Tewari & Sons, 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD II)

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fatima2603

@fatima2603

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#631

Oh yay you updated! I was getting worried that you had forgotten this story!

Payal and akash need to make out already! Lol...arnav and payal have such a odd almost sibling like relationship!

And why is arnav and divyesh helping khushi out??

I loved the ending of the chapter and really wanted to read more!!! It made me smile!

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MDTharun

@MDTharun

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#632

I honestly did not expect an update today , finally Sunday seems to be lucky & now I can stop stalking .

Payal & her father Samir have met with accident , I feel its a good news for khushi because she will get breathing time & do necessary arrangements to save Tewari & sons . Avtaar tewari has backed off , all thanks to ASR & Divyesh (though Divyesh's help is surprising ) . Khushi too feels that their is more to the story , she is a smart girl .

Payal has decided to postpone wedding which is a good news for Arnav - khushi lovers 😉 , but she seems to be very clear about her decision . Its high time she admits that their is no chemistry / love between her & Arnav . Looks like she is clear about her feelings for Akash . Arnav has also started noticing his fianc's sudden interest in Akash . Jhalli is very fond of Horlicks & believes in feeding everyone the same (I love Horlicks too 😆 ) NK has the ability to diffuse an tensed atmosphere , loved his antics in the Hospital & Fashion Event .

Preetho is complaining about her brand new daughter who is hell bent on driving her parents upto the wall , well all the new parents has the same complaints .

Khushi admits to herself that she did have crush on Arnav 😃 & Arnav is hurt to know khushi hasn't saved his number , young love 😆 In fact in this mobile era we have forgotten to memorise any numbers & do not even bother to write in Phone diary

Payal is disappointed that Akash will not turn up for the fashion event which did not go unnoticed by Arnav . Akash & Arnav are the New Directors of AR , wondering how much smoothly will they handle their Business together .

The last part of the update left me wanting for more . I know this is the longest update but did you really have to stop it there 😛

Edited by MDTharun - 10 years ago

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Prty

@Prty

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#633

Loved the update Radhika

Wow a New Introduction a New Start (hopefull)

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SS88

@SS88

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#634

Okay, first things first. I missed you. Welcome back

Secondly, is something happening between Payal and Akaash? No, really, I'm serious. It can't be just me. Something's fishy there.

Thirdly, is Mihir really Shyam? Is Renu actually Shyam's wife? WTH is happening here? Who is this Gupta stealing from the Raizadas?

Fourthly, the last bit was spectacular. Esp the re-introduction.

Fifthly, please don't keep us waiting for too long again.

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#635

That was fantastic...👏

Is Renu Bhabhi the beneficiary of Mihir's pilferage???

Was that why she was planted with Khushi to get hold of Tewari and Sons???

Will write more when I get time and this seems to be the norm for the time being!

Sorry about that...

If I don't write this much, incase I don't get time the next update will also have come up and it overloads my guilt sense...

Continued here

Edited by rulama - 10 years ago

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#636

For once my guess about Divyesh turned out to be correct too much happened in the update..can't type comments from tablet !! Will comment more tomorrow

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Prty

@Prty

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#637

by the way what happened between Arnav and Aman at khushi's shop.

What would Akash want to talk about Renu Bhabi, hope Mihir gupta is not Shyam.

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#638

Awesome update as usual R!!! Totally loved the update!!

Okay what's going on between Payash, if they are in love they need to tell before they hurt many people or maybe before they hurt just their parents :-)

Oh oh poonam saw the note hopefully she will not put two and two together, I can hope right. What does Akash want with Renu? Too many questions yaar. Please update soon like tomorrow lol!!!!

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kethgauthami1

@kethgauthami1

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#639

Your story seems to be so much like a journey of life...nice and refreshing...

This update is nice and oho now waiting for to know what will happen when Poonam gets to know about A, K in that letter

I guess Payal and Akash like each other, first i thought payal loves Aman...

Waiting for more Arnav and Kushi interaction in your subtle way...(i dont need rabba veys)...i just love ur story

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#640

Brilliant update.

Lots of things happen in this chapter. Finally Payal hit her head and got some sense in this accident. Maybe like NK said she might have thought about Akash at that moment. She is talking about him more these days. And thank god finally arnav noticed things about Payal and Akash. Hope he take guess and leave them alone.

Loved that he is still hurt about Khushi not noticing him or not saving his number. Maybe that's why he reintroduce himself in the end. Hope now things might move forwards between them. And we could get some rabba ve😃.

At last poonam razaida is back. She and HP should start their own investigating agency. They don't have other work, just having doubt on everyone. She don't leave her own son alone. Hope arnav come to know about this letter soon before this crazy woman do any more harm to Khushi.

You left this chapter in such a point that it will keep me restless till next update.

Update soon.