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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwww that was a gr8 prt......poooor kripaaa
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Posted: 18 years ago
fab part
omg angad is a *******...i thought he bought her to give her freedom not rape her....its all his fault and plz make this dream
poor kripa
cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
poor kripa
**** shaam
angad 😡
plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
omgg!! ithougt he wanted to free her or something!!!1 damnn!!!! angaddd!! nooo!! just scare herrrr not actuallyyyy!!!

conitinue soooooooooooooonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
here is another long part

Kripa wakes up and finds angad next to her. Her throat was dry and she looked at angad shocked. Kripa pulled the blanket on top of her and got off the bed will moving to the corner of the room. She sat down with her knees in front of her and started to cry hard.

Angad wakes up when he hears kripas cry. He moves his head up and sees kripa in the corner of the room coved with sheet crying. He gets up and looks around him self. He was in his boxers. He remembers last night and fells bad but when he remembers kripa saying that she is mistress of shaam he gets mad again. Angad gets up and walks up to kripa. He bends down and sits next to kripa. Both of them were silent and kripa was crying silently to her self. Finally angad put his hand on kripas should try to say something when kripa jerks up and moves away from him
K: shouts) don't touch me….
A: kripa
K: shut up….just shut up….what the hell do u think of ur self….what have I done to u that u make me suffer so much all the time…..(cry's more) what did I do to u….why are u punishing me….what's my fault

A: tries to get up and leave but kripa holds from his hand )
K: just answer my question
A: I don't have answer
K: gets up angry and slaps him tight) u don't have an answer….u buy then rape me and now u don't have answer to why u did this to me
A: I hate u that's why
K: if u hate me then why don't u just kill me….why are u making me suffer like this
A: first I thought I loved u but when I found out how cheep u are….I
K: so u rape me…..remember….its my promise to u….u will one day cry in front of me….and beg for forgiveness for what u did….
A: looks at her angry) that day will never come….becz ur my mistress and I don't beg in front of b****…now u have to face the truth…stop dreaming
K: no one knows the truth….not even u (runs from there to the bathroom and locks her self)

Kripa starts to cry when she thinks to her self
K: thinking) why am I crying….why do I have to cry always….no one can force me anymore….I will live life the way I want know….I don't care what happens….

Angad leaves from farm house locking all the door not wanting kripa to get out.

Kripa takes shower and comes out with towel around her….she opens the cupboard and finds a some sweatpants and t shirt. It was angad and she didn't care….she wore them and it was to big for her…she folds the pants up till her knees.

Kripa gets down the stairs and walks up to the door….she tries to open it but it wouldn't open…she tries windows and door but all of them were locks. Kripa angry sits in the couch. She sees the phone and gets an idea she gets close to call when the phone rings. Kripa picks it up.
K: hello
It was dilip on other line
D: hello….were is angad
K: he is not here…who is this
D: im dilip angad father…who is this
K: smiles evilly) oh hi dad….im kripa….ur daughter-in-law….angad wife
D: shocked) what?….
K: I know dad its shocking…we got married last night….actually angad wanted to surprise u….im sorry dad I ruined his surprised.
D: oh…its ok….were is angad then
K: he just left….dad I want to take ur blessing…but angad left me here alone
D: its ok beta….I will send the drive to pick u up
K: ok thank you dad
D: sure..
K: (puts down the phone and starts laughing) now Mr. khanna it will be fun when the whole world knows that we are married.

Angad gets home when all the maids stars saying
All maids: congratulation sir
A: thank you (all of sudden stops) what…for what?
M1: for last night
A: thinking) how do they know what happen last night….huh?
Dilip comes down
D: angad….(hugs him) congratulate…(apart) but son u should have told us before u did it…so we could have joined u
A: shocked and confused) what?
D: I send a car to pick her up…u left her alone there….
A: dad I…..how did u find out about this
D: I called farmhouse and bahu picked up the phone
A: shocked) bahu? Who bahu?
D: ur wife kripa….she told me everything
A: shocked) what did she tell u?
D: stop hiding it….I know u guys got married last night
A: more shocked) married


The car stops and kripa inters the house….she sees dilip and smiles then walks up to him and takes his ashirwad
D: bless u my dear
A: looks at kripa shocked still couldn't believe what was going on)
D: angad….I want to hold big party for u guys….I want to introduce my daughter-in-law to everyone
A: dad…but….not now dad
D: why? Any problem
A: dad….I don't want anyone to know about us….I will tell them later
D: confused) what do u mean later?….don't u think they will ask us who kripa is when they see her with u
K: its ok dad….I will say im his fiance…
D: are I guys sure about this
K: yes dad
D: ok….I have to go to a meeting its really important…take care u two (leaves)
Angad sees dilip leave and holds hard from kripas arm
A: what the hell is this
K: jaan….be careful….ur hurting me….if u scratch me a little bit…it wont be good for u when ur father finds out that u hurt ur sweet wife (smiles to him)
A: looks angry at her and leaves her arm)
K: thank you …now were is my room (runs to the stairs and a mid tells her witch one is their room) thank you

Kripa opens the door and gets in the room. Jumps in the bed and lays down. Angad intes angry and slaps the door shut behind him. He sees kripa laying on the bed and lays on top of her. Kripa opens her eye and sees angad so close to her. She tries to push him off but he holds hard from his hands and lays on top of her.
A: so ur my wife…..why the hell did u say that to dad
K: smiles and kisses his cheek witch makes angad shocked) honey why are u so angry (pulls her hands free and hugs him) ur really worm….forget it honey…I just want to sleep
A: shocked at her behavior)

Angad gets up and leaves from the room. Kripa smiles to her self and goes to sleep.

Few mints later angad comes back to the room and opens the cup board. Kripa wakes up sees angad looking thru his cloths trying to find what to wear. Kripa gets up and hugs him from behind which shocked him more.
K: need help to find what to wear
A: no (takes his cloths and leave to the bathroom)
Kripa shouts from behind) u could change here to (smiles to her self)
Angad goes to the bathroom and locks the door behind him will thinking what happen to kripa.


Few days passed and kripa was behaving the same way to angad will angad was always trying to put space between them thinking if kripa has gone crazy.

Dilip comes to their room and gives angad and kripa gift
D: this is gift from me to u guys (one month vacation for honeymoon)
K: smiles) thank you dad
A: but dad…I have lots of work here
D: its ok…I will take care of everything….u just take my bahu out….bye u guys (leaves)

K: looks at angad smiling) I will start packing)
A: we are not going anywhere
K: its ok then I will go alone….oh and the flight is in 4 hours so hurry up

Kripa packs up their cloths and gets ready well angad was still siting on the bed thinking to himself.
K: angad….angad lets go
A: im not going
K: cool…bye then (leaves from the room

Kripa sits in the car will the savants puts their suit case in the car. Angad comes down and sits in the car and the drive drives toward airport. Since they were so rich they had their own plane. The plane starts and they goes to goa .
K: I thought we are going to Australia
A: well I don't want to go there
K: fine I like goa batter anyways
They check out in hotel room. Both of them didn't talk and angad left out leaving kripa alone in hotel room.

At night angad comes and sees kripa standing by the window looking outside. He gets close to her and holds her hand. Angad kisses her neck then moves her hair and kiss her more on the neck. Kripa turns around and pushes him. Angad smiles to her then moves close to her
A: what wrong
K: leave me alone for few mints….Im not felling well (tries to leave but angad pulls her back and picks her up in his arm.
A: no excuse….tonight ur mine again
Angad takes her to the bed and lays her down and lays on top of her will starts kissing her around the face and neck. Kripa doesn't move or try to push him. Instead she hugs him and starts will she couldn't hold her tears. She cried in silent will angad was confused once again for what happen to her.

Angad left her told hug him and cry as much as she wanted.
K: whisper) angad (coughs)
Angad parts then gets shocked seeing kripa starts to coughing more. Angad gets off the bed will kripa just started to cough more and more till blood came from her mouth. She started to cough blood. Angad gets worried and goes quickly to kripa
A: kripa….kripa

Angad picks up the phone to dial hospital but kripa stops him and holds his hand
K: shakes her head) don't
A: kripa…..what u do
K: plez angad….go away plez….(coughs more)
A: kripaaaaa
Kripa takes his hand and puts something in his hand….angad looks at it shocked
A: kripa….u drink poison (take the phone to call again but kripa stops him again)
K: let me die plez
A: move her hand and diles the #)

Angad gives the address then hangs up. Kripa gets up and runs to the bathroom locking the door behind her. Angad runs to the door and knocks harder
A: kripa open the door
K: leave me angad….go away
A: kripa open the door or I will break it

Angad starts to hit the door till finally he opens it….he finds kripa passed out on the floor. Angad picks her up in his arms and takes her outside were the ambulance came. The nurses runs to angad and takes kripa from his arm and lays her down on the bed then puts her in the ambulance.

They take her to the hospital and the nurse give angad to fill in some papers. He sits on the chair close to the operation door. His heart was racing faster and faster.

4 hours later the doctor comes out. Angad gets up and runs to him
A: how is she
D: plez come to my office
Angad sits across the doctor will the doctor starts talking
D: she ok now….we might have not been able to save her…but when she throw up blood the poison came out that's why now she out of danger. But u need to take care of her.
A: yes doc.
D: but can I ask u a question
A: what is it?
D: she drank poison….can I ask u why?
A: I don't know sir why to….
D: ok….but she will be discharged in 2 days
A: thank you…but can I see her
D: yes she is getting admit in a room…then u may
A: thank you

Angad inters to the room were kripa was. He sees her laying down on the bed her eyes closed and her face palm. Angad walks close to her and slowly touches her face. The nurse tell him that kripa will wake up in few house since they give her injection to rest. The nurse leaves will angad sits next to her on the bed and puts his hand again on her cheek will a tear falls down his cheek.
A: why did u do this kripa….

Few hours later kripa slowly opened her eyes. She looks around her then sees angad next to her staring at her. She moves her face the other way. Angad keeps on asking her why did she do this but she was quite all the time. 2 days later angad comes to pick up kripa from hospital. Kripa sits on the passenger seat will angad starts to drive. Both of them were quite. They reached to the hotel and kripa got out then she left straight to their room. She waiting for angad to come and open the door. Angad opens the door and kripa inters inside. She walks to the bed and lays down with her back toward angad facing the window. It was night and kripa was still laying down on the bed not moving and not saying a single word. Angad leveas out and few mints later kripa gets up. She goes to her case and take out beautiful shalwar kamiz and wears it.

Down the hotel room lots of people were there dancing partying. The music was loud. Angad was sitting in the bar drinking. Kripa comes down and walks at the garden. She sits at the bench in front of water. Angad just drinks and looks at the couples dancing together. A girl comes up to angad
G: hi im neha
A: angad
N: do u want to dance
A: sure lets go

Angad and the girls stars to dance will neha tells him about her self and angad just listen.
N: im in room 201
A: im in 204
N: wow so we are close
A: yea

Kripa turns around to see people dancing and sees angad dancing with a girl. She puts her knees to her self and puts her head on top of her hand and watches angad dancing with the girl. Angad was talking with neha when he sees kripa sitting on the bench watching them. He keeps on staring at her and fells really sad seeing her face still palm and really sad. A waiter walks up to kripa and offered her wine. Kripa takes the glass and drinks it. She again turns her back toward them and looks at the water will drinking. Kripa calls the waitress and gets another glass. She drinks 5 glass of wine. Angad watches her drink.

Kripa gets up and leaves to the back of the hotel witch had big garden and no one was there. Angad tries to leave to but neha doesn't let him
N: C'mon stay a little longer
A: I have to go (leaves quickly)

Kripa just walks there then falls on her knees all of sudden. She looks up at the sky. Angad comes there but hides behind the bush that was behind kripa. Kripa finds a match next to her on the ground. She picks it up and lights up one. She puts the match on her hand and burns her hand. Tears starts rolling down her cheek and she looks up
K: god….what did I do wrong
She takes out another match and lights it up then burns her hand again
K: why was prithvie after me? (she takes another one and lights it up then puts it on her hand again
K: I wish I didn't kill him that day and let him hurt me…I wish that built hit my stomach
Kripa keeps on lighting the matches and burning her hand. Angad was listening to her half shocked for what she was saying but he didn't know who she was talking about. Inside he burned when he saw her burning her hand. He couldn't take it anymore. Get runs up to her and hit's the matches off her hand then looks at her hand that were burned. He lifts kripa's head from her chine and looks at her into her eyes
Kripa looks down and again doesn't answer him when he asks her why she is hurting her self. Angad gets up and picks kripa in his arms then walks toward their room. Neha was opening her door when she sees angad and kripa in his arms. Angad inters into their room.

2 week passed by but kripa still didn't talk to angad. She was always quite and never tried to answer his questions. Angad everyday would go out with neha. Neha asked angad who kripa is but all he said was a friend.

Kripa was in the room alone when she run to the bathroom and started to throw up. She looked at her self in the mirror and started to cry again
K: no plez god don't (she touches her stomach will tears just rolls down her cheek)
She leaves to the store and buys pregnancy test thing. At night when she uses it she gets shocked when it shows positive. She sits on the corner of the bathroom with her hands on her face crying. She hears angad inter inside the room and neha was with him

A: ok goodnight neha
N: angad will u stay with me tonight
A: I cant neha….bye

Neha gets inside their room and puts her arms around his neck
N: plez angad
A: neha ur drunk…now go to ur room
N: no I want to be with u
A: neha…
Neha gets close to kiss him but angad moves back . Kripa gets out of the bathroom and sees neha hugging angad. Angad looks at kripa. Kripa turns around and goes back to the bathroom. Angad sighs and takes neha into her room then comes back. He sees kripa trying to leave and holds from her arm hard
A: I want to talk to u
K: quite again)
A: holds from both of her shoulder facing her) I had enough of this….today u have to answer all of my question
K: looks at him in the eyes angry) -----
A: gets angry and pushes her on the bed)

Kripa falls on the hurting her self a little bit but moves back.
K: shouts) stop it
A: pulls her from) we are leavening back right now

Angad takes all of their cloths and puts them in suitcase. He pulls from her arm and stands her up. He walks down to the car and puts the suitcase in back of the car then makes kripa sit on the passenger seat. He drives fast.
K: angad slow down
A: ignores and keeps on driving more faster)
K: angad slow down)

Angad keeps on driving more faster. He gets out of control and a car comes in front of them. Angad turns the wheel and the car hit's the tree hard. Angad hits his head on the wheel. Kripa hurts her self a lot. She screams loud in pain holding her stomach.
K: aaaaaaaaaaaaa

Angad gets back to sense and sees kripa holding her stomach screaming in pain.
A: kripa (kripa was just screaming more and more) kripaaaaa

Angad gets out quickly and goes to kripa's side. Angad gets in the road and tries to stop a car for help. A car stop and angad puts kripa side it and the man drives to the hospital. They reach to the hospital. The doctor takes kripa in and angad faints there.


Angad slowly opens his eyes and sees he was in a room. He sits up quickly
A: kripa

The nurse comes to him
N: sir plez lay down u need to rest
A: were is my wife
N: sir plez u need to lay down
Angad stands up and walks toward the other rooms. The nurse tries a lot to stop angad but he wouldn't stop. He was passing by the room when he stops and sees kripa from the window. She had oxygen mask on her nose

He inters inside the room. The doctor was there and stops him
D: sir u cant come here
A: she is my wife…
D: sir u need to leave
A: but she
D: I will tell u plez come
The doctor takes him out of the room into the hall
D: im sorry to tell u but she had a miscarriage
A: shocked and the words kept on coming in his head)
D: her condition is really bad….
A: misc…miscarriage….she was pregnant
D: yes… she was….im sorry (leaves back into the room)
The words kept on coming in his mind….he looks back at the window and sees kripa coming back to sense….she touches her stomach then moves the mask of her nose. The doctor puts the mask back in her nose but she removes I again asking the doctor about her kid
The doctor looked down and shacked his head.. Angad watched the doctor telling kripa. Kripa screamed loud
K: noooooooo…..plez not my kid…..(starts to cry)

Angad was watching her from the window. He falls on his knees and starts to cry silent.
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Posted: 18 years ago
omg that was sooooooooo good!!! thats sooooo sad!!! i cant believe angad is soo cruel i mean he did love her once! what the hell is he doing with neha i mean u have a depressed girl in ur room and its all ur fault and ur out with some girl who is like throwing herself at u... if anyone's cheap its neha not kripa!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
amazing part
that was sooo sad
poor krips 😭 😭
stupid idiot angad 😡 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
aawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was soooooooooooooooooooo touching poooooooooooooooor kripaaa!!!!!! 😭 ...gr8 job geets!!


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Posted: 18 years ago
omg that was an amazing part...sooooooo touching
u r such an amazing writer
poor kripa 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
it was so touchign yaar 😭 u have the talent to write such an awsome partr: i luved it! it seem so real 😭 😭 poor kripa! plz make kripa tell the truth soon i want to c angad suffering for what he did 😡 😭 😭

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