arshi ss:Hamesha ~ A Heartbeat Away #2, Epilogue, pg 69, Updated 6/21

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Pinky.Raizada
Yay, I am First. (I should stop writing that...😆)
Awesome I am impressed by two people, Arnav and Mamiji. Arnav for trusting Khushi (you kept your promise) and Mamiji for not stopping the wedding. Mama and Mamiji share a cute relationship. I hope Anjali trusts her brother. Poor Nani, it id deja vu for her again. Khushi's consoling hug was very nice.

Awesome Update and Update soon. (When you get time)

aww you are first again Pinky.. thank you thank you.

The big secret behind mama mami is that like cvs I forgot he existed for 19 chapters, had to furtively insert him into chapter 20. hello hi bye bye.

Yes one hurdle gone.. you trusted me.. Arnavji trusted his instinct. now who does Anjali trust? dekhike pari.. hope the chapter wasn't too intense and continued to feel like Hamesha.

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aarwen

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#22

Originally posted by: Vidhi_K
Great update. I hope Anjali she's his true colours.

Thanks vidhi. I hope she does too.

Even in actual show after the revelation I initially felt quite sad for her. She had always been a smiling teasing presence in ASR's life and now suddenly her life was turned upside down. Later when they made her selfish, petty and delusional the character lost its edge for sure. Will try to keep Anjali the way I wanted her to be, but all those days living with someone is hard to forget.

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: rosalineak
Awesome update...

Thank you dear. Good to see you come so quickly.

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: supervin76
Very nice update! And thank god you kept Arnav true to his love. Thank god he trusted his own instincts and his love for Khushi! Damn that Anjali! Also I am very proud of Mamiji. how sweet is she behind all that flash and bling! Your story is so refreshing even while resembling the original storyline. I love it!

Thanks a lot for always being encouraging supervin76.

When everyone was scared after the last update I was actually wondering how can I not let him trust her. I had not even thought of him ever distrusting her in my story. after all it has to be a happy tale. Their love story makes me so very happy. rabba ve ..

A friend of mine loves mamiji. She keeps mentioning her love for ASR, Anjali, even Akash. I did not like how she was always mean to Payal on the show, a little sourness is expected from the bossy mother-in-law, but I would have loved to see some moments when she softened. During ASR's kidnapped phase there were some days when she wasn't mean to khushi. I remembered all that and chose to make her hopefully what is a sweeter character here whiel keeping the essential mami intact. Am happy you liked her.

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Arshi_shan
A wonderful update...story is taking a nice direction...
Thank God Arnav trusts his love...and Kushis love for him...the way it should be...
Maami ji...so sweet of her...thinks of the other toota shadi and wants to ensure this one happens...Mann ki sachi..
Shyam ko aur do mukke milte to achcha hota!!
And Anjali...I think you have something else planned for her...maybe she wanted the dual wedding to happen before ousting her cheat of a husband???
Kushi...and woh baat...❤️😳❤️

hi arshi_shan thank you for commenting on the chapter. phew you like where the story is heading.. I promise I sometimes feel like tearing my hair out figuring if what I am writing is making any sense or not.

loved that line..the way it should be.. In the show Khushi never told ASR about Shyam, that complicated matters, finally he didn't really need proof and ended up trusting Khushi. Here when Khushi told him the truth I knew their path to a happy hamesha had just turned easier.

haha well I made ASR punch him and slap him manny time.. tumhe aur chahiye? okay promise before the story ends some more Shyam bashing opportunity will come.

For Anjali I feel sad right now. In almost all our stories she always goes through this heartbreak, but yes I do have a plan for her. I plan to make her strong.

thrilled to hear your thoughts on all the various aspects of the chapter.. isweet mami and in love Khushi hayee.. thank you ..

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Pdrover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Wonderful update
So happy arnav trust khushi and mamiji
Poor anjali, hoping she listens to arnav and all and not run behind that snakewa

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Read two chapters together👏

couple of things had me and I swooned with em.

First there is never need to communicate these two with words,Their actions, their eye locks, their hearts, body gestures, their distance, their proximity talks always .Words take shapes in between there and screamed out in the echo of heart so flawlessly that no one can imagine...bas pata chal jata hai...like that moment.

He delivered his message ...wo baat and after that there is nothing left.

TRUST is a fine thin line...After confession , there is no need for him to say I trust you of whatever...A man of words has this...already that she is his and she is always right.

Two women in his life but with Khushi , it is always an equal partnership, courtship at every level.

She is his compatibility from all sides and when you have that kind of relationship , TRUSt is always set its norms and rules by itself.

Love Mamaji and his arrival👏

Mamiji is really good in this story so hi five

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Pdrover
Wonderful update
So happy arnav trust khushi and mamiji
Poor anjali, hoping she listens to arnav and all and not run behind that snakewa

happy to know that you enjoyed the update pdrover.poor anjali for sure.. 3 years worshipping a despicable man.. I hope she does not run after him too.

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: .ArshiHamesha.
Read two chapters together👏
couple of things had me and I swooned with em.

First there is never need to communicate these two with words,Their actions, their eye locks, their hearts, body gestures, their distance, their proximity talks always .Words take shapes in between there and screamed out in the echo of heart so flawlessly that no one can imagine...bas pata chal jata hai...like that moment.

He delivered his message ...wo baat and after that there is nothing left.

TRUST is a fine thin line...After confession , there is no need for him to say I trust you of whatever...A man of words has this...already that she is his and she is always right.

Two women in his life but with Khushi , it is always an equal partnership, courtship at every level.

She is his compatibility from all sides and when you have that kind of relationship , TRUSt is always set its norms and rules by itself.

Love Mamaji and his arrival👏

Mamiji is really good in this story so hi five

Faiqa di I loved that paragraph about no words needed between them. my story gives that impression? thank you so much. you know, many times when I am writing I miss the actors, because I imagine how well their boddy language would have communicated the moment.

And beautiful understanding you have of the equal partnership. Both are getting fulfilled out of this love. I hope that rooftop scene with Shyam felt real enough. trust.. like you say it had to be present. ASR has declared his love for Khushi, how can he doubt her now?

about mamaji.. I suddenly realised that I had missed him completely from the story. Tried hard to bring him back without making a mess of it. haha.. and this mamiji is who I would have liked to see on the show. Her tongue can be acidic and she can be lazy, her likes can be materialistic, but once in a while her love for all the children (and specially bahuriyas included) should show.

Thank you for swooning di. your words made me extremely happy.

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aarwen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: pup03
Arnav trusted khushi is big thing and even in deep distress for his dear sister not trusting him he is asking khushi, "Tum Theek ho" haye mar jawaan.. love arnav.. mamiji is so saddened but marriagewa ho kar hi rahegi.. mama-mami were cute. creepwa is thrown out or he still around with his poojali, the blind wife.. loved the update it was wonderful..

thanks for pm 😊

yeaaa you noticed the tum thik ho.. I imagine ASR that way you know. He cares for di, and will try and be strong for everyone, but now there is a lovely girl to hug him and make him feel better too.

poojali..haha.. which reminds me I should have probably made anjali pray more in my story..

thank you for loving the update pup03. am thrilled the chapter felt good.

marriagewa toh ho kar rahegi for issure.