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smile1412

@smile1412

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#221

Hey ! Welcome back meera!!!! Lovely to see you back writing our favourite stories !!!

Looking forward to reading this wonderful story in the making !!!!

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

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Posted: 10 years ago

#222

A very warm welcome Dear Meera:)

Will be seeing you in your blog ...loving the title, I look forward to this journey, the prologue itself gives me the goose bumps.

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peppygeek

@peppygeek

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Posted: 10 years ago

#223

I just saw the post today. Just 2 questions. Where and When?

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Jay

@jduke

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#224

Welcome back 🤗

Interesting prologue.

Kaveri Kushi and Arnav Varun interesting names.

I am already loving the plot 😊

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#225

Amazing start.

Loved how you describe new place and Khushi's nervousness so beautifully. No doubt she wake up way before time and her sister knew she would be up already and text by her sister was so sweet. It shows how close they might be.

There are lots of questions but I know they will be answered when time comes, so I am just being patient, will wait for time.

But It's clear that Khushi is about to face her past which was making her restless.

Looking forward to read more.

Loving it already. Thanks for update.

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Sanaya Javaid

@Hope_Life

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#226

Simply awesome.👏What a sublime way you have explained her anxieties, her excitements, her ambitions and her hesitancy to change .Because I have that and I can totally relate to that.I don't like to be away from my routines either.Something I feel in my tummy and same as Khushi Kevari, I love the name, a river, unpredictable but at the same time full of energy.

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Aparna

@-aparna-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#227

I tried hard to not read prologue and wait for some chapters but after AWW, i knew i wud be more fun to join thw journey.:D

loved khushi's char. Description... Wont guess anything...too bad at it.

I liked names Arnav Varun and kavery khushi..waiting to see how Ocean and River meets...