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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Hello everyone,

This FF is one which I had already written before, but I have made some changes in it. The original name of the FF is Second Chances but I have changed it to The Hidden Truth as it is not exactly the same, it is an adaptation of it.
Thanks to Jasmine who suggested me to give the samud version of the FF. You've got to thank her for getting to read the samud version of this FF.

I will be posting it in my work index itself inorder to prevent the thread from being locked owing to a lack of activity.

I will be updating this FF, at least twice or week or once but it all depends.
That's all I want to say, and hope you all enjoy this FF.😊

Love Jess ❤️
Edited by Jess2014 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
FF- The Hidden Truth

Part 1:

With the rise of the sun, birds started to chirp and soon everyone in this part of the world was awake. A mansion was seen and it surely looked grandiose. There was a fountain in front of the house from which water trickled providing a serene and calm atmosphere. A few tiny birds came to rest on the fountain flapping their wings and enjoying this infrastructure. Inside the mansion, it was more luxurious and each and every furniture and object was of pure opulence. Saras Vyas made his way down the modern stair cases which had a black carpet on it. The stair case led to the living room.

Saras made his way to a lavish sofa which was placed in the middle of the room. A servant brought a tray on which a cup of black coffee was placed. Saras signaled the servant to place the cup on the coffee table with hand gestures. The servant whose name was Ramu did as he was told and left. Saras bent forward to take the cup and he slowly brought it up to his lips and took a sip. Saras then picked the newspapers which was on the table and leafed through it. He checked the finance section of it just to note the financial stability of the market and what decisions could be taken. After all, he was the CEO of a large company and he needed to be alert and very much conversant with any changes linked to the business world.
He heard the sound of someone arriving and he smiled, smelling the fragrance of that person. Who could it be apart from his beautiful wife whom he loved dearly, even more than his own life. She was clad in a white palazzo and a simple top with flowery design on it. She had a simple gold bracelet on her right wrist and her engagement ring was conspicuous on her finger. She had a beam on her face and was humming a tune. Saras stood and walked towards her," What's the matter Kusum? Any reason why you are in seventh heaven today?"
Saras was married to Kusum for two years. He was madly in love with her and they had a simple life together, only the two of them alone. However Saras had another secret, a secret which he never revealed to anyone till date and that secret was his motive, he felt suffocated every single moment when he thought about the incident that changed his life two years ago. And the person responsible for it was a girl, whom he hated to the core, he had never met her till date but he remembers every single detail about her. But there were no traces of her, she seems to have vanished right after the dirty game she played. Kusum knew what had happened but she did not know who was behind it as Saras did not want her to get tangled in all these complications.
Back to the little conversation between the couple, Kusum looked at him and hesitatingly said," Saras...promise me that you won't be mad when I reveal the matter to you.."
Saras placed his hands around her waist," Can I ever be cross at you?"
Kusum's lips' curved to form another smile," So, the other day, I came into contact with one of my childhood friends and she is coming here, to Mumbai, she had applied for a job and the company for which she is expected to work for wants to interview her, so I invited her to have dinner..and also, I proposed her to stay at our place if she gets the job until she gets a proper place to stay."
Saras hugged her," Is that all? You had gotten me worried for no reason, sure, tell her that she is welcome to stay here,"
Kusum hugged him tightly and Saras gave a soft peck on her forehead," I might be home a bit early, depends on the workload,"
Kusum nodded and whispered," I love you," Saras blew a kiss at her as he made his way to the entrance of the house and exited it. He then entered in his BMW and his driver pulled away.
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6 PM, Vyas Mansion
Kusum rushed down the stairs as soon as she was informed that her guest had arrived. Ramu had opened the door and the expected guest was still standing. Kusum gave a huge smile and enthused," That's incredible, I can't believe how much you have changed Kumud!"
That was her name, Kusum's childhood friend and the one who was expected to come and stay for a while. Kumud Desai,that was her full name...she had a smiling face but still her eyes had a deep sadness in them. She wore a simple turquoise dress with beige stilettos and she had a small black suitcase along with her.
"Nor can I, Kusum," Kumud replied and hugged Kusum.
After their enthusiasm on seeing each other died down, Kusum excused herself for being such a bad host and invited Kumud to have a seat. Kusum then ordered Ramu to get Kumud some chilled mineral water and both Kumud and Kusum went back to their conversation.
"So, Kumud, how is life? I mean.. is everything ok?" Kusum questioned.
Kumud straightened her back and and moved her right leg on her left one. At the same time, Ramu brought the mineral water and Kumud slowly took it but she did not drink it, instead, she started circling the top surface of the glass and replied to Kusum," Yes, my life is not as I expected it to be, but sometimes, the best things happen unexpectedly, I had a really good opportunity to stay in the US but I had to come back in India for some family issues and I lost my chance, and I am really grateful to you for letting me stay here,"
"Come on Kumud, we are friends, I agree we lost contact at a point of time but we managed to get in touch again, which is really amazing, and don't embarrass me by thanking me," Kusum said and Kumud nodded and both of the long-lost friends exchanged snippets of information on their respective lives.
After half an hour, the doorbell rang again and Ramu went to open the door again. Kumud looked intrigued...she knew that it was Kusum's husband as Kusum had been talking to her about him a few minutes back. Kusum got up from the couch and Saras was coming towards her at the same time. Kumud caught a glimpse at Saras. He was attractive for sure and he had a well-maintained figure.
Saras kissed Kusum on the cheek and his sight then focused on Kumud, she looked familiar, he had seen her face somewhere, maybe in a photograph or something...
Kumud was standing next to Kusum and she smiled to Saras who nodded back at her. Kusum then said," Saras, this is Kumud Desai, my childhood friend, and Kumud this is Saras, the love of my life."
Saras's expressions suddenly changed. He looked like he had received a bad news and he looked shocked, his expressions were confusing for sure. Kusum and Kumud remarked his facial expressions and Kusum quizzed him about it," Saras, are you ok?"
Saras stammered for half a second and regained his composure," Yes, I am sorry, I need to make an important phone call about a deal,"
Saying so, Saras walked away and went to his study room which was made up of myriad shelves on which books were placed haphazardly. Saras wiped the beads of sweat that were on his forehead and he moved some books which were placed on a shelf and he found a key which he used to open a drawer. He dug out a few filed and then grabbed one which was black in colour. He opened it and his eyes then focused on a photo...it was her...Kumud...the one whom he had been looking for. Saras felt anger building inside him, he would not let her get away easily and that was a promise.
Edited by Jess2014 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
firstly congrats on new story...
loved d start...
saras is happily married to kusum.. it seems both love each other & r happy & content with each other in their small world...
so saras has a dark past secret... dont know wat?? wil wait for it to know?... kusum knows it partly... which changd saras life completely...
now enters kumud... kusum's childhood frnd who is in search of a job... both frnds catch up.. kumud has sum past... it seems she is broken frm inside...
saras returns from ofc... & meets kumud.. & realises its her for whom he is searching since 2 yrs...
now wat wil saras so ?? wen wil kumud realise abt saras...
wat d big secret??
too curious to read further...
plz continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..

Edited by coolhi1988 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
thx a lot 4 the samud version.What a diff story with full of suspense.
Saras having a happy married life with Kusum.2 yrs back he was in big prob bcz of a girl whom he has never seen.But his motive is to take revenge on her.What did she do to make him hate her?Kusum's childhood friend Kumud has come 2 stay there.saras realized that it was the same girl whom he wanted 2 take revenge on.Now what will b Saras' reaction?What will b Kumud's reaction if she finds d truth?What prob does Kumud have?I think it's related to Saras.
Its a Samud ff.so how will Samud unite when Kusum is his wife?plz give frequent updates
Edited by jasminerahul - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

firstly congrats on new story...
loved d start...
saras is happily married to kusum.. it seems both love each other & r happy & content with each other in their small world...
so saras has a dark past secret... dont know wat?? wil wait for it to know?... kusum knows it partly... which changd saras life completely...
now enters kumud... kusum's childhood frnd who is in search of a job... both frnds catch up.. kumud has sum past... it seems she is broken frm inside...
saras returns from ofc... & meets kumud.. & realises its her for whom he is searching since 2 yrs...
now wat wil saras so ?? wen wil kumud realise abt saras...
wat d big secret??
too curious to read further...
plz continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..

Thanks a lot Hiya 🤗
I am glad you liked the start

Yes Saras is married to Kusum over here and it looks like he is happy with her
but with Kumud's entry, things will take a turn in Saras and Kusum's life
and the truth which had been been hidden will finally be revealed.

You will have to wait to know the answers to your questions
Will update soon

Thanks a lot once again

Take care...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

thx a lot 4 the samud version.What a diff story with full of suspense.
Saras having a happy married life with Kusum.2 yrs back he was in big prob bcz of a girl whom he has never seen.But his motive is to take revenge on her.What did she do to make him hate her?Kusum's childhood friend Kumud has come 2 stay there.saras realized that it was the same girl whom he wanted 2 take revenge on.Now what will b Saras' reaction?What will b Kumud's reaction if she finds d truth?What prob does Kumud have?I think it's related to Saras.
Its a Samud ff.so how will Samud unite when Kusum is his wife?plz give frequent updates

You're welcome Jasmine😊

Thanks a lot for your comment🤗
Yes Saras is happily married to Kusum but he has never met Kumud till date
yet she has done something that shattered him and made him hate her to the core.
Saras realises that it is Kumud herself when he finds her at his house and now, he wants only revenge.
All I can say about this FF is that your questions will be answered
with the upcoming parts which I will hopefully update soon and
Samud will be together in the end.
I will do my best to update frequently.
Thanks a lot once again 🤗

Take care...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Jess2014

Hello everyone,


This FF is one which I had already written before, but I have made some changes in it. The original name of the FF is Second Chances but I have changed it to The Hidden Truth as it is not exactly the same, it is an adaptation of it.
Thanks to Jasmine who suggested me to give the samud version of the FF. You've got to thank her for getting to read the samud version of this FF.

I will be posting it in my work index itself in order to prevent the thread from being locked owing to a lack of activity.

I will be updating this FF, at least twice or week or once but it all depends.
That's all I want to say, and hope you all enjoy this FF.😊

Love Jess ❤️




Hello Jess😊

I am really happy to get to read one more fresh FF on Samud even though it is an adaption of your already written FF with some other name or may be with some other characters as I hadn't read any such FF😕

Right Jasmine should be given thanks for suggesting this amazing idea of samud version of the already written FF. I am sure it would be really interesting to read this adaptation😊

Yes it's a right decision to post this FF in your work index to keep it active on the forum.

I would like to read the updates of this FF regularly without much break as it will keep our interest alive, hope you get much time for updating it regularly😉

Take care😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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What an amazing start of this FF. 😊

The description of the natural environment around the luxurious mansion was worth reading. Loved it very much.😊 Saras who was a famous business tycoon had a very royal life to live. It was surprising to see kusum as his better half in this FF but sometimes changes should be done to make the story interesting.😉 Saras seemed to be deeply in love with kusum who too was happily living with him. What was that secret related to some girl( here may be kumud) which changed saras' life completely?😕 Kumud, the childhood friend of kusum came to her city regarding some job interview and kusum proposed her to stay at her place till she gets a proper place to live with which saras too didn't have any problem but once he got to see kumud after coming back to home, he got confused and when he saw the photograph of kumud, he remembered his past related to kumud and made him angry. But what had happened to him in past and how it was related to kumud is the question? Hope the doubts are cleared with the next updated parts😉

Waiting for the next part eagerly😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: samudbest




Hello Jess😊

I am really happy to get to read one more fresh FF on Samud even though it is an adaption of your already written FF with some other name or may be with some other characters as I hadn't read any such FF😕

Right Jasmine should be given thanks for suggesting this amazing idea of samud version of the already written FF. I am sure it would be really interesting to read this adaptation😊

Yes it's a right decision to post this FF in your work index to keep it active on the forum.

I would like to read the updates of this FF regularly without much break as it will keep our interest alive, hope you get much time for updating it regularly😉

Take care😊

Heyy dear

This FF was on other characters previously but I am editing some parts of it and some bits will be changed so it will differ a bit from its original though its plot will be almost the same 😉

I will be updating this one a bit more regularly as it has already been written, just some editing needs to be done and this one is going to be a full-on roller coaster ride 😉

Take care too😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: samudbest

What an amazing start of this FF. 😊

The description of the natural environment around the luxurious mansion was worth reading. Loved it very much.😊 Saras who was a famous business tycoon had a very royal life to live. It was surprising to see kusum as his better half in this FF but sometimes changes should be done to make the story interesting.😉 Saras seemed to be deeply in love with kusum who too was happily living with him. What was that secret related to some girl( here may be kumud) which changed saras' life completely?😕 Kumud, the childhood friend of kusum came to her city regarding some job interview and kusum proposed her to stay at her place till she gets a proper place to live with which saras too didn't have any problem but once he got to see kumud after coming back to home, he got confused and when he saw the photograph of kumud, he remembered his past related to kumud and made him angry. But what had happened to him in past and how it was related to kumud is the question? Hope the doubts are cleared with the next updated parts😉

Waiting for the next part eagerly😊


Thanks a lot dear
I am glad that you liked the first part 🤗

Yes, I know that it is shocking to see Kusum as Saras's wife
but you are right, things to be twisted up in order to create suspense
and to enhance the story line 😉

Saras has a secret but it just known for now that some girl
was responsible for it and even Kumud is unaware of it

Saras was actually surprised to hear Kumud's full name and her face looked familiar to him
and to be sure whether his doubts are confirmed, he went to search for a file in which Kumud's photo was kept in.

The past will be revealed in the further parts and at the same time, all your questions will be answered at the same time

I will update the next part soon, maybe by Monday or Tuesday 😉

Take care...😊

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