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Posted: 10 years ago
Already ek ress ye galat baat h
koi na unress dont worry iss baar proper comment kar hi dungi
n ek baar jo mene commiment kr di phir me apne aap ki bhi nhi sumnti


Ummm unress finally be happy
Finally me pritha the grt is unressin maen this date shud be written in history
Whaaattt dont look at me with tht looks I knw I m late mene bola tha I will unress ma comment ye to nhi bola I will do it soon bhaawanaao ko samjho diii lol
Okaayyy u knw wht i m gonna do after readin few update of urs when rd will appear appear in reality in frnt me
I will do nthin but I m gonna ask u *sammy diii kaun h ye aadmi* lol never in ma wild fantasies I expected tht frm myself but u made me do tht nw I m hell irritated fr god knws why tht too with rd OMG can u bellievve it well I cant and as they say *pyaar kabhi marta nhi * I dunno mera pyaa kitne mins me jaagega as fr nw mere andar ki girl is hell irritated with this guy
Nw mein zyaada bore nhi krne waali u r safe fr nw I can say tht
Now cumin to ma comment lemme warn u fr wht I will say at last

R u sure this guy is rd I mean he is after whatever he did n said huh
Banda pakka bahu ban gaya ghosh cryin n all
God ji thodi to akl parcel krdo yaar ise
Btw roega nhi to bechaara kya krega acchi do gals k beech me pisne k baad bande ko to rona hi tha naaa
Maen hr baar gussa cheezo pe hi kyu utaarte ho yr bechaare showpieces ne ky bigaada h rd ka show me mera pyaara panchu pit ta h n yaha ye bechaare showpiedes n all ufff
Sanyu ji pehli baar aapne kuch sahi fr tht I wanna give u an award
Der se shi but realize to hua tht u shudnt waste ur tym over a jerk huh

Atleast he showed sum care to shinu warna I thought tht haddi gal
had denied him to do so arghhh
N wth he though sanyu did smthin to his daughter like really does he think she is insane like him dude wake up mane
Oh yeah nw he gettin angry when sanyu pulled shinu away frm him male ego gt hurt ouchhh beta ad tujhe pata chalega hw it feels
Time fr tit fr tat insult k badle insult
Arre yaar phir ek flower pot toda didnt bechaare pts I pity them ek aur bechaar flower ko maar daala you khooni
Silent torture gud its gud wanna fight go on maen here no one to fight with u
Oh boy I cant understand this maen on one hand he wants vidushi first love n all n on other hand he wants sanyukta too ghosh fulltoo tharki n all haa lol
Showin concern after doin this much with her haa n expectin her to respond dhakkan h kya wo like rd ji
Offo gussa to always in his yaar volcano v itna erupt nhi hota jitna rd ka gussa maen I guess sanyu again anothr award kese jhelti h yaar
Ya ya ya ab aayi akl thikaane expression of rd worth imaginin when sanyu said she left to search a house
She wont take his wrds seriously really
seriously nhi legi to ky joke smjh k hasegi u duffot
Bday aaya bday aaya partyyy lol
He wished her maen he got guts haa
She asked fr smthin is it divorce I think soo but ye ky jst a normal day y mere dimaag k upar se gya okkk nhi gya its cuz fr tha last tym she wanted to cherish each small moments they used to share but only if tym cud be reversed


Its impossible to frget everythin n make everthin normal again aftr all this
Now here goes tha guilt game he is feelin guilty but why sanyu hs ruined his life so why is he guilty over here
Maen wht ws he thinkin when she asked fr gift lol he got scared I thought he ws thinkin smthin like every wife wants n husbands r like here she goes why did I even asked
But truly I loved tha gift she asked it showed the pure love she hs fr rd this is wht irritates me utmost she loved him fr wht he ws with honesty left everythin even hr identity n he left her when she needed him tha most jst cuz his long lost love is back n said few lovey dovey wrds n said a simple sry wow hw strng his love ws
Simple yet beautiful day normal yet intense it ws reflectin the pain she ws carryin inside her
Omggg she rejected his gift gud sanyu baby now its tym fr revenge bwahahaha to make rd taste his own medicine
*badla the revenge * =):P
Last night with each other omggg they made love hawww
Rddd maen he is gawwwddd lol
No jokes here yeah actually this part ws another best part of the update other thn the whole day wala part yeah I loved this part to tha most actually
It ws hell intense hell tears escaped frm my eyes fr the first tym after so many days I didnt got irritated by rds behaviour well here didnt did anything like tht too but still no comments
*A husband needs his wife n a wife needs her husband *
Sacchi kahu ye kuch kuch mere mind k upar se paar hua bt still loved this line



core. There ws jst a shrt moment few wrds but still the few were enough to feel the grief inside thm.
N here he goes again guilt guilt n guilt but fr makin love to her yeah he shud be poor guy scared nw she wud be clingy n all with him again arghhh *where is ma hammer*
No cmnts fr this guilt thingy
His house ws like before sanyu came to it yet nthin cn be like tht
Thnk god she is leavin nw I wanted this fr sooo long
But maen it ws hell emotional
Me cryin reee but ye khushi k nhi shock n emotions k aasu h reee dont ask me emotions k aasu kya hote kuch mila nhi to ye type kr diya
Ye dialogues mujhe dede thakur I hv fallen fr thm hardly reee whtever sanyu said ws like sooo heartfelt maen ma mouth gt zipped
N tha best part
*Sanyukta: Okay okay! I will not. But why are you so sad? You should be happy that I am leaving. The biggest burden on you head is going out of your life now. Now there will be no one to fight with you , irritate you, embarrass you in front of your frnds , of course. You you don't have to listen to my pathetic voice, only happiness. *
Can I say this ws heart of tha whole update fr me
N lines aftr this one too but I m nt gonna copy paste again or else this is gonna give tough competition to ur update hahaha
Maen line after line I m lovin cant tell u wht I loved most n wht not her each n every is like I can feel it their grief pain emotions n wht not I dunno but everything is visible tell me the secret behind ur writings nw or else I m gonna kidnap u lol😆
U jerk again u said she needs u fattu kahi k cant u say u need them
N them she said the truth of wht ws scarin oh she knows him inside out but he doesnt
N she left now finally cant tell u hw much I liked this update it ws intense romantic n wht no matter hw much I hv taunted rd in this comment but I felt bad fr him too cant help it afterall he is ma 3rd love lol
Oh god frgive me fr tauntin him this much plxzzz
Oh ma rd u r grt I love u sryyy
Plz rd fans over here if anyone reads it dont bash me plzzz sry😭

Now i m done with ma pakaaofyin aap v ky yaad karogye likna to bohot kuch tha but likha nhi warna iss baar me aapke update ko v peeche chod deti lol

p.s. ignore the typoos proof readin
well i m too lazy fr the task


Edited by -chocoangel- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -chocoangel-


alelelele why crying dont cry



i dont have time..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ress

Unress

Finally didu u updted

Cnt tell u how eagerly I was wtng for update
Jbse updating k title dkha I was checking ur thread at least thrice a day


I m so happy u updted

I can understand u must be very busy
Still u r taking tym from ur busy scehedule n updating ur stories

Love u didu

Don't stress n be happy

Now coming to the update it was perfect as alwz
It was damn emtnl

U again made us cry with ur updte

It was so heartwrenching

Poor sanyu feeling like hell for her
She's broken beyond repair
There's nothing left in her
No emtns she's a living corpse


Rd is really an idiot
He's so confused

Sanyu plight was hurting her
Still he's not understanding that he loves her


Sanyu silence was killing her
Her silence is biggest torture for him


I loved the scene where he was carrying shinu n playing with her
I really felt bad for her
In all this mess what's shinu fault she's not getting her dad love


Really I think for this rd should be punish
No matter what equation he's sharing with sanyu
They r having issues bt shinu she's his daughter
His blood
He shouldn't have done this to her
He shouldn't have neglected her



Sanyu having fever
He's so wrried for her


When he didn't find sanyu in home
He was dying each second

That guy loves sanyu like anything still he's not admitting his feelings
He has gone crazy
He will realise his mistake very soon
N dat tym I want him to repent very badly
Sanyu should not forgive him easily


Sanyu b'day
Rd wants her to hug her
Wish her love her
Bt he don't have courage to face her


Sanyu is totally change now



Finally he wished her
Sanyu wants him to spend one day with her like before



Her taunts
Her words were killing him


Sanyu leaving him
He's hell shocked
He never imagined that she will leave him


I liked sanyu attitude

She's now strong
She's again self confident


Rd tried stopping her
Bt now she's determined


Her wrds gave him reality check


Soon will he realise that sanyu is not the one who needed him
In actual rd needs her


He will realise her importance
N what sin he committed


Sanyu left him
Rd was helpless


Precap exciting


I so wish rd repent hard
Make him realise him mistake soon


N yes vids ki b ache se band bjana
Update whenever tym permits
Will be wtng


Love u
Muuuaaahhh
Keep smiling didu
Edited by newmoon18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
😭😭😭
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😭😭
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Is vidushi ka gala dabana he muje 😡
😭😭




Nice update di 👏
Lekin bohut rulaya aapne 😭
😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update

sanyukta atlast moved out of his life

hope rd realises her importantance now

isbaar plzzz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
😭

Awesome update :))
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice one .. I Literally cried while reading...feeling bad for sanyu...😭
You are indeed a great writer...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very sad update
this vidhushi
sanyu moved out of his life
hope he realizes
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome

Loved it

So emotional update

Hope rd realize his mistake
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally
You know this update was hell enthralling
I couldn't take my eyes off it
Sammy di apne acha nai kiya
Aise koi kisi ko rulata hai kya yar 😭
Randhir -_-
He loves her infact they made love ...xD
But how can he just let her go like this :o
That b***h vidhushi
Its all happening cz of her
The last scene 😭
Oh god itna to kam marks aane pe nai rona aata ;(
And the precap
Lets see how it goes
Update soon
Thanks a ton for the pm <3

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