ArHi FF: A River Runs Through It - Link to Thread 2 on Page 1

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Whiterainbow

@Whiterainbow

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#211

I hope it's OK if I comment here...I loved the start...

I Remember going through similar syndrome during my schooling years, the first day of the new session and the day before would give me the creeps, nervous energy, strange feeling in the stomach...inspite of knowing very well that it would be the same bunch of kids I will be studying with

This kind of continued through college ...am glad there are people like me even if they are fictional 😛

Quote

Vaiga

@Aashmin

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#212

Hi meera... First of all welcome back dear...
I'm so happy to see you... I haven't read the update actually.. I was so happy that I can't do that with out telling you how happy I'm...I don't know whether you remember me or not.. Bt I used to comment n stalk every piece u wrote.. Wt u n so many others gone IF was really dry for me.. I rarely login now.. Bt I guess this is again getting better.. Devi is updating kalarikkal house.. Eccentricca is also back.. N Ana also... N some new good authors too.. All together it's a happy time... I l comment once I read d update.. Thanks for being back...

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#213

Meera, this is the first time I would be following your ongoing story and I am so excited to do it.

The prologue was very interesting.

Loved the bonding between Khushi and her sister and loved this Arjun guy too.

So Khushi and Arnav already know each other. Looks like they share a past.

Waiting to read more.

Quote

kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#214

That's wonderful and interesting prologue

Quote

Anu567

@Anu567

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#215

Meera,

As I said when I heard you were launching into a new A and K story...just so excited. Waiting to follow this awesome start all the way through...love it.

Best,

Edited by Anu567 - 10 years ago

Quote

SS88

@SS88

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#216

A beautiful start, Meera. SO glad you're writing again. I understand Khushi's issues completely. I like new places , but i have anxiety issues and separation issues and I often feel very nervous in new surroundings. Can't wait to read more.

Quote

rizib

@rizib

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#217

That part about being away from Ma as a basic comfort is spot on! I know it's all for our own good, still it could be suffocating at times with all their care..

Sweet sisters' bond. What's with Khushi and Arjun? Did she have a crush or did he have one on the sister?

Aww.. so sweet of him to try and make her get rid of her nervousness!

Ok, so there's a past for Arnav and Khushi, and maybe even Arjun with them. When she says a common thread, does she mean that she had to have new beginnings because of him?

Some parts are little bit confusing, but I'm sure it'll get clear in a couple of chapters.

Aye Ajnabi! Aaahhh. nostalgia... :)

Quote

arpitasharma

@arpitasharma

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#218

So this is it! A new journey has been embarked upon that has not only given us glimpses of beauty, friendship and love but has also promised us rocks, gravels and plenty of erosion till we reach the delta.

Kaveri Khushi Gupta is edgy but smart, ambitious but uncertain, and theatrical yet mysterious. Very much like the river. Arjun and Tripti excite me no end. Your characters are always a delight to unravel, M. Sketching some believable and really memorable characters is really your forte.

Thank you so much Meera Di for doing this. Looking forward to more of your magic :)

P.S: Lovely song M! Such intensity! One of my favorites, in fact. You won't believe I've been humming that song for days now and driving my friends crazy. I have a thing for powerful melodies. Bring it on! I am going to savour them to my heart's content!

*rubs hands in glee*

Quote

bkamber

@bkamber

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#219

Loved the prologue.
I have read your Emerald Isle and am looking forward to this story.

Kerrie

Quote

kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#220

Very interesting prologue and a more interesting note; so is this almost like an autobiagraphy? ;)

First of all I loved the names; Kaveri Khushi and Arnav Varun!! Very unique and apt for the story you are going to weave or narrate..It was also interesting to note the location you chose; Kolkata; Isn't this where River Ganga (or her tributary, Bhagirathi) empties into Bay of Bengal? Metaphorical to Khushi meeting Arnav there? :) (even though they have a past)...

I can resonate with the jitters Khushi going through..even with more than a decade of experience, the job hunt is freaking me out (soon going to be jobless) and for me I run to restroom instead of throwing up😆 I dont know if Tripti and Arjun's teasing is helping Khushi but they sure understand her very well..

All the best to Khushi's first day at new job and I'm looking forward to meeting Arnav 😳

(ps: Arnav Swami had south Indian roots in AWW now Kaveri Khushi does here 😳)

(pps: I miss Swami😳)