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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ayu_tripathi

As much as I loved the epilogue..i hated it..hate the fact that its over.😭😭😭

I Have completely completely fallen in love with the story..the way you write is totally beautiful..!!

The story, the plot, their characters and everything..you are one amazing writer..!!

Going to really really miss getting its updates..!!

Would really look forward to read anything else that you write..please do PM me.

Thanks a lot!!



Thank you so much for your kind and wonderful words, and please don't be sad. It has been great to have your support during this journey. Hopefully the Shaadi Special, will make you happy!

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cocoamob

Read the last chapter and the epilogue together. Such a romantic fairy tale ending to a beautiful story! After their courtship, where they grow to understand each other and tune in to each other's needs, this continuation of them having children is a treat indeed!

Their family is now complete! The kids Aryan and Amaya are absolutely adorable and loved the way Aryan was being possessive of his mom. I liked the way Arnav and Khushi make sure they dont turn into rich spoilt brats.

All along while reading the story, I could visualize them so well because of your character descriptions, their conversations which revealed so much and amazing story telling. That is the best gift that a writer can give to a reader. Well done and hope you keep writing more!



How sweet, I am in awe right now! I am so glad you enjoyed this story, as much as I enjoyed writing it. It was a wonderful experience and I am so glad you were with me throughout it.

Thank you for being a wonderful reader!



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shalini_s

Aryan was so cute... Jealous of arnav.. A very good epilogue



Thank you for your sweet words throughout the journey, it is very much appreciated! Hope you to see you at the Shaadi!

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: snoopy84

Awesome epilogue. Loved their journey and how Khushi was able to grow stronger with Arnav's support


Thank you so much for your support throughout the journey of Stripped, I appreciate your comments and you reading the story till the end! I hope to see at the Shaadi Special!


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Posted: 10 years ago
HI I am a new reader . I started reading this amazing story when you posted the last part. I am happy and sad for that .Happy cause I did had to wait for you to post next part I could read it at my pace which was really slow at times :) as I love so many parts that read them over and over again and sad because I could not put my words of appreciation for your wonderful work after every update . Though I am not very good with words so this the best I can do to let you know that I love this story so much that this is in my list of few stories which I would love to read again and again. It is amazing that this is your first story but do not make it last would love to read many more from you. I know real life is imp than reel life but please do not stop here
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sk2405

The Central Park has always played a very significant role in shaping their love story and it seemed just perfect to start the epilogue from that very place. They have definitely come a long way in their lives and their relationship, what with AR becoming a million dollar baby, Khushi becoming the CEO and Aryan and Amaya coming to the world. What made their journey the most beautiful was their companionship, their unconditional love for each other, their belief in the other and their immense faith in 'them'.

The two little angels are being bought up with the best mannerisms. Aryan is undoubtedly his father's carbon copy, what with him being over-possessive about his mother, extremely protective towards his sister and respectful towards all his elders. His passion for doing the best and different shows how much he has inherited from his parents. Amaya on the other hand is extremely adorable and loving just like her mother. She will be a beautiful and a strong girl.

The way their families, the kids and the parents have fallen into a comfortable routine is beautiful. Nothing seems to be missing just like their passion for each other. There's no doubt it will be there even after many years.

Stripped definitely showed us the most beautiful of the expressions stripped and laid bare for us to understand and relish them.
A beautiful ending to a beautiful story!
Very well written!! 😊

Looking forward to the OS and another fiction from you. 😊


Can I tell you how much I have enjoyed reading your comments throughout the journey? They have always left a smile on my face, and I am fortunate to have you as reader. Thank you for such kind words about Stripped and my writing, I am humbled and in awe. I truly appreciate your support throughout this journey... I hope you enjoy the Shaadi Special!



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: cherrybloom1

I AM SO FREAKING IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY

IT IS NOT EVEN FUNNY
I LOVE IT SO MUCH
AND THE EPILOGUE WAS LIKE ALL MY DREAMS PUT INTO ONE CHAPTER
GOSH
IT WAS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING


Awww you are amazing! I have loved your comments throughout this journey and appreciate your support. I truly love your excitement for this story! Thank you so very much!


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Pdrover

Beautiful epilogue to an amazing story, will surely miss reading it but eagerly waiting on shadi
Loved Aryan and Amaya's picture and like other readers wrote was able to visualize the whole chapter like watching a movie

Thanks for sharing this beautiful story
Hope to read more from you in near future



How sweet of you for saying such kind words. I truly appreciate your support throughout this journey.. thank you for being a wonderful reader.

Hope you are enjoy the Shaadi Special!

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: headtotoe

Oh I am just so overwhelmed right now !!! In tears and with a mushy heart I cant write my comment...

Will come back soon..


And I am back again... You make me hopeful, happy and content with this master piece of yours... In every update you said something or the other that touched my heart...

Earlier if you ask me about the characteristics that i need in my better half, I think I may not have been able to answer you coz there is so much to say about it... But now I know it all.. I'll ljust its Armav from Stripped... You actually portrayed a character for me who is so desirable not only becaise he looks like a greek god but the man he is.. The respect that he shows women and the way he treats them.. He is a dream man spelled out to me...

Your Khushi on the other hand is so strong a character and yet so lovable.. She ahs her own past devils but fights them with dignity... Well balanced, intelligent ,beautiful and everything that a man needs in his woman... You were too good with her character too..


The entire run of the story kept me hooked on to it !!! You did a superb job with emotional scenes and "meetha" scenes...Loved Aryan and Amaya...

Congratulations on completing this journey so beautifully... Gifted you are lady!!!

With a family wedding and official tour the past month I was not able to comment on the thread.. Sorry for that but was with you the whole time...

Hope we get to read more of your creations.. Be there !!!

Loads of love !!!





Now that comment, along with other comments have left me speechless... any writer would tell you, that its readers like that make us want to continue to write.

You my dear have made smile, left me in awe and very happy. I am so grateful to have you part of this journey and I do hope you find a Stripped wala Arnav one day.


Thank you so much for your support throughout the journey of Stripped, I appreciate your comments and you reading the story till the end! Hoping you are enjoying the Shaadi Special!



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kushiarnav1

beautiful epilogue for the beautiful story...( i read many times feeling not enough)..

Arnav, arnav love this arnav in the story...the most understanding person, as a lover oh god the way u written jigs👏...as a husband and father lovely...

kushi such a calm person...start to end she always maintain her calmness...

thanks for the beautiful story jigs...

can not wait for the new story to start...

cheers...



You are such a sweetheart! Thank you so much for your kind words and support that you have given me throughout this journey. I hope you enjoy the Shaadi Special! 😃


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