry ASR striding towards terrace. But the twist was awesome when ASR told Khushi that she need not explain herself for Shyam's deceitful words. Now that's true love which can never be complete and right without trust.

And ASR trust Khushi period.👏

Felt sorry for ASR when Anjali didn't listen to him and distanced him with calling him Arnav and not chotay. That time he must have really felt helpless and powerless as opposed to what he told Shyam.

I loved mami's come back to orange saree. She truly have a good heart especially for her kids, she would do anything. For Mamiji 👏.

And now for aarwen, for including another of my favorite scene from the serial. The running hug from Khushi when Arnav ask's her 'tum theek ho' in kidnappers place, she shakes her head and runs to hug him. Haye! 👏