Just an UMBRELLA- Epilogue- Satin--Pg 135 - Page 85

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Posted: 18 years ago
Too good. Ending was sad and i would prefer happy ending. But this makes this ff different from others and as you said we don't always have happy endings andi agree. I liked it very much. Won't lie, but my eyes filled up lol!
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Posted: 18 years ago
Well i hope u guys enjoyed bashing me up. But the ending will not change, there is an epilogue coming up in a few minutes, and then i will direct my efforts into my other FF.

The story for that one has been so bad, and borring just cause i am too concerned about this one. But i wont complain this FF was the one that i enjoyed writing the most, the supense and thrills 😳 😳 i will certainly miss it all. Anyways thanks guys for being a wonderful audience and encouraging me to keep writting.

love ya all

muni😛
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: munizaaa

Well i hope u guys enjoyed bashing me up. But the ending will not change, there is an epilogue coming up in a few minutes, and then i will direct my efforts into my other FF.

The story for that one has been so bad, and borring just cause i am too concerned about this one. But i wont complain this FF was the one that i enjoyed writing the most, the supense and thrills 😳 😳 i will certainly miss it all. Anyways thanks guys for being a wonderful audience and encouraging me to keep writting.

love ya all

muni😛

No Muni, we all enjoyed it. Everyone is used to happy endings that it was hard to take in i guess. But the whole ff was rocking and keep writing many ffs. I enjoyed it reading very much because of the suspenses and i used to even try and work out the suspense. But it never worked :( lol

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: mitali_s

nooooooooooooo...u cant do this 😭 😭 😭
u cant let the evil win...y did u do this...god kripa dead and poor angad all alone in the world 😭
y didn't u kill him also...atleast they cud have been 2gether afta death.........i hate u 😭
SORRY!
Aam i sounding pshyco 😕

newayz fic was amazing ofcourse xcept for ending...i will miss it

thanks

well in life, its not always the good that wins. i know u guys will say this is fiction, but i like the harsh realities of life and believe that its important to face it. I know i am crazy😆😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: munizaaa

Well i hope u guys enjoyed bashing me up. But the ending will not change, there is an epilogue coming up in a few minutes, and then i will direct my efforts into my other FF.

The story for that one has been so bad, and borring just cause i am too concerned about this one. But i wont complain this FF was the one that i enjoyed writing the most, the supense and thrills 😳 😳 i will certainly miss it all. Anyways thanks guys for being a wonderful audience and encouraging me to keep writting.

love ya all

muni😛

No, our intention was never to bash you up. I am sorry, if you felt like that after reading my message at least. On my behalf, the only justification I can give is that I was too attached to your ff, and since yesterday had been as it is rough, I was a bit disappointed with the end.

But, now I can totally understand, your the writer & who can better decide the end than you & I am pretty sure that you must have put a lot of though for the ending.

Besides, the main thing is not about happy ending... my disappointment was due to a few unanswered questions, and the biggest is what happens to Angad? which, ofcourse you will be answering with the epilogue.. And, the evil winning was a bit sad...everyone should have lost, but again its entirely not possible.. Realistically at least one side is ultimately the winner..

Will be waiting for the epilogue.. 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Andekhi

No, our intention was never to bash you up. I am sorry, if you felt like that after reading my message at least. On my behalf, the only justification I can give is that I was too attached to your ff, and since yesterday had been as it is rough, I was a bit disappointed with the end.

But, now I can totally understand, your the writer & who can better decide the end than you & I am pretty sure that you must have put a lot of though for the ending.

Besides, the main thing is not about happy ending... my disappointment was due to a few unanswered questions, and the biggest is what happens to Angad? which, ofcourse you will be answering with the epilogue.. And, the evil winning was a bit sad...everyone should have lost, but again its entirely not possible.. Realistically at least one side is ultimately the winner..

Will be waiting for the epilogue.. 😛

Aww dont worry i didnt mind you guys reactions to the end, it was quite expected, and some of them made me laugh😆😆.

And ya you asked me about the title well it was a concept of how an umberella protects you from rain, kind of like how angad finally realeases kripa of all her suffering, with his love😳. Dont worry if you dont understand it, its a very philosophical meaning not to be taken literally at all.

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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwww that was a great and sad ending!!! 😭 ...i couldnt believe krips would commit suicide!! and i never ever imagined the thing about tarun and ria!!!!!!! traitors!!! that was sad but this was an awesome ff u did a wonderful job and ill be looking forward to your new fan-fic, Busted!! By the Way, did the title have anything to do with the story in any way or were u just being random when you chose it: Just an UMBRELLA? 😉 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Numera89

lol well as long as angad dies too im good lol one cant live and the other die cuz that just torture to live like that!! i really wished that angad ran into the house with a gun and shot them right in the head!! ohh and kill tarun before ria so ria watches her love die before her eyes!!! then that B**** will know how it feels!! i cant believe that whore called kripa a b****, i hope angad kill keeps stabbing her lol dont hold back on the details of their death! i wanna c lots a gore and violence 😡 make their deaths cruel and brutal just like how they made angad and kripa's life miserable!! i hope angad kills josh first without even thinking or regretting!!! and do something like before angad shoots himself (cuz i dont want gore for him but a quick painless death, which is what he deserves- a death with peace thats inviting like kripa lol)i hope that he closes his eyes sees kripa and shoots himself lol perfect end!!! just as long as kripa and her baby get avenged im good!! lol for a while i thought u were gonna leave the story on the depressing note that angad was all alone without a kid and his love and their murderers celebrating their deaths and his misery!!! lol glad ur not!! continue soon!

you know numera i always wait for your comments they seriously make my day😆😆 i will certainly keep your views in mind in the epilogue😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
lol thanks!! GOD!!! i had to change my username cuz the stupid thing wouldnt let me log on!!! lol anyways cant wait for the next part!
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Posted: 18 years ago

yooo i love it!!! i love the sad ending its very unconventional. im actually planning a sad ending for my one of my ff's to so im happy i wont be the only writer 😆

but...

YOU HAVE TO MAKE ANGAD GO FULL ON TERRORIST ON THEM ALL OF EM!!!!! I MEAN FULL ON "NO MERCY" KINDA OF A THING. BRING EVERY DAMN WEAPON IN THE WORLD INTO IT 😆 AND THEN BECOME THE LEADER OF THE GANG WORLD AGAIN (yes im shouting this statement)

👏

acutually i change my mind, angad shudnt kill them. he shud move away to a small town and start anew. Josh n them shud get punished, but not cuz of Angad, he shud start a non profit organization for kids hu join gangs. josh n em...they shud get wut they deserve from life itself...hmmmm

Edited by Desi Pride - 18 years ago

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