Gaurishankaram... Mohit Raina Mouni Roy FF - Page 11

Originally posted by: mohinianammu

It' too good di pls continue soon😊😊

Originally posted by: DhwaniNair

PART IX

In Naksh's home, Mouli questioned Dadaji for helping the meeting of Shankar and Gauri. What happens if Naksh know about it!"Before his arrival, I will conduct the marriage of Shankar and our Gauri."

"I will not allow it Dadaji."

"Why don't you allow this marriage? Do you wish my sister too lead an unhappy married life like me?!"

Mouli's eyes became teary by Ganga's words. He stopped the conversation and went out.

So The Grandfather and Grandson-in-law had some verbal fight. But the GIL finally backed off. Good.😡

Dadaji consoled Gauri. "You will get your Shankar. Mouli can't inform this to Naksh now and he can't prevent me soo much".

Suddenly she asked " Dadaji, do you know the working time of Shankar's martial training centre?"

Dadaji and Ganga laughed together.
Oh My My!! My Gauri is really like Goddess Gauri. Nothing could ditter her form her Shankar.😛⭐️



Next day Gauri visited the training centre. When she saw the master Shankar, She is very much excited. Shankar saw her while training others. He ignored her. After sometimes, he came to her and asked her to get out of the centre. Gauri smiled and said: "You should admit girl students too in this centre because nowadays they need more physical strength than man". She left with smile.
Just Like Goddess Gauri...how sweetly and patiently she coaxes her Shankara out form his Slumber like Trance and makes him engage with this world as Adinath the primal Teacher, Master of everything. Likewise our Gauri too will manage her Shankar to agree to teach the girls the martial skills as well.😃
And Dhwani I am so happy that you very beautifully present this scene.😃

Shankar stood like a statue. "Bhabhi's idea is nice, right Bhaiyya".

'Stood like Statue' Shankar gave his reply to Nandu. "Yes."

Nandu smiled in his mischievious style as usual.

Shankar who is like come out of his unconsciousness asked him: "What did you say...? Bhabhi?? Who is your bhabhi??"

Nandu run away by saying "You accepeted it for a while, Poor bhaiyya'.
And here we are...like the God Shankara our Shankar too agrees with his Gauri.😛 And he realises Nandu's remarks too😳😆


Superb Dhwani.

Originally posted by: DhwaniNair

PART X

Shankar's home. Its time for reading after his work in martial centre. He used to read books in all genre.
Wow...so our Shankar reads as well.😉Like our Lady Mo.😆

Dadaji came there to meet Shankar with a request to marry Gauri. It's not fair for Shankar to marry a girl without the consent of parents. So he politely rejected it.
Well about the marriage I like to quote my Mata. Just before her Swayamvar Sati was questioned by her mother an sisters that how could her Shiva would enter the wedding hall when Daksh had placed the tightest security. The ever playful beautiful Sati replied, "Woh kaise ayenge yeh mujhe pata nahin, kintu woh avashya ayenge yeh mujhe pata hai."
(How will he come I don't know but he will be there that I know for sure.) And she presented her mysterious smile...exactly...after all Bride must be waited for her Groom, as it is upon to Him to think about his arrival at his own wedding. And am positively sure that I will find the same moment here.😃 So just Best of Luck...that's all.
"I'm leaving to the temple, Patel ji.
Yes of course...😳

On the way to temple, Shankar met Gauri.
"How is it Shankar ji?" She said it wearing a new dress with a cute childish face.

Aww I like her in this dress...and her childlike face is really cute...I mean cutest.😛

Shankar walked without utter any word, Gauri followed him as usual.
Aww...and the eternal chasing for one attentive glance, one appreciative smile.😳
"I came here to show it to you. This new one brought by Jiju yesteday. He gave me it even after all that problems. Men are soo good, am i right Shankar ji?"

Hmm...what is her intention??😆

"You danced well yesterday".

And Shankar has noticed😆👏

Gauri stunned and stopped.
"What did you say?? Oh my god! Thank you Shankar ji"

I love his Agantuk looks and glance...and yes Gauri your Shankar has praised you for your dance.😉
He turned and smiled. Gauri amazed again!

And he smiles❤️
"Gauri ji, Could please do a favour to me?"

And Gauriji😉...would they call each other with the suffix 'ji' for their rest of the life??😳😆It's very cute by the way.
"What question is this! You can ask me anything except not following you"

Clever and Smart girl.😆
Shankar said: "My friend is a dancer and doing dance programs around India. You know, my friend is going to perform near Kedarnath temple the day after tomorrow. But the problem is the partner with whom my friend practiced to perform has feeling some physical problems. It is very difficult to find another girl and teaching the steps in one day. But I think you are an extraordinary dancer and can pick up the steps in one day."

Okay...so he is asking her to help one of his friend.😃 He surely trusts her...otherwise he won't ask her.
"Are you going to ask me to perform in that program with your friend? Ohh my Shankar ji.. I will do it. I love dance. You have confidence in me. Thats enough for me for self-confidence. Thank you Shankar ji for this opportunity"
As I thought...she gets the signal right...and extremely happy.
"But you should inform your father and please avoid my name in this case. I want to happen it. It is my friend's dream. If you gets permission from your father, please go to my friend's home tomorrow morning which is the only home behind my home"

And he is ever thoughtful and caring about her...remind me the dialogue.."Maryada ki shiksha bhi mujhe unhi se mili hai." (I do learn the lesson about honour and dignity from Him)
"Papa love my performances on stage. So don't worry. I will go there and fulfill your friend's dream"

Yay...always the Darling.
Shankar thanked and said bye. But Gauri followed and asked "Can I ask one thing?" Shankar stopped and looked at her by expecting the question. "You told me some of the qualities that you wish for your future wife. Anything left? I think you wish to marry a dancer, am I right?"

And She is very fast, smart and naughty.😆
Shankar turned and walked again. But this time he answered. "You are right. I am happy if my wife know dance and music. I wish she should be so traditional in personality as well as in dressing too". Gauri stucked by this and looked at her dress. Shankar just smiled and moved. But Gauri stood their with a cute sad face.

And Voila!!! He finally blurts his wish for his wife...know about dance, music, be traditional and dressed as well.😆
Next morning she woke up early, wore saree with the help of Ganga, went to temple, mesmerized by the priest, the ignoring lover Shankar. When he came to near for giving prasadam she said very happily and loudly: "I like to wear traditional dresses too". Shankar looked her and moved with his serious look. Gauri gave a funny smile to those devotees who is looking at her.
Hmm...She looks beautiful in traditional saree too😃
Gauri decided to go to his friend's home without disturbing Shankar. She went and saw a house behind Shankar's home. She felt so happy because it is really a musical atmosphere. She listened Gayathri manthra in a sweet female voice from the home.

SO his friend stays behind his house.😆
"Om bhur bhuvaH svaH,

tat savitur varenyaM,

bhargo devasya dhImahi,

dhIyo yo naH prachodayAt"

I love the doction of this hymn very much...
Gauri closed her eyes by listening that soothing and divine melody. But it stopped soon. She opened her eyes and thought.

So Gauri was listening the song and predicted that his firend is married??😲
"Oh Shankar's friend is married. When will this Shankar wish for a marriage! He has too only one Muhruth for it. Hum."

I really like to see Gauri and Shankar married too😃

Gauri rang the calling bell. The door is opened.

A beautiful young woman with a beautiful smile.

"Gauri? Please come inside."
Gauri entered home and asked her about her song and husband.
So Suhasi is here...and our Gauri asked her everything😆 really would love to see Suhasi and Mouni to chat.😆

She smiled and said. "Yes, I was singing. And I am not married"

Gauri surprised then who is she. This is Shankar's friend's home na!
"Gauri, I am Nandini, Shankar ji's friend"
Gauri shocked.
Never mind Gauri...she will be one day.😆

"We were schoolmates. I think you know my brother Nandu. Shankar ji and his father take care of us after the death of our parents".
Gauri tried to smile.
"Okay Gauri, please wait for one minute. I will give you tea. Then we can start our practice."
Very Sad. about Nandini but it's okay...she and Nandu both are doing very well. I am happy.
Gauri nodded her head hopelessly and sadly. She started to examine Nandini.

Traditional!
Polite!
Dancer!
Singer!

She felt to cried aloud... But poor Gauri stood by making fake smile.
Oh No...Gauri is now doing a fast math...relax...
She recollected Shankar's words about his "my friend"!

So many thoughts rotated around her mind.

'Oh! That means he talked to me because of this special friend! Friend! Only friend! Not like me. I am his soulmate. If Nandu is his brother, then Nandini a sister. Nandu wish for our marriage. That means Nandini and Shankar ji are just friends. Am I correct God?? Or Shankar Ji and Nandini waiting for a day to reveal that they are in love to others!!! No No No.. Shankar ji loves me. Only me.. Oh my God!! What I will do.'

Gauri picked up the step soon and well in between her dillemma because she is doing for this Shankar ji. She hopes for good...

Just one sentence..."Stop driving yourself crazy" Because it will bring no good.


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Originally posted by: DhwaniNair

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"ji" will be there ;)



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Originally posted by: DhwaniNair

Thank you Rimi... :)

"ji" will be there ;)



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Stay connected with my ff... and giv comments too...

Ur comments encourages my writing.. :)

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