Just an UMBRELLA- Epilogue- Satin--Pg 135 - Page 86

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Posted: 18 years ago
muni not fair na?

u killed her 😭

haila and it was there own friends.....betrayl 😭

all i can say this was the best ff EVER

thnx 4 writing
kanwer 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Desi Pride

yooo i love it!!! i love the sad ending its very unconventional. im actually planning a sad ending for my one of my ff's to so im happy i wont be the only writer 😆

but...

YOU HAVE TO MAKE ANGAD GO FULL ON TERRORIST ON THEM ALL OF EM!!!!! I MEAN FULL ON "NO MERCY" KINDA OF A THING. BRING EVERY DAMN WEAPON IN THE WORLD INTO IT 😆 AND THEN BECOME THE LEADER OF THE GANG WORLD AGAIN (yes im shouting this statement)

👏

acutually i change my mind, angad shudnt kill them. he shud move away to a small town and start anew. Josh n them shud get punished, but not cuz of Angad, he shud start a non profit organization for kids hu join gangs. josh n em...they shud get wut they deserve from life itself...hmmmm

thats too nice it would not suit Angad at all😆😆 i like the first idea though😆😆

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Posted: 18 years ago

Enjoy i know you will:

Epilogue

She said taking the wine glass that josh had poured for him and sipping it slowly, as Tarun and josh laughed mockingly imitating Angad's shocked expression.

Angad picked Kripa's body in his arms, for a second he though would collapse not with the weight but with shock. He put her slowly on the bed, and picked up the phone, but he did not know for what, who was he suppose to call, the doctor? Or the police? Or the morgue?

He put it back down, tears once again clouding his eyes. He did not wish to live anymore, his child was gone, his wife was gone, and it was all his fault, maybe he deserved this punishment. He pulled out a gun from the drawer put it to his head, ready to shoot himself. But he put it back down, he deserved to stay alive and suffer, in pain, death would be too easy.

He picked up the phone again this time his intentions clear, he would call the police and take the blame all on him self, that he had murdered Kripa. They would believe it, after all he was one of the most wanted. In jail he would have nothing to kill himself with. He would force himself to live!

Half way through dialing the numbers his fingers stopped. Something had caught his eye it was a piece of rope slightly sticking out from under the bed. He bend down taking it out, there was blood on it and it seemed as though it was hastily cut with a knife. As though it was a second instinct he grabbed Kripa's uninjured wrist, there were marks of struggle.

*******

Ria, Tarun, and josh drank until midnight, until all of them had close to passed out. It was a constant annoying ticking sound that woke ria up, she shook Tarun, "Tarun…get up I can hear something."

"Its nothing let me sleep." Tarun said dozing off.

"Josh, whats that sound."

"Huh what sound oh it must me the clock." Ria looked around in the room there was no clock, "there is no clock."

"oh then it must be--" Josh never got another word out, because the building exploded.

"a bomb" Angad finished the sentence, pressing the button, "you were right Kripa we would never be able to live in peace as long as the gangs were around, but see I destroyed it. I destroyed everything. I do not deserve any punishment now" Angad said smiling to himself, "I do not have to suffer anymore," He put the gun to his head pulling the trigger, as the police approached, unable to do anything but stare in shock, "I love you Kripa" All went black.

Ok guys for a little bit of amusement don't read it if you are very religious, I don't want to offend anyone:

The next time that Angad's eyes opened he found Kripa beside him, smiling, she was dressed in pure white, with golden wings attached to her back "I was waiting for you, late like always." Angad looked around, wow he had made it to heaven how was that possible?

He smile in spite of himself, "I am not late I was just taking care of some business."

She rolled her eyes, "I know what business you were taking care I was watching from above." She sat down in his lap putting her hands around him.

"Angad don't you want to know what happened to Josh, Ria and Tarun."

"What do you mean?"

"Look below." she said trying to keep her face straight

Angad looked down and laughed as he had never laughed before, the three villans were being chased into the big bowl of fire by Satin himself.

😆 😆 😆




Edited by munizaaa - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
that was funny, the ending!!!!!!!! 😆 GREAT epilouge!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
😆 😆 haha well that was a happy ending nd im surprised how he made it to heaven also no offenc i new he wud 😳 koi tho achai hai angad mein actualy usme acahi hi acahi hai:D:D:D:D
gr8 awsome
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Posted: 18 years ago
MUNI I LOVE U SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH 😛

the ff is over but omg i am so happi that AK are together 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
overall da fanfic was great...luved da ending hahaha. I hope u start another fanfic soon

Nida
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Posted: 18 years ago
haila!! that was awesomee!! u fulfilled my wish!! yay.. they are together!!! awesome..

i am religious, very(muslim), but that was halarious..

the satin thing!! haha.. i'm still laughing at it..

good OFFICIAL ending!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
lol that was funny and lol in a happy ending lol!!! aww im gonna miss this ff!! it was soo cool with the violence and dangerous angad and kripa!!! lol i think dear diary is awesome!!! i think josh needs to but out though and get a girl of his own its like josh wants angad to turn gay or somethin cuz everytime angad likes someone josh ends up doing somethin horrible to them lol maybe he is secretly gay LMAO!!!! lol but i lovedddddd the end cuz it wasnt depressing lol!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
{sigh of relief} Thank god they weren't seperated! 😃 😳

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