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Gavina

@Sugar_Cinnamon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
so thats how both of them landed up there.When they got isolated in d island saras blamed kumud that she is a jinx,bcz of her only it happened.poor kumud was broken as she was always called a jinx since her b'th when her parents died.He felt sad 4 her knowing her personal life n with his apology a friendship formed btw them.They enjoyed themselves in the wave.They were in beach dress tempting each other while having beer.they had one night stand n confessed their luv 4 each other.at last they got back to the cruise.loved d last part where u wrote that they realized that d real treasure they found on d island was true luv.
Samud have a very traditional image bcz of the show SC's background.But its rly admirable that u took the guts 2 portray them a damn modern hot couple here.
waiting 4 villain n more os from u

Heyy

Yes, that's the whole story on how they reached the island

and got left over there and Saras and Kumud got

into an argument where Saras blamed her and

he regretted his step and later on

he apologised and they both became friends.

Yes, they ended making love in a drunken state

but they realised their love and they luckily

got back on the cruise.

I try to experiment with different themes and genres and I know

as Saras and Kumud have a traditional image because of SC's setting,

it is a bit hard to view them in a totally changed backdrop

but I do my best to try and make them fit in such types of stories and

I am glad that you like it 😊

Ek Villain will soon be updated

Thanks for your lovely comment 😊

Take Care...

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

Trailblazer

+ 11

Posted: 9 years ago

#62

u shud experiment diff themes on samud.it will b boring if in every ff they r traditional

Originally posted by: Jess2014

Heyy

Yes, that's the whole story on how they reached the island
and got left over there and Saras and Kumud got
into an argument where Saras blamed her and
he regretted his step and later on
he apologised and they both became friends.
Yes, they ended making love in a drunken state
but they realised their love and they luckily
got back on the cruise.

I try to experiment with different themes and genres and I know
as Saras and Kumud have a traditional image because of SC's setting,
it is a bit hard to view them in a totally changed backdrop
but I do my best to try and make them fit in such types of stories and
I am glad that you like it 😊

Ek Villain will soon be updated
Thanks for your lovely comment 😊

Take Care...

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Gavina

@Sugar_Cinnamon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Yes, Seeing them in the same

type of backdrop is boring...

Originally posted by: jasminerahul
u shud experiment diff themes on samud.it will b boring if in every ff they r traditional

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goodhearted

@goodhearted

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: Jess2014
Hello everyone,
I have finally updated the last part of my TS. I think this is the longest part I ever wrote, it took nearly 5 pages in words and I spent two days working on it. I really hope that you like it and please leave your comments. 😊 Thanks for your constant support and encouragement, I would not have reached here if it were not without all of you and your comments make my day and motivate me to write further. I have also planned to write and OS for new year and Christmas but I am not sure if it will be up. Till then, enjoy the last part of the TS. I felt guilty for keeping this TS hanging so I updated it since I had some free time.

I have changed this thread into my work Index so that it is easier for all of you to find the links of all my FFs and all my other works will be stored in here.

Thank you

Take Care
Lots of Love
Jess

Hello Jess😊

Finally you have updated this TS after a long period. And to make up for such a long wait, you have given us the longest part till date. You would have definitely spend two days while writing this last part and the hard work is clearly seen after reading this amazing part. I loved it totally from starting to end😊 No need to say thanks dear as being a good and talented writer, you deserve that much support and encouragement and I am sure that you will write more amazing FFs, SS and OS on samud in future. That will be double bonanza while celebrating Christmas and New year if you write an OS during that time, please don't change your plan as it will increase the joy of festival much more. And don't feel guilty at all as I know that you try your best to give quality updates on time but sometimes due to busy schedule it is not possible to post regular updates and I didn't mind that ever.

It is really a nice move that you have made this thread your work index, it is now easy for all the readers to reach to your FFs and all your other works.

Take care😊

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goodhearted

@goodhearted

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

The game had started and the names of the four teams were really promising, something different😉 During the first task, Saras's making of weird faces looking at kumud was really funny and saras would look eccentric if we imagine saras doing this in reality😉 Kumud also found it quite hilarious. Saras was sure about the place where the hidden keys were scattered but kumud had different thoughts and the way she taunted him that his main motive behind going to kitchen was food, too amusing😆. But finally the prediction of Saras proved right and they got the keys from the same place, saras was sure about. Then samud had funny arguments as expected. After playing the second round, saras, kumud and Sunny's team also qualified for the grand finale with one more team. The last and final round was really interesting as they were left on an island to find out some casket which had tickets of free trip on the cruise the upcoming year. but it was to hot there which was making their task bit difficult. Kumud and saras were dressed nicely especially kumud's attire was bit bold something different to her traditional image. When they were busy in searching for the casket, it started raining heavily and everyone had to rush back to the ship including sunny but Saras and kumud were stranded on the island and it was not liked by them at all as they were behaving so rudely till now and now they had to be there together against their wish. Saras blamed kumud for bringing bad luck in his life which hurt kumud very much and she left away from him but saras later regretted it when he got to know about her past and asked for forgiveness.They became good friends after and spent really good two days knowing about each other. Saras got really amazed by the beauty of kumud when he saw her in bikini😉 and kumud too stared Saras' abs and finally when they drunk they couldn't control and engaged in kissing to each other which soon followed by a hot lovemaking session which was really too hot to handle😉 Finally they became united in the wave of love and when they got back to senses in the morning first they regretted it very much but soon after confessing their love for each other, they became so happy to be able to find love of their life if not the casket in which the big prize was hidden. Finally the cruise came back on the island while searching for saras and kumud and they left happily from there. 😊

Amazing last part of this TS. Loved it very much. 😊 A perfect and happy ending.

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Gavina

@Sugar_Cinnamon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: samudbest

Hello Jess😊

Finally you have updated this TS after a long period. And to make up for such a long wait, you have given us the longest part till date. You would have definitely spend two days while writing this last part and the hard work is clearly seen after reading this amazing part. I loved it totally from starting to end😊 No need to say thanks dear as being a good and talented writer, you deserve that much support and encouragement and I am sure that you will write more amazing FFs, SS and OS on samud in future. That will be double bonanza while celebrating Christmas and New year if you write an OS during that time, please don't change your plan as it will increase the joy of festival much more. And don't feel guilty at all as I know that you try your best to give quality updates on time but sometimes due to busy schedule it is not possible to post regular updates and I didn't mind that ever.

It is really a nice move that you have made this thread your work index, it is now easy for all the readers to reach to your FFs and all your other works.

Take care😊

Hey Dear 😊

Yes, since I updated the TS after such a long time, I updated a long part to make up for it.😉

I am really happy that you liked it, thanks a lot 🤗

I hope that my plans about writing a new OS during the festive seasons won't change

but I am not sure whether I will write one or not, hope I get enough time so that I can update an OS 😊

@ bold: That's so nice of you dear, that you understand my situation and you don't mind my late updates 😊

I am glad that you liked my idea of changing this thread into my work Index 😊

Take Care too 😊

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Gavina

@Sugar_Cinnamon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: samudbest
The game had started and the names of the four teams were really promising, something different😉 During the first task, Saras's making of weird faces looking at kumud was really funny and saras would look eccentric if we imagine saras doing this in reality😉 Kumud also found it quite hilarious. Saras was sure about the place where the hidden keys were scattered but kumud had different thoughts and the way she taunted him that his main motive behind going to kitchen was food, too amusing😆. But finally the prediction of Saras proved right and they got the keys from the same place, saras was sure about. Then samud had funny arguments as expected. After playing the second round, saras, kumud and Sunny's team also qualified for the grand finale with one more team. The last and final round was really interesting as they were left on an island to find out some casket which had tickets of free trip on the cruise the upcoming year. but it was to hot there which was making their task bit difficult. Kumud and saras were dressed nicely especially kumud's attire was bit bold something different to her traditional image. When they were busy in searching for the casket, it started raining heavily and everyone had to rush back to the ship including sunny but Saras and kumud were stranded on the island and it was not liked by them at all as they were behaving so rudely till now and now they had to be there together against their wish. Saras blamed kumud for bringing bad luck in his life which hurt kumud very much and she left away from him but saras later regretted it when he got to know about her past and asked for forgiveness.They became good friends after and spent really good two days knowing about each other. Saras got really amazed by the beauty of kumud when he saw her in bikini😉 and kumud too stared Saras' abs and finally when they drunk they couldn't control and engaged in kissing to each other which soon followed by a hot lovemaking session which was really too hot to handle😉 Finally they became united in the wave of love and when they got back to senses in the morning first they regretted it very much but soon after confessing their love for each other, they became so happy to be able to find love of their life if not the casket in which the big prize was hidden. Finally the cruise came back on the island while searching for saras and kumud and they left happily from there. 😊

Amazing last part of this TS. Loved it very much. 😊 A perfect and happy ending.

Thanks a lot for your amazing comment dear 🤗

Yes, Saras and Kumud were still pretty much rude to each other during the tasks

and they did not miss any opportunity to taunt each other

They got left on the island while they were carrying out the last task of the treasure game and it came as a big shock for the two of them especially when they can't stand each other's presence

However, a bond of friendship started between the two of them.

In their drunken state, they ended up making love and I am glad that you liked that scene😉😳

They realised and confessed their love for each other at the end and the cruise came back to get them.

I am glad that you liked this last part and the ending

Thanks again for your comment

Take Care 😊

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hiya

@coolhi1988

Achiever

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#68

finally unres on pg 9 after ages...

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Gavina

@Sugar_Cinnamon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: coolhi1988
superb update jess🤗...
loved d treasure hunt game... samud fight...😆😆 sunny,kumud guessing it to be captain's cabin but saras guess it to b kitchen... kumud & sunny make fun of saras saying he is hungry & thinks of food all day... saras embarrassed but finally saras guess was correct... & he gets a chance to again fight with kumud...
next part of the game they hv to go to an island for searching d treasure... all start their work... but they hv to return.. & surprise surprise criuse left samud alone on d island... to fight...
saras blames kumud for this misfortune & names her jinxed... this hurts kumud as since childhood she is called this... poor girl... but saras apologizes as soon as he realises his mistake ... gud boy...
then monkeys attack saras for making kumud cry..😆😆 loved this part very much thought it is just 2 lines but laughed out loud...
then kumud forgives saras eventually knowing that now only 2 of them r there on d island... & they becum frnds... & try to know each other... hmm first step of love...
they find d treasure of beer😆😆 & hv it... & get intimate in drunken state & as no one is there to stop them they do it.. next day both r nervous... finally samud confess their love to each other...
& then wat cruise arrives to fetch them.. even they wer waiting for samud to cum together...😉😆😆
sunny shocked but happy to know that samud r together...
samud getting free trip on cruise next yr as a part of apology.. cruise dint knew that they got blessings on island wen they wer leftout...😆😆
beautiful ending...

sorry for this late comment...
thnks 4 d pm...
very well written...👏👏

Thanks a lot for your comment hiya 🤗

I am glad that you liked the last part

Hehehe...yeah samud fights are the highlight of this TS😆

And then they both got stuck on an island and they were even ready to jump on each

other's necks but then they gradually becomes friends after saras apologises for his

short temper annd thenn the monkeys attack 😆🤣

So, after, they find a pack of beer and they decide to consume it and since they

were drunk and lost in the moment, they end up making love

and the next morning, they are hell shocked but they accept their love and the cruise

comes and fetch them 😉😆

I am glad that you liked it😉

Take care...😊

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hiya

@coolhi1988

Achiever

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: Jess2014

Thanks a lot for your comment hiya 🤗

I am glad that you liked the last part

Hehehe...yeah samud fights are the highlight of this TS😆
And then they both got stuck on an island and they were even ready to jump on each
other's necks but then they gradually becomes friends after saras apologises for his
short temper annd thenn the monkeys attack 😆🤣
So, after, they find a pack of beer and they decide to consume it and since they
were drunk and lost in the moment, they end up making love
and the next morning, they are hell shocked but they accept their love and the cruise
comes and fetch them 😉😆

I am glad that you liked it😉

Take care...😊