Kya Mujhe Pyar Hai??shrt prt pg66!chk - Page 17

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: me_iq

meri jaaaan.....mujhper sirf uska bhoot chara hai tumper to wo pura hi chargaya hai😆...agar bhooot nahi utray ga 2 main pagal hojahooon gi😆 aur phir meray *** ko kaun sambhalay ga hun???😉 jk

who cares jaan! laksh to mera hai chahe kuch bhi kahio chahe kuch bhi karlo 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: a-k-fan17

who cares jaan! laksh to mera hai chahe kuch bhi kahio chahe kuch bhi karlo 😳

ahaaaaaaaaaan wait unum ka bhi jaaan!!!how can u forget ur sutaaan??😉

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: me_iq

ahaaaaaaaaaan wait unum ka bhi jaaan!!!how can u forget ur sutaaan??😉

no way i'm not gonna share laksh with her! she already have a bf i dunt so i can have him 😃 hahahah

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: cup-of-tae

awsome part 👏 👏 👏

thanks a lot for the comment 😃

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: a-k-fan17

no way i'm not gonna share laksh with her! she already have a bf i dunt so i can have him 😃 hahahah

jaaan u dunt knoe the truth?😭😕...anyway pm me i will tell ya!!

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: me_iq

jaaan u dunt knoe the truth?😭😕...anyway pm me i will tell ya!!

wich true?😕

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Posted: 18 years ago

meri jaaan chk ur pm....n i think we should stop chatting!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago

PartV

***************Flashback***************

Kripa nd Laiba were both at kripa place in her room! they were lying on the bed nd talking nd laughing!

K:waissey laiba hum bhi na bohot pagal hai aabhi kehti hain ke yeh hoga woh hoga humein kiya pata ke hum kissise pyar karenge ke nahi

L:haan sahi kaha! waissey my kripa filhaal tumhari nazar mein agla best boyfriend kaun ho sakta hai???,

K:(shying)Pritwi (played by Amit tandon aka chipkoo)

L(shocked)Pritwi??

K: haan laiba! i really like him! pata nahi woh mujhe bohot pasand hai uski smile the camera show pritwi lips! Uski ankhen ! then they show his eyes ! uska hair style! then they show his hair! then they show his all face then back to the grils! Kripa was still talking to laiba but laiba wasn't paying attention! she went to the windown and start looking outside!

L(thinking nd upset)Kripa pritwi ko pasand karti hai isska matlab hai ke mujhe pritwi se door rehna parega abb! oh god! kyun hamesha mere saath hi kyun aissa hota hai! jab bhi mein kisisko pasand karti houn koyi na koyi beech mein a jata hai!!

she closed her eys and a tear fall from her eyes!! Kripa who noticed that laiba wasn't answering so she turned her head nd saw laiba looking outside!

K:Laiba!!!

Hearing kripa she quickly wipe her tears nd turned to her with a smile on her face!

L: ok kripa aissa kartey hain mein abb ja rahi houn hum kal college mein milenge ok ?

K: ok bye luv u she went to her nd kissed her cheek!

L: bye kissed her cheek too!

Laiba left upset nd kripa layed on her bed and closed her eyes!! she start thinking of pritwi! Next day Laiba nd kripa were both in college! Kripa was wearing this :

Laiba was wearing this:

they were talking that Pritwi came to them!

P:Hi Kripa

K:HI pritwi

P(smile and look at laiba):hi laiba

L(looking away):hi !

Kripa was about to talk taht her friend called her! she was very angry on her friend because she wanted to talk to pritwi but her friend drag her with her! Laiba was about to go but pritwi caught her hand!

L:Pritwi please leave my hand!

P:Laiba u look so hot today!

Laiba turned to him and was sad but still didn't wanted to hurt Kripa!!!

L: please Pritwi leave my hand!

P: ok mein tumhara hath chordounga lekin ussey pehle tumhe mujshe vaada karna hoga ke tum emre saath dinner par chalogi!

L: Pritwi please! mein tum mein interest nahi houn ok? tumhe date par jana hai na kripa ko le jao!

P:Kripa (laugh) no way! main ussko to kabhi nahi lekar jaounga ! no way itni chipkili hai woh

before pritwi could continue laiba slaped him!Pritwi was shocked then he looked at her!

L(angry): dunt u ever dare say something bad about kripa got it?

P: tumne kripa ke liye mujhpe haath uthaya!

L:haan kyunke woh meri behen jaissi hai aur yaad rakhna aenda kripa ke ya mere pass dikhayi diye to mujhse bura koyi nahi hoga!

saying this she was about to leave but pritwi caught her hand one more time:! she turned to him in anger nd saw pritwi smilling!

P:Laiba tumne mujhe thapar mara woh bhi kripa ke liye! yad rakhna mein TUMSE pyar karta houn par iss thapar ki keemat bohot mengi hogi laiba! mein tumhe kripa se alag kardounga! tumhe kripa se juda kardounga! tumhare liye usske dil mein nafrat paida kardounga ! its a promise!

then he gived her a flying kiss nd went! Laiba was shocked nd scared too! a week passed like this! Pritwi nd Kripa were both going out but laiba didn't know it!!Pritwi made somehow kripa belive that Laiba was jealous of her and she love only her money she doesn't love Kripa! she became ur friend just for going out with him and kripa belived him!!!!One day Laiba came at Kripa place and saw kripa nd pritwi hugging each other! Laiba got angry and went to kripa!

L(angry): kripa meine tumhe kaha tha na issey door raho yeh acha larka nahi hai to phir tum usski bahon mein kiya kar rahi ho???

K: shut up laiba! tumhe koyi haq nahi banta ke tum pritwi ke bare mein yeh sab kaho! woh mere hone wala fiance hai got it?

L(shocked)Kripa what are you saying? and why r u talking to me like this?

K: oh come one Laiba! mein jan chuki houn ke tum mujhse pritwi china chahti ho! tumhe kiya lagta hai ke mein tumhe itni asani se pritwi ko mere se chinlene doungi? no way !

L:(shocked).......

K(turning to her nd angry ): kyun hona jealous? akhir kyun? tumpe bhi to sare larke martey hain to phir tum kyun pritwi ko chahti ho?ya phir paissey chahti ho??

L:Kripa i didn't..(interupted)

K: just get out of my house ok? and yeah from now mere liye Laiba mar gayi got it? u r no more in my life!

saying this she went to pritwi and hugged him! laiba could see kripa back nd Pritwi giving her an evil smile! Kripa couldn't belive what just happened! she turned away ! she had tears in her eyes and start walking! she left and went to her place!! it was a big with mansion! she quickly entred and ran to her room fell on her bed and start crying!!

L(thinking) u didn't belive me kripa u didn't! tumne aaj usski liye mujhe chor diya! (she cried even more)but abb nahi! tumne mujhpar barossa nahi kiya ! koyi batah nahi ! i'll leave this house leave this country!

she went to her dupboard! pack all her things and come outside! she locked her house nd was about to leave but turned and look for the last time her house!

L(thinking) kripa yeh sach hai ke meine tumhe kabhi pata chalne nahi diya ke mein bohot amir houn kyunke mein nahi chahti thi ke mera paissa mere dosti ke bich aye! ajj tumne yeh samjh keh kar ke mein tumse paissey chahti houn mera dosti se bhi bharossa tor diya!!!

she then ran to her car nd went!! 1month passed nd kripa didn't have any news of laiba! she didn't care of her anymore! she was happy with pritwi! but pritwi started to suffer for what he did! he felt bad for what he did so he just told everything to Kripa! Kripa gived him a big slap and had tears in her eyes!

P: i'm sorry kripa

K(crying and angry): shut up pritwi! do u now what u did? u just .... just get out of my house my life! i hate u ! i hate myself for beliving u nd not laiba i hate u just hate !

P: but she slaped me becozof u i was angry it wasn't my fault!

K(slaped him one more time): nwo i slaped u what will u do? u know what pritwi just leave! leave plzzz

Pritwi left without saying anything! Kripa was totaly broken! she fell on her knees nd started to cry even more

!

******************End of the Flashback******************

Laiba nd Angad both ahd tears in their eyes!!!Anagd stood up and to laiba nd hugged her! laiba started crying!!!!

A: plz laiba stop crying! jo ho gaya so ho gaya aab hum ussey badal to nahi sakte !!! but aaj mein tumse ek dost ki hesiyat sekuch mangna chahta houn do gi??

L(leave him nd wipe her tears): tumhare liye to jaan bhi hazir hair! bolo!!

A: plz kripa ko maaf kardo!

L(staring at him):angad

A:no laiba plz listen to me before !! mein issliye yeh keh raha houn ke pritwi ki wajh se aapki dosti hatam ho gayi lekin ussi ki to wajah se kripa tumhe kitne salon se doudn rahi hai! ussey apni galti ka ehsas houa! Laiba plzz ussey maaf kardo ! plzz forgive her for me !

L:ok

A:Laiba samjhne ki koshish karo....(realising what she said ) kiya tumne haan kaha?

Laiba noded her head!angad smiled so did laiba nd they both hugged!! Laiba nd Angad went to laiba black sport car and went home! there kripa was still crying so laiba went to her nd hug her!

K:i'm sorry laiba i'm very sorry !!! i promise laiba mein tumhe kabhi nahi choroungi never!!

L: kripa please it wasn't ur fault: anywes now give me a big smile!

Kripa gived her a shor smile!

L: not like this i want a big smile after all i forgived u !

Kripa gived her a big smile then laiba hugged her!

K: laiba udhar dekho (pointing toward something )

L: kiya?

before laiba turn her head kripa quickly kissed her cheek!

L(smiles): kripa tum bhi na abhi bhi apni bachon wali adat nahi badli!

K: jo badal gayi woh kripa sharma nahi

they both laugh!!!! Kripa presented iqra to laiba! they quickly become very good friends! at night laiba was staying at anagds place as angad wanted to talk to her urgently but couldn't get chance becoz of all this so finaly she agreed! everyone was asleep but laiba nd anagd were both in anagds room talking!

L: haan batao kiya batah hai?

A: woh laiba mein

L: mein kiya?

A: woh mein

L:woh mein kiya?

A: arey yara mujhe bhi to bolne do

L(gigles) i know what u want to say haha! anywes bolo!

A: tumhe kiya pata hai?aur kaissey pata hai?

L: mujhe sab pata hai! ke tum kripa ke liye kiya feel karte ho! aur mujhe aissey pata hai kyunke meine dekha hai jaissey tum ussey dekh rahe the jaissey tum usske khayalon mein khoye the jaissey tum (interupted)

A: bas bas bas! abb aissa karo mere liye kuch karo na !

L: haan zaroor ! akhir i'm Laiba ! mein tum dono ko milva kar hi rahoungi

A (with a big smile then hugged her)thankou u r the best best friend

L:u welcome!

Kripa who was in her balcony saw them huggin by angads window! seeing them she was heart-broken!

Hope u'll like it!

Luv Mrs Laiba Laksh 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
hailaaaaaaaa meri jaaan that was amazing yaaar....a biggie wiggie prt yaaar.....kaash main bhi liksaktii 😭 ....anyway i really liked it....gr8 job...mwahhh...cont soooonn...

ur jaan

Iqra 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: me_iq

hailaaaaaaaa meri jaaan that was amazing yaaar....a biggie wiggie prt yaaar.....kaash main bhi liksaktii 😭 ....anyway i really liked it....gr8 job...mwahhh...cont soooonn...

ur jaan

Iqra 😳

glad taht u like it 😃 dunt woryr jaan when u'll be free i will let u do all the parts then i'll rest nd u'll work haha lol

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