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Posted: 18 years ago
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Next day angad calls the driver and he comes to pick them up. As they reach home kripa quickly runs to her room before maids see her in that condition. She takes shower and changes to a sari. Angad was on the bed working in his laptop. As kripa comes out angad was still working in his laptop but whistles
A: someone is looking to sexy today
K: laughs) really…but someone else is not
A: heyyy…im saying something good about u and ur insulting me
K: cant hid the truth
A: heyyy…ur being really mean u know
K: if u don't want me to jaan then change
A: nope
K: fine be like that….im going to meet aliya
A: good..im going to
K: no ur not
A: why not?
K: becz I want to meet shiv
A: hey…what do u mean
K: u know I always had crush on him…and I think I still do
A: puts his laptop away) what?…really
K: nods will brushing her hair standing in front of the mirror having her back toward angad
Angad walks up behind her and looks at her thru the mirror) is it true
K: smiles to him) yup
Angad slowly unzips her back
K: turns around) hey
A: puts her arms around her locking her)
K: angad stop
A: first tell me do u?
K: I aint telling u anything
A: ok have it ur way (kisses her neck)
K: angadddd (trying to free her self)
Angad kisses around her face and neck until kripa steps on his foot hard
A: aparts) aaa
K: pushes him away from her self will angad held his foot)
A: what was that for
K: for trying to force
A: fine (picks her up in his arms will kripa start to kick screaming and angad laughing)
K: hitting him) angad leave me
A: no one will save u now (tries to throw her on he bed)
Kripa puts her hands around his neck holding tight
K: screams) angad no im pregnant
A: stops) ops I forgot
K: angry) now leave me down I said
A: puts her down slowly
Kripa looks angry at him and smacks hard behind his head
K: stupid…u almost hurt me
A: bits his tong) ops…im sorry I forgot
K: uuuu….ufff…(turns around) zip my back now
A: zips her back)
K: turns around facing him) I will deal with u later (angry leaves from the room)
A: laughs to him self slowly and leave leaves to get ready for office)

Angad was happy he got his wife back and shaam was no more to hurt them.

A week later

Angad was driving
K: where are we going
A: for dinner how many times should I tell u that
K: but where
A: u will see
Angad stops his car by a restaurant. Kripa puts her hands around his arm and both walks in there.

Angad pulls the chair for her and she sits. Angad sits across from her. Both of them looks at the menu when someone comes by their table
S: angad
Both angad and kripa looks up at the lady
S: angad hi…its me neha remember
A: looks at kripa then back at neha) oh hi…what a surprise what are u doing here
N: oh my gosh…I cant believe it…where did u leave..I looked a lot for u
K: hi
N: looks at kripa) oh hi
A: neha this is kripa my wife)
N: surprised and little angry inside but acts normal) oh hi…may I join u guys
K: sure
A: of course (looks at kripa angry)
Neha sits bye angad (kripa, neha, angad)
Neha starts talking with angad and ignoring kripa but kripa was laughing slowly to her self every time angad slowly hit on her leg under the table for her some how to get ride of neha.
N: angad wane dance
A: umm…
K: go angad
n: takes his hand and gets up) C'mon
Both of them goes to the dance floor, lots of couples were dancing. Neha puts her hand around his neck will angad around her whist. Angad was looking at kripa who was laughing at him will he was giving her killing look.
Neha hugs him becz it was slow music will angad looks at kripa more angry and asking her to come and save him.
N: apart) angad
A: looks at her)huh?
N: angad I love u
A: rises his eyebrows) huh?…im married
N: I know…but angad I love u a lot
A: neha…I love my wife a lot…so plez don't say that again
N: angad…look at me…u tell I have everything…anything u want…I will chang my self just the way u want…plez angad
A: ur losing it ok…im telling u for the last time I don't love u at all
N: angad what does she have that I don't
A: everything…and most of all she never tires to ruin someone else life just becz she likes the person (aparts from her and leaves to his table were kripa was eating alone and smiling at him) lets go kripa
K: but im eating
A: lets eat somewhere else
K: angad…im staying here
A: kripa plez jaan
K: why?
A: just like that plez
K: fine we are going home (takes her purse and leaves to the car will angad pays the bill and looks angry at neha and leaves to his car.
Kripa was standing by the car waiting for angad when 3 man were walking by whistles at her
Kripa turns around having her back toward them trying to ignore them when she fells a hand on her shoulder. She smiles and turns around smiling thinking its angad
K: angad (shocked sees the three man standing in front of her)
M1: hi
K: hits his hand away) what the hell…what do u want
M2: of course u
K: angry) stop this
M3: what's wrong…C'mon baby

Angad comes out of the restaurant when he sees the three man bodering kripa will kripa is pushing them off her.
K: sees angad and shouts) angad
Angad gets really angry and runs toward them. He holds from one of the mans back shirt and pulls him back will punching hard on his stomach.. The other man tries to hit him will the other one still bordering kripa. Angad beats up the second man knocking him down to when he sees the third man still bordering kripa. His blood boils more and pulls from behind his shirt punching him a lot and beating all three of them.
K: angad enough
Angad wasn't stopping and keeps hurting them really badly. Kripa comes by him and tries to hold from his hand
K: angad plez stop…that's enough
A: pulls his hand off and continues hitting them…kripa tries again when angad wasn't paying attention and rises his hand on kripa angry and was close to slap her when he stops. Kripa looks at him shocked and angry. She leaves by the car will angad kicks one of the man again and leaves to kripa. Angad puts his hand on her shoulder
A: kripa
K: moves her shoulder angry) I want to go home now
A: im sorry
K: ----
Angad sits in the car will kripa sits in the back not in passenger seat. Angad starts to drive. All the way home both of them were silent

As they reach home kripa gets out and slams the door shut then leaves straight to her room. She changes will angad washes his hand on the sink that had the mans blood. Kripa sits on the bed and angad jumps behind her

A: im sorry
K: looks away) I don't want to talk…leave me
A: kripa
K: lays down on the bed and turns off the light
Angad sighs and lays down next to her.

Next morning kripa was still not talking with him. Angad went down and tried to make brake fast. He give all the maids off for a week and wanted to spend time alone with kripa will no one bodering them but now he was trying to make her talk to him which she wasn't.

Kripa comes down when angad stands in front of her smiling big
A: good morning jaan
K: looks at him angry

A: I got u some flowers

K: what for

A: sorry about last night

K: ur not forgiven…now leave me alone
A: I made u breakfast (tells her what he made)

K: angad for 45th time im pregnant which u always forget and I cant eat those things

A: said who…the doctors don't know anything
K: and u do?

A: of course I do…and don't listen to them

K: angad leave me alone
A: ok I will go make something else ok (puts the flower on her hand quickly and kisses her cheek then runs to the kitchen before kripa hits him
K: angry) anagddd

A: hides behind the wall and catches the flowers when kripa throws them
He slowly takes out his head



A: sorry jaan (holds his ears and stands in front of her) sorry
K: crosses her hand)
A: I wont do it again…I was angry and I couldn't control it
K: starts to shout at him) this is the 5th time u fought this week…even if someone crashes to me u start to fight them…what is wrong with u….

A: I wont do it again
K: u said the same thing last time
A: puts his head down like kids and speaks) promise this time
K: sighs)
A: kripa
K: what?
A: can I have a hug
K: rises her eyebrows
A: never mind I was joking
K: smiles and hugs him
Edited by Star* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
u screwd it

!!! i eman that was a crazy sweet part but then all that will he go bad or control his temper just screwed itt!! thats all creepyyyy.. other than that it aws a sweeeeeetttttttttt partt.. angad was emotional.. i dont want him to cry but it was so sweettt how he cried cuz she was kidding..

well continue soooooonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
aww lol
lol kripa is soo lucky lol pfft if sum guy would fight for me i would love them more lol
who cars if he beat up some jerks all i would care about is that it was for me!!!



continue soon


Hina
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part dude
angu has temper
i dont lyk this neha gal
cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part dude
angu has temper
i dont lyk this neha gal
cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
nice part but pls don't create problem cause of angad's hot temper 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
i dont like this neha!! bad gurll

continue soooonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
GREAT PART 👏
CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome work i dont know i have a feeling that something bads gonna happen again but pls dont sperarte them again
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Posted: 18 years ago
4 months later

Kripa was now 6 months her stomach was now showing and angad kept on teasing her
Kripa was cleaning the room will angad was watching tv.
K: angad come and help me clean instead of watching tv
A: jaan I told u let the maids do it
K: I don't need a maid cleaning my cloths…at least we could do that our self
A: im tired jaan
K: im the one who is pregnant here I should be tired not u…all day u been watching movie and nothing else.
A: smiles) I watched u to
K: shut up…plez angad help me
A: I will (continues to watch tv)

Kripa's stomach start to hurt and she holds her stomach but she didn't make any sound for angad to know. Her forehead start to sweat will it pained more.
K: angad plez come and help me here
A: I will in a second
K: couldn't take the pain anymore and holds her stomach will she screams)aaaa
Angad looks at her quickly and gets up then runs to her
A: kripa…kripa what's wrong
K: holds her stomach will it pained more) I cant take the pain anymore…aaaaaa
A: really scared and picks her up in his arms then goes down. He puts her in the back seat then starts to drive to the hospital.

All the way kripa was screaming and it scared angad more. He couldn't take her pain and was worried a lot. Finally he reaches by the hospital. He picks her up in his arms again and takes her inside. The nurses brings him the bed and he lays her down will they take her inside the room. The other nurse gives him some papers for him to fill out.
Angad was sitting on the chair by the door where kripa was. He was really nerves…his legs were shivering so was his hands. Few mints later the doctor comes out and angad stands up quickly
A: doctor…is kripa ok
D: ur child is ok now
A: I don't about the kid…how is kripa…is she alright
D: yes she is ok…plez come with me to my office I need to talk to u
A: is something wrong
D: plez come

The doctor inters inside his cabin and sits in his chair
A: what happen
D: plez have a seat
A: the doctor was getting in his nerves and he sits down)
D: Mr. khanna… ur wife is really weak…the baby flipped inside her stomach…usually the child's head suppose to be down but now its, its legs
A: is she ok
D: yes she is fine now…but u need to take care of her…her condition might get serious if something happens…like don't let her work or anything…she should always rest
A: I always tell her that but she never listens
D: now its ur job to make her listen…remember if she doesn't take care it will risk her life
A: shocked) what?
D: yes…maybe she might have her baby early or get really complicated on delivery which will cause her life
A: scared) no…I will take good care of her…can I see her plez
D: yes u may
A: thanks (gets up and leaves to see kripa)
Angad inters into the room. The nurse was fixing her medicine and then leaves. Kripa was a sleep. Angad sits next to her on the bed and takes her hand on his slowly. He kisses her hand slowly will his tears start to roll down his cheek.

An hour passes and angad was still sitting next to her looking at her. Slowly kripa opened her eyes and angad got happy.
A: kripa
K: slowly smiles to him)
A: wipes his tears) thank god ur ok
K: sorry about that (she knew angad was really scared becz that's how he was every time something small happened to her he would freak out and this was big)
A: shhh…rest now…don't talk
K: smiles to him and drifts back to sleep)

Angad was sitting on the chair next to her bed. He was holding her hand and his head on the bed and fall a sleep. It was around 7 am when the nurse came to give kripa a shot. Kripa was awake and she was looking at angad who was a sleep.
K: slowly bends her head and kisses his head)
A: wakes up when the nurse opens the door and inters inside…he looks up at kripa who was sitting up and smiling to him) ur awake already
K: yea
N: its time for ur injection (takes the injection out and fixes it…as angad sees the needle it freaks him out more)
A: swallows hard) don't u guys give medicine instead
N: im sorry sir but we have to give her injection
K: looks at angad and smiles) u could wait outside until its done…(laughs)
A: I aint scared
K: I could tell (laughs more)

The nurse comes by kripa and angad holds tight from her hand
K: angad im the one who is getting the injection not u so stop being scared
A: I told u im not scared

As the nurse gives kripa injection angad shuts his eyes and looks down. It pains a little bit which makes kripa hold tighter from angads hand and angad quickly opens his eyes
A: tells to the nurse) its hurt her
N: its all done sir
K: angad it didn't hurt
A: yea right…u were holding tight from my hand
K: laughs) angad ur really crazy
The nurse leaves.
A: im going to go ask the doc if I could take u home
K: ok
Angad leaves to the doctor and asks permission. The doctor agrees and tells him to be careful and should take care of kripa.
Angad leaves back to kripa and as he inters inside he smiles to her
A: we are going home
K: good I don't want to stay here at all…it feels like jail
Angad brings her while chair and kripa looks at him confused
K: angad I could walk u know
A: I know but I don't want u to
K: why not
A: becz I said so…u need to take care of ur self seriously a lot.

Kripa sits in the while chair will angad takes her to the car then drives home

It was night and kripa was resting will angad was working on his office paper work. Kripa was getting really board and she got up.
A: what are u doing…lay down back u need to rest
K: I been resting all day…im tired of resting…im going to go make dinner (as kripa was about to leaves when angad shouted loud at her)
A: kripaaa
K: turns around think what's wrong) what happen
A: lay down
K: what?
A: I said lay back down on the bed
K: why
A: really angry) I said so…no lay back down

K: whats is wrong with u (goes and lays back down on the bed) what
A: don't u dare to try to work understand…if I see u working never ever talk to me again understand
K: but angad what is so being angry on that….u should be happy that im working
A: happy my foot…ur killing ur self and ur telling me to be happy
K: working is not going to kill me
A: yes it will
K: but angad
A: be quit now and rest
K: shouts back angry) fine (crosses her hands and looks to other side angry will angad gets back to his work and continues to work)

Half an hour passes and kripa was getting really tired of sitting down doing nothing. She looks at angad angry who was busy with his work. She takes the pillow from her side and throws it at him hitting him on the head
A: turns around shocked and looks at her) what was that for?
K: for being such a jerk
A: ur calling me a jerk
K: yes I am…if u like taking care of me so much u should at least bring me something to eat when ur not letting me go get it for my self

A: why don't u say so that ur hungry
K: if u listen then…I tried for passed 10 mints and u keep on hushing me
A: sorry (gets up and tries to leave down)
K: I wane go to
A: no ur staying here
K: but I want to go down and eat
A: no ur not (tries to leave again)
K: angry) don't bother to bring anything…im not hungry anymore (pulls the blanket on top of her and turns of the light)
Angad smiles and walks up to the bed on her sides and kneels down by her slowly pulling the blanket off her head
K: pulls it back on will angad pulls it off again) stop im trying to sleep
A: sorry
K: ur not forgiven
A: smiles and pulls the blanket off her then takes her on his arms)
K: what are u doing
A: taking u down
K: I could walk my self
A: no u cant…
K: angad I know ur worried but its not good to much that I cant even do anything myself…angad I cant always depend on someone else to be there for me all the time…I need to do things my self
A: I know jaan…but…u know how much I love u
K: kisses his cheek) me to jaan thank you so much…but plez put me down and let me go down my self
A: but
K: ur next to me right…there is nothing for me to worry love
A: smiles) sure (puts her down and both walks down)
Angad makes dinner for kripa will she laughs watching him burning his hand or missing up things.

3 months passes and it was close to her delivery time. Angad was worried about her and he was scared more then kripa as if he was going to give birth. It was the date of her delivery but kripa wasn't ready yet. Angad was passing around the room worried and kripa reading book and laughing will watching worried angad.
K: jaan
A: yea is it time
K: shakes her head)
A: what is wrong…today is the date then how come
K: jaan be patient
A: ok (sits next to her and tries to relax but he was still worried taping his foot on the ground)

The door bell rings
K: aliya must be here
A: I will get it
Angad runs down and sees the maids open the door. Alaiya inters inside smiling big…she looks at angad happy
Al: where is kripa
A: com up
Aliya comes inside their room really happy and hugs kripa
K: hii
AL: hiii
A: puts his finger in his ear from their loud noise) done u guys
K: angad stop it
A: what u guys scream so loud as if u haven't seen each other for years
Al: sits next to kripa) so how are u feeling
K: excited and scared
Al: no need to be scared
K: u think so…they say its really pain
Al: yea that is
K: im scared now a lot
A: I thought u told me there is nothing to be scared of…u where acting so tough
K: becz this is regular…aliya shiv didn't come
Al: he wanted to come but he had to go to work for emergency…he said he will come…but don't worry we all will wait for him and all of us together will see the baby from the nursing room window
A: he doesn't have to come if he doesn't want to
Al, k: laughs inside knowing angad was always jealous of shiv thinking that shiv still might like kripa)
K: oh angad stop it now…why cant u guys get along
A: becz we cant
K: why is that
A: becz we are we…C'mon kripa hurry up
K: how…its not up to me
A: what is taking her so long in there
K: its he
A: no its she
K: the reports said its he
A: the reports are wrong
K: why do u always have to argue about this…when the doctor tells something u say he doesn't now anything…when the reports show something u say its falls
A: becz they are
K: angad why do u think everything is wrong except what ever u say
A: becz it is
K: yea yea
Al: u guys are arguing again
A: its her fault
K: my fault
A: yea every time u start
K: fine…then don't talk to me and I wont start
A: see there u go again
K: angad
A: see again
K: shouts) angad
A: look she is trying to start a fight
Al: omg I think its time
A: what? Why didn't u say so
K: whose name was I calling then
A: I thought u were…
K: stop now take me to the hospital
A: ok ok

Angad takes her hand and both of them walks her down the stairs. They reach to the hospital and the nurses brings her the bed thing for her to lay down will they where taking her inside. Kripa held angads hand will she was in pain
A: I love u jaan
K: love u to
The nurses takes her inside the room will angad and aliya waited outside.

3 hours passed and angad was passing around the room worried will aliya tried to calm him down. Shiv come inside the hospital with flower in his hands. He reaches to aliya
S: hi jaan…did she have the baby yet
AL: I don't know she is still inside
S: how is angad (looks at angad who was sitting in the chair waiting anxiously for the door to open)
Al: he is doing ok to…
S: he is really worried
Al: he sure is a lot
S: I think I will be 10 times worse then him
Al: shies) stop it shiv
S: what im just saying when it comes our turn I will be sitting there waiting anxiously
AL: laughs)

Few mints later the doctor comes out smiling big. Angad quickly goes to her
D: congratulation Mr. khanna…u got a healthy baby boy
A: really happy) thank you doc…how is kripa
A nurse comes out
N: doctor plez come quick the patents condition is really bad
A: what happen to her
The doctor quickly leaves inside the room back. Angad got really worried and tried to now what is happening but none told him…an hour passed and a nurse came by angad who was sitting at the chair worried will aliya and shiv next to him trying to calm him down.

N: Mrs. Khanna
Angad looks up
N: u want to see ur baby
A: where is my wife
N: they are still inside im sorry I cant tell u anything right now….do u wish to see ur baby
A: puts his head down) no
Al: angad its ur child….just go and see it once
A: if something happens to her I will never forgive him

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