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1likeNoOther

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Posted: 10 years ago

#641

Loved it!! So payal likes akash and he likes her?? Huh?? Where did that come from?? Unexpected turn but i like it. Looking forward to the next update 😊

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rulama

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Posted: 10 years ago

#642

Radhika... This update is full of realizations...

Arnav realizing where Payal's asli love lay... politics

Payal realizing where her asli love lay... not the A she is with but the A she is not with!

Arnav realizing that with Payal's announcement of postponing the wedding day it is relief and not disappointment that is the predominant feeling in him...

Khushi realizing that there is a helpful hand helping her to resolve her problems...

Divyesh realizing that Khushi has got a whiff of their act...

Preeto realizing that the line between hatred and love is really thin... Suspecting that it is not the A that she thought but another A who is behind Khushi's thoughts...

Poonam realizing that she is lonely at the top with her children all the time going to their father... She is the last to get any news of them...

Poonam realizing that she needs help from the Gen Next to run the show...

HP realizing that Payal is not inclined to marry Arnav...

Poonam realizing that she is trespassing a grown up son's privacy by reading RM's letter to Arnav...

Khushi realizing that she too is at fault to an extent with her relationship with New-Onites...

Akash realizing now Khushi is equipped to face their fellow classmates and still hold on

Khushi realizing that Arnav is extending to her a friendship hand and not with any devious motive...

And finally... I am realizing that Renu Bhabhi is being planted at Khushi's house!

Why has she turned up only after Khushi's parents left for Lucknow???

As I said earlier, Fantastic update...

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

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Posted: 10 years ago

#643

Hmm.. interesting...will Poonam Raizada ask Arnav outright or will she ask Roy? Roy should be easier to crack with the added bonus of her son not getting to know that she read his personal mail.

I liked the part when she is wondering why her children talk more to her husband than her and then a part acceptance of the fact that it is her behavior that drives them to do so...

And there is more to Renu bhabhi than meets the eye?

So Payal has taken a shine to Aakash? I wonder what brought that on? And Arnav if your overwhelming reaction to the postponement was relief, you need to seriously revaluate this marriage with Payal thing.. or maybe he has already started doing that ...

Loved the last couple of lines... time to begin where it all started?

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Uzii

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Posted: 10 years ago

#644

Nice update i think akash is interested in payal n it seems that she also have feeling for him, ok lets see what happens.

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Asma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#645

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DCazMqCJVMc[/YOUTUBE]

First things first, brilliant title for this chapter. This is such a perfect song for the Arnav and Khushi of your story.

I realised something about this story after this update, that at its heart it is about second chances - for every single character.

Khushi has always been a wonderful character in your story, but she took baby steps towards character growth herself in this chapter. That is wonderful.

I had always wondered how would Arnav and Khushi's relationship be able to move in a meaningful direction with all the past baggage, but I think you sort of clicked on the reset button for them and they can make a fresh start. But I am sure something will go wrong 😆

Normally I would think that the place where you left off the story was a cliffhanger, but you do leave a lot to the reader's interpretation. So I am thinking the next chapter won't continue where you left off 😆

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lilakumariacnw

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Posted: 10 years ago

#646

loved the update...

still mysteries are there...waiting for that..

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Onlooker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#647

Thank you for the update..

Arnav understood that she did not save his number and no misunderstandings on that..Thank god..I like him more..

Arnav and Payal are relieved that wedding has been postponed..and Payal is gravitating towards Aakash..But reading about the accident was a shock..

Arnav and Kushi meet..quite warm..i should say..She acknowledged that she had a crush on him..

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Sheetal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#648

Thanks Radhika !! To make sure I will be always on healthy side 😉 by posting this weekend .

Humm!! Shadi got postponed,I am also relived like Arnav!! But I am sure If there is akash +Payal in future Arnav will surely going to use his fav "what the f***" will wait for that moment even though I feel very bad for him "that will be super cheating ", lots of realization in one chapter... And surely making me think like other here that If mihir is Shyam ? So Shyam n bhabi are planning also against khushi.. U said khushi is getting to know where Shyam will be..? It will be very interesting revelation, all I hope it will not create more complicated situation between khushi n Raizadas . But looking from Arnav n Khushi's perspective both incidents will be epic betrayals for them . Hope they support each other.. Ending with Reunion in new-on asking me plead u to write sooner than usual "YST" ..pl pl pl update sooner than we expected and surprise us!!

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canapoem

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Posted: 10 years ago

#649

Originally posted by: rulama
Radhika... This update is full of realizations...

HP realizing that Payal is not inclined to marry Arnav...

And finally... I am realizing that Renu Bhabhi is being planted at Khushi's house!

Why has she turned up only after her parents left for Lucknow???

As I said earlier, Fantastic update...

Above line in blue really cracked me up Rashmi. 😆

Really do you think that Renu bhabhi has some other motive? Wow this one shocking revelation.

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rizib

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Posted: 10 years ago

#650

It was a brilliant update, as usual. Now I know who Akash loves, it's Payal. And seems like she is reciprocating it too.. Happy for them even though I'm not very comfy with Payal's character. People change for the better when they are with the right people. Arnav was never right for her, so Akash would be her "The One".

I'm having a bad feeling about Poonam reading Roy's message to Arnav. But then something tells me, if she attacks poor Khushi this time, Arnav will be there to hold her and fight back, even though it is his mom.

Loved the last part. Starting over. Perfect! Now that he feels relieved about his wedding being postpone, Arnav seems to be optimistic regarding Khushi. Maybe he doesn't realize it romantically, still there is something.

Missed Aman in this update. Hope to read more about him. I think next update onwards Arnav will out weigh Aman with regards to our liking the character. The last part gives hope that we will see a more cheerful Arnav. Whatever happens I hope Aman's heart is not broken.