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Mirabell

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Looks like we are reaching the end of this thread...

It is time for Thread Two

And it's all because of YOU

Thank you for being so supportive of this story with your kindness, your comments, your thoughts, sentiments and your faith in my writing. I am truly humbled... This means a lot to me. Thank you...

Here is the link to Thread Two...

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mayurisb80

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Posted: 10 years ago

#972

that was so beautiful and touching a grief shared is grief halved..

Meera is such a beautiful child ...can't help but fall in love with her...

there is so much more Kushi feeling insecure about meera wanting to protect her from getting attached to ASR but cant help herself from waiting longingly for him... Manorama is such a wonderful mother in law...

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DDC1

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Posted: 10 years ago

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You weave a beautiful kadhambam interspersed with love, grief and poignancy.

Arnav being a little kid in front of his Nani and Kushi not being able to find herself in the pic, your description of Kushi's jealousy about Meera's bonding with Arnav.. esp when she shares something so personal as her grief- masterstrokes from a seasoned writer.

Love the words you weave..cant wait for Kushi to meet Mohan.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Loved the update, MB!

For me, the highlight of the update is Meera. Her empathy towards people and understanding what an emergency at hospital could mean tells us how deeply her father's death had affected that eight year old's innocent soul.

Meera is a part of Khushi and it seems like Khushi passed on some of her past feelings for Arnav to Meera, for the usually reticent Meera instantly warmed up to and accepted Arnav. 😊

And I think I understand Khushi's apprehension regarding Meera's growing fondness for Arnav as she herself is struggling with her conflicting emotions and feelings.

I always love their message interactions.

Again, loved the title of the chapter. New beginnings indeed... not just for Arnav and Khushi but also for Arnav and Meera. Waiting for Mohan to join the picture too.

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ipkndlover75

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Posted: 10 years ago

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That was a really long and beautiful update!!!..

Just love Meets... She's such a intuitive and sensitive kid...Meera n Mohan... They match so perfectly... Glad Arshi r getting closer...waiting to c how this visit turns out...

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headtotoe

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Superb Mira !!! I am in love with you... You do romance to subtly and yet it blows off my mind every time I read your updates... You are truly gifted !!!

I was almost in tears and with a lump in my throat when I read the emotional questionnaire that Meera had to get answered from Arnav... Felt like after so many years Meera could keep the weight of her agony down and Arnav was all the more there to help her in this... Just loved that moment..

I am loving this story... Please continue soon.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Amazing chapter MB. It was surreal to read how Arnav hoped like a teenager to get any message from Khushi. He has a sister? And the more I read about Meera, more I love her and you too for writing with such a finesse a wise child. Thank you for the mail dear :)

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oopppsss

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Dear Mirabell,two chapters down and I am a goner.Seems like i have only seen the tip of this(story)iceburg only difference being the warmth of the writing.Thanks for writing Second Chances for us.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Hello MB!

I came across this story title from Meera's blog. Curiosity brought me here and I am not disappointed...It is indeed an impressive theme and lovely narration. Meera has already captured my heart...I just finished chapter 10...I loved the writer's monologues which is neatly woven in to the characters and situations...beautiful analogies, capturing bonds of friendship and marriage..

Narein left an impression of a wonderful father, husband, friend, a good human being...Manorama a real woman who was caught up in traditions and rules of past but I love her for the support, encouragement and love she shares with Khushi..

Lavanya and Maya, oh! aren't they sweet hearts? Supportive friends and positive energy sources...Mohan is a very silent child...solemn as you said...

Arnav - not easy to form an impression of this man...he is enigma..Khushi- the survivor..it isnt easy for her to give, yet she gave only to loose again...I am loving the way you write about her journey...it takes immense strength and will power for this character to face the challenges of life...

Oh I love those post scripts you write...it does show wisdom and perspective...Will be following...Please send me an update alert @ dreamymaya@yahoo.com

Thank you!

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Mirabell

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: dreamymaya
Hello MB!
I came across this story title from Meera's blog. Curiosity brought me here and I am not disappointed...It is indeed an impressive theme and lovely narration. Meera has already captured my heart...I just finished chapter 10...I loved the writer's monologues which is neatly woven in to the characters and situations...beautiful analogies, capturing bonds of friendship and marriage..

Thank you so much... I am a huge fan of Meera30 myself.. :)

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