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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Awe uday is so worried for his princess
He called arman so many times & tell him to take care of her
Poor manyata is worried how she gonna face her families
As she know what she did was unforgettable
But arman assured her everything will be fine
Somewhere manyata families were hurt by her behavior as since they got her she always distanced herself from them
Never open up with her families as she never accept them
Now all manyata want is her families & uday
But this time her families r hurt by her left without letting them know where she is
Hope manyata will make up with her families soon
Thank god manyata dad isn't that serious & now perfectly fine
Continue plz
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Posted: 8 years ago
Great work dear
Please next update soon
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Hey alisha sis! read all the updates in 1 go. I must say your writings have improved alot, the way you have startes showing emotions so aptly, go girl. Loved all the updates, it's hard to predict what will happen in the future. hope everything turns out o be good for manveer..:) Liked the way everything has turned out to be...^_^ waiting for the next update, update soon. :)
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Thank You So Much Friends For Supporting And Encouraging... Our Forum Which Was So Active But Now Is Silent Still You Friends Supported Me... Thank You So Muchhh.. 😊😊😊


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So Now I'm Going To Post Another Update... Forgive Me Friends For Being So Late.. Here You Go As In This Update I Have Focus On Rathore's Relationship And No ManVeer...






Chapter 17



In Rathore's House
On Terrace
After coming from Hospital Mannie ran to Terrace and started Crying looking at Sky... And like that many Minutes went away but She was standing on same Spot... Then She heard Car Horn and ran to Her Room so that none could see Her crying...







In Living Room
Vijay was holding Briraj by his Shoulder... And Jay, Komal and DS were looking all around to see Mannie... But none sees Her and they all get upset as now too Mannie is ignoring them... Not talking with them... And not opening up to them.. Not giving chance to Amend their Relationship... What happened if they spoke ill they are elders they could... And then Briraj to Vijay...




Briraj: Vijay I'm okayyy.. And I want to go to My Room ..
Vijay: Dad let me...
Briraj (interrupting): no I'm fine... You go to Mannie's Room and check whether is She okayyy or not...
Vijay: jiii...





(Saying this Vijay went upstairs to check in Mannie's Room.. And Briraj walked to His Room... And then... )





Komal: Maa jii You shouldn't have to spoken like this to Mannie...
DS: what wrong did I did Komal... Didn't You see what Mannie is upto... Always give us Tension here and there... Now I felt it would have been better if We hadn't found Her out... And assumed She is dead...





(Listening this Komal's and Jay's Eyes widen... And... )





Komal: Maa Jii do You know what You are saying...
DS: what wrong did I said Komal... Have you ever thought that Mannie is part of Our Family... More than Family She seems to be Our Employee... Talk when it was needed about Business... That's it... Never ever I had seen Her giving Me the place of Her Daadi Sahab... Neither to You, to Briraj, to Vijay and to Jay... She always behave as Stranger with us.. Then tell me what should I say Komal...





(Listening this DS left from there to Her Room and Komal sat on Sofa and Her Eyes became Teary... She knew whatever DS spoke was all True... And then Jay sat near Her holding Her Hand... And... )






Jay: Mama Mannie behave not as Stranger... For Us for Dad, She engaged with Samrat because Dad Loved Samrat so muchhh ... When Dad got Hospitalized and was diagnosed with Heart-Attack so it was Mannie who was more worried than Us... Mama whatever problem had came She dealed with it but silently.. You know I had talk with Mannie's Councellor, She told Me Mannie is alright... And She will be completely alright when We will give Her Our Love... She is unsecured and this is what we have to take that Out from Her... We should understand Mannie as Friends not as Family... Mama DS whatever spoke it was Her Love behind that words... Not only Us but She is too hurted and to overcome of it she spoke like this... Mama We all Love Her so much and that's what We have to make Her realize that She matter to Us... Whatever She do it effect Us...








(Then Jay place Her Head on Komal's Chest... And...)






Jay: Mama don't You think Mannie is changed...





(Listening this Komal slightly pushed Jay and looking into Jay's Eyes... And... )






Komal: what do You mean Jay... I didn't understand anything...





(Listening this Jay stood up... And... )






Jay: Mama do You think Mannie will be able to spend Her whole Life with Samrat... Mama there is not a Single Day I have seen Mannie talking with Samrat... Mannie is not taking Responsibility towards Her new relation... And now this... She went out without telling Us... Mama I think We should talk Mannie regarding this... Because if Mannie would be happy then little bit Happiness would be Reflected in Her Eyes and on Her Face... But no... Mama its been 4 Years with Her... I think we should handle Her with Love and Patience ... And ask Her if She don't want to get Married to Samrat then We wouldn't... And Mama don't You think We should ask Mannie that if She is okayyy.. And whatever Work She went out... Was She successful in it... ??? Mama...
Komal (interrupting): hmmm Jay You are saying correct... Whatever happened it shouldn't be... Vijay have gone to talk with Her... Let's see what She says... Sometimes I really don't know Jay what should I do that I will get My Daughter back...




(Saying this Komal stood up and walked towards Her Room meanwhile Jay remembered what had happened after few seconds Mannie left from Hospital cryingly ... )






FLASHBACK


Outside of Room # 306
After Mannie went from there Runningly... Jay felt bad... And followed Her... But was stopped by Armaan who has holded Her Hand and...



Armaan: Jay stop it...
Jay (Angrily): Armaan She is My Sister...
Armaan (Angrily): ohhh really... Have You ever Understood Her... Nooo... None of You... You have been Her Family for Name-Sake... Have You ever tried to Understand Her... Noways... If Yes then Mannie would have Shared Her problems with You... She left City Twice but never ever told You Reason because She thought You can never understand Her...





(Listening this Jay looked down... And Armaan calmed Himself and hold Her Arms..)





Armaan: Jay I had said all because I want to make You realize that giving Space to Mannie will only cause Her to go far away from You... It was You who told Me She was Shot in Childhood... Then ventilator thing... Then wheel chair thing... It made Her so Weaken... That She had many Insecurities that's whyyy She didn't interact with You all... In fear that You would all go away from Her... So that's whyyy She doesn't interact with You all... Jay before being Her Sister become Her Friend who understand Her... (Pause) Jay I have Read Psychology and the way You told everything about Mannie which only tells Me this that try to understand Her and make Her insecurities go away... Mannie came and Appologized but what Your Daadi told... Is this the way Jay... Jay I know everyone Loves Her but try to understand Her.. Her innerself... From one Month She is taking Counselling... So did You got any improvement... Only Samrat-Mannie relation has bit improved... But what about Yours... Did You all have... Noo... The Day You would understand Her the Day You would get back Your Sister... (Pause) And I think Jay, Mannie did not like Samrat but said Yes agreed to it because Your Dad likes Samrat... Is this is not enough to tell that Mannie had accepted You all long back... But is afraid to Voice Her feelings out because of Her Past... Jay You have to become Her Sheild... Only then Your Relation will get improve ...







(Listening this Jay's Eyes got Teary... And...)





Jay: Armaan You just have met Her twice and understood Her .. But I being Her Sister... Living with Her didn't understood Her...





(Saying this Tears escaped from Her Eyes and Armaan wiped it... And Side-Hugged Her... )




Armaan: its alright Jay...





(Armaan was about to say more but They both heard Briraj's Room was getting Open... So quickly Armaan Kissed Her forhead and Hide Himself so that none could see Him... And then whole Family goes to Their House...)



FLASHBACK ENDS






(Remembering this Flashback... And remembering the Days after She got Her Sister... And...)





Jay: You were right Armaan... You were right...





(Saying this Jay walked from there... )








UpStairs
In Mannie's Room
Mannie was looking outside of Window and then Vijay came and knocked the Door.. And listening it Mannie wiped Her Tears... And turned around to see Vijay over there... And...




Mannie: arre Vijay Bhai Aap... Please come na... Do You need anything...




(As Mannie turned around He saw Her Red Swollen Eyes and heard... Then...)




Vijay: Mannie Bhai are You okayyy...
Mannie: Jiii Vijay Bhaiii... Aiyeee na...





(Listening this Vijay nods... Walked in and sat on Bed... And looking at Mannie...)




Vijay: wanna open up something wanna talk about something... Want to share something...




(Listening this Mannie became quiet... And Vijay thought Mannie didn't want to... Then stood up.. And...)






Vijay (Sadly): I should have known that I can never get My Lost Sister...






(Saying this Vijay sadly took steps towards Door... And listening this Few Tears came from Her Eyes... And)





Mannie: what should I say Vijay Bhai... What should I share... What should I open up... What should I talk about... When there are so many Things that I want to Reveal and to share and to get support and encouragement... But I didn't have that Strenght in Myself...





(Listening this Vijay was shocked that did Mannie just want to Open up... And then turn around.. While Mannie turned around again and faced outside from Windows...)





Mannie: Vijay Bhai I know I shouldn't have gone Out like this... And One Month I should have gone to Karachi without asking from You all... And My silentness had always Hurted You all and thats whyy what Daadi Sahab spoke was right.. Since 4 Years I had not become Your Family... I was so close to You all but very Far away from You all...






(Then Mannie again turned around... And...)






Mannie: Vijay Bhai I was too Hurted more than You all could imaginee... But I stayed away from You all so that I couldn't loose You all... Vijay Bhai back many years I had lost someone special... I was so close to them but when that Shoot Out (Mannie close Her Eyes and remembered that Shoot Out scene and Tears fall again... Then Open Her Eyes...) In that Shoot Out I had lost so muchhh... That Shoot Out had taken so much from Me... And when now I would let You in My World then what if in Future I too lost You all... And now I don't have that Strenght... Vijay Bhai I don't know whether I would become that Mannie that You all have Dreamt... I don't know whether I would become that Mannie or not... But Vijay Bhai I want to say that Your Sister is not strong... She is weaken... That Shoot Out had taken so much from Me... But My Lower Limb had made Me Living Dead... I dont know Vijay Bhai that I would become Old Myself that was before Shoot Out... Before Shoot Out I was so Naughty... And see now what I Have become... (Pause) Vijay Bhai I know I hurted You all beyond any limits... Maybe My appologize will not be enough for what I had caused... But still Your Little Sister want to appologize... I'm sorry Vijay Bhai... Will You Forgive Me...





(Listening this Vijay's Eyes became Teary ... And nods... Then opened His Arms in Air... Seeing this Mannie ran and Hugged Him... Vijay too hugged Her... And both cried... And then Vijay looked up as Thanking Allah for giving His Sister back... Then Kissed Her Hairs... Then after Few minutes breaking the Hug... Vijay cupped Her Cheeks and...)







Vijay: Mannie Bhai what happened in Past will not going to happen again... How much You had suffered had suffered muchhh... And now You won't... Now You will not going to loose Your Family... Mannie Bhai do You know when You were about to Born and when Me and Jay Bhai got to know that soon We will be having Sister so You don't know how much Happy we were and excited to welcome Our New Baby sibbling.. But what happened in Hospital none could imagined and now none want to remember it.. Then 4 Years back We got You back again... Do You think now We will let You go again from Us... No Mannie Bhai You can't even Imagine that how much We haved missed You and Loved You.. You can't...
Mannie (with Teary Eyes): I'm sorry Vijay Bhai... For being so selfish that I thought only about Myself but didn't thought about You all... That how much My doings will Hurt You... I'm sorry Bhai...




(Saying this Mannie again hugged Vijay... And Vijay hugged back... And then...)





Vijay: Mannie Bhai Do You want to meet Dad...




(listening this Mannie broke Hug... And nods No.. And...)





Mannie: how can I... Afterall I had hurted Him so muchhh... Bhaiii how can I meet Him and Appologized to Him when He Hates Me..
Vijay: who told You... None Hates You... All Loves You so muchhh.. But Dad is Hurted.. Won't You heal His Pain... Hmmm...





(Listening this Mannie nods... And immediately Vijay holded Mannie's hand and walked with taking Her to Briraj's Room..)







Downstairs
In Briraj's Room
Briraj was lying down and thinking that when He will get back His Daughter... When She will let Him in Her Life... Not knowing that all Rathore's will get back Their Princess soon.. As She had taken Her First Step towards Hetr Family... Then Komal after listening Jay's words walked in Room and was thinking on Jay's words... And then to Briraj...




Komal: Briraj I want to ask You something that whyyy You chose Samrat for Mannie..




(listening Komal's Words, it brought Briraj back ... And...)






Briraj: Huhhh...
Komal: Briraj whyyy You chose Samrat for Mannie...
Briraj: don't You know the Reason Komal... Don't You know how muchhh Correct Samrat will be for Our Mannie... Don't You know how much Samrat will Love Our Mannie.. In these Days haven't You see Samrat's Love for Our Mannie.. Haven't You...
Komal (Interruptng): I have seen Samrat and knows how much Samrat will be Good for Our Mannie... But these Feelings are only One-Sided not Two.. Briraj Mannie haven't accepted Us still now then how will She accept Samrat.. Briraj I think We should give some Time to this Relation... Mannie is just 17 Years old... Don't You think Mannie is small for Marriage right now..
Briraj (Little Angrily): I know this Komal... What do You think I will Marry off My Daughter tomorrow.. No Komal.. Not noww... I know Mannie is Young for this Relationship... We will Marry Her off after Her crossing 20... They are just engaged as Groom's Family wanted... Komal She had accepted Samrat... If not then whyy will She be ready for this Relationship...
Komal: I know... But She has not accepted Samrat as Her Future Husband... She had accepted Samrat just because of Us.. Just because of You... Briraj just think if Mannie would have accepted Samrat then She might have not behave Strangely with Samrat... I know Their Relationship has bit improvement from PAST... Just like You I was too thinking but Jay made Me realise after thinking much that Mannie doesn't look Samrat as We looked Samrat for Her... I think We should again ask from Mannie...
Briraj: You can say this... But I don't think We should ask again from Mannie... Just leave on Them... Let some Months pass if Their Relationship would not proceed then We will ask from Mannie... (Pause.. Taking Komal's Hand in His and softly) Komal Believe Me Samrat is best for Mannie... Knewing everything about Mannie that before Shoot Out She had loved someone... Then after Shoot Out what She had gone through... In all Time, Samrat was with Us in hard Time.. Komal like You I Love My Princess so muchhh... But if We will not give Their Relationship A Time... Before Their Relationship starts and we end it... Then We will loose such a Nicee Person..
Komal: Buttt...
Briraj (Interrupting): Komal let give them sometime... Anddd





(Briraj was about to say more... But was interrupted by KNOCK on Door and then both saw Vijay coming in with holding Mannie's Hand and Mannie was looking down... And both Briraj and Komal looked at Vijay then at Mannie and )





Vijay: Mom Dad Mannie Bhai wants to say something to You both...
Vijay (To Mannie): Mannie Bhai come on... They are Your Mom Dad... And They don't Hate You... Come on..





(Listening this Vijay unhold Mannie's Hand and Mannie looking down walked little ahead and..)






Mannie: Forgive Me Maa Baba.. I'm sorry...





(After saying this Mannie looked at them with Teary Eyes...)





Mannie: I know I have Hurted You all so muchhh.. I'm sorry Maa Baba... I have accepted You all as My Family Members long back but still have always created distances between Us... I'm sorry Maa Baba that I couldn't become Your Daughter... But You had become My Mother and Father... I'm sorry Maa Baba for not giving back Your Daughter Mannie.. I'm sorry Maa Baba for being so Careless... I'm sorry Maa Baba for giving You so much Tension...




(Then looking down again...)




Mannie: I'm sorry Maa Baba so muchhh...






(Listening this Briraj and Komal's Eyes got Teary... And both stood up and walked to Mannie.. And Komal quickly Hugged Mannie... Mannie hugged back... Both were having Tears and then fell off from Their Eyes and Briraj was caressing Mannie's Hairs and Tears were too falling from His Eyes... And Jay and DS who were near to Door... They have listened too what Mannie has said and Their Eyes were too Teary.. And then Jay Run to them and after Mannie-Komal hug was broken... Jay hugged Mannie and Cried... Then DS walked to them and caressed Mannie's Hairs... And seeing DS there... Mannie broke the Hug... And looking down ..)





Mannie: I'm sorry Daadi Sahab for giving so much Pain to You... I'm sorry...





(Listening this DS quickly hugged Mannie.. Then after few seconds broke the Hug and kissed Her forhead and Nods in No...)





DS: Mannie now don't do this again.. You don't know how muchhh We love You... Mannie please now don't distanced with Us... Please...






(listening this Mannie nods and hugged Her Daadi Sahab... Then Jay hugged Mannie from Side... And then Vijay who was having Teary Eyes seeing this Union too came and Hugged DS from side.. And then Komal too came hugged Jay from side.. And Briraj too came and hugged Vijay from side... They were hugging each other and it shows They have their Union... How True... They did have Union but they didn't got Their Daughter Mannie completely... Mannie just have taken First Step towards Her Family and Her Family had taken too step... And now slowly slowly Mannie will be taking Steps towards Her Life as now She got Her Soul-mate who had awoken Inner Mannie which results in New Mannie... Mannie will be taking steps towards Her Life and Her Family... But when Rathore's will be able to get Their Mannie completely... They will loose Her again... As when Mannie will be needing something Big from them inshort Her Life... She will be denied and refused... And that will be Time they will loose Their Beloved Mannie forever not knowing the Real Reason that They are getting back their Mannie now... Rathore's were having Union Hug... Not knowing Next Storm is waiting to Strike... They were enjoying not knowing till when...)







In Dubai
In Palm City
In UV's House
In UV's Room
UV was sitting on His Bed and was looking at Mannie's Recent Picture in His Mobile Phone that He had captured secretly... And was caressing Mannie's Face and His Eyes were Teary and Big Smile was playing on His Lips... And...




UV: Finally Princess finally I got You back... Finally I got My Life back... And now I won't let You go away from You... Princess I had stayed away from You enough and now I won't so thats whyyy I decided that soon I will ...






(after saying this UV stopped and Big Smile was playing on His Lips thinking about His Future... And then was about to Kiss Her Photo by bringing close to His Mouth that He felt His Fingers has started to shake and then Her Hands... Slowly Slowly Seizures has again started starting from His Fingers till His whole Body... In seconds His whole Body has started to get Seizures while UV has no Time to think that whyyy again His Body was getting seizures and fall on Floor... For awhile His whole Body was shaking badly... And then in next seconds DARKNESS has appeared infront of His Eyes... While UV's cell-Phone was been continuously Ringing and then stopped giving the Single to Person that something is not right with UV... But not something that UV had again received ATTACKs of SEIZURES which other Person soon will find out... )





Chapter Ends




Precap
Some Scolding..
Cute Shy Conversation..
Mannie's Feelings To Vijay...

Edited by Twinkle_alisha - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice concept dear
Love the family reunion part
You described it so beautifully
Hope our love birds get united soon

Keep writing
We are your writing fans
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Thank You... 😊😊😊
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Originally posted by: Aaish8

niceee Thank You... 😊😊😊


update sooon Updated... 😊😊😊


is barr zada dair intazar mat karwaeia ga Alright... 😊😊😊

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Originally posted by: cuteariya

awesome update Thank You... 😊😊😊


ouch uday had very hard time to control himself to make love with manyata Yuppp But That Was Dream Lol 😆



as he wanted manyata to be comfortable around him & be ready for him by her own self 😃 Yuppp... 😊😊😊



poor uday even had very passionate dream with manyata 😆 Yuppp LOLLL Poor Uday... 😆😆😆



OMG manyata dad got heart attack Well That Was Mistake Of Young Doctor... 😡




poor uday had to send manyata to Pakistan unwillingly 😭 Yuppp... 😭



at least manveer had cute lovely moments together ❤️ Yuppp... 😊😊😊



awe uday gave manyata all those toys she had in her childhood 🤗 Yuppp You Won't Even Imagine That How Much Uday Loves And Misses Manyata...



I feel so bad for manveer as they were in pain leaving each other 🥺 Hmmm But They Are Not Married So How Can They Love With Each Other...



hope after manyata's will recover manveer will be together for forever Yuppp Lets See... 😊😊😊



continue plz Yeahhh I Will Soon... 😊😊😊


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Originally posted by: great.dreams

Thats a great post dear Thank You... 😊😊😊



I love the way how UV took care of her Thank You... 😊😊😊



He understand her feelings Yuppp... 😊😊😊


I love the way you cast our hero''s dream in beginning of chappy Thank You... 😊😊😊



He could not stay away from his love so sweet of him Yuppp After So Manny Years Of Pain He Just Got Her But Unwillingly He Had To Send Her.. 😭




I hope you give the next update soon Well Till Chapter 17 Update Is Posted... 😊😊😊

your fb buddy 😆 😆 Okaiesss... 😊😊😊


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Thank You... 😊😊😊

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