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Natasha333

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Posted: 10 years ago

#981

AwESome storyyy...so beutiful..really love it..nd i hope khushi will treat mohan..

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Pramila

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Posted: 10 years ago

#982

Just found your story...awesome..just done with chapter 3...

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Sobhan006

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Posted: 10 years ago

#983

I've inly read few chapters and I know I'm quit behind to post comments... Still I want to say what a lovely and emotional chapter...I'm going to continue my reading...

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madhu1210

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Posted: 10 years ago

#984

Chap 2 n 3

Superb .

Arnav n khushi can read each other.

Loved the way her daughter attached to Arnav. .

Wow he invited them to stay with him in Delhi

La is good friend of khushi.

Khushi overcoming her grief.

Their lunch was good.. she opened up

But still so many questions she has??

Chap 4..

Khushi is so much alone n making herself strong for her daughter.

Like her n Mil convo...

Arnav n her sms exchange was good

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madhu1210

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Posted: 10 years ago

#985

Awesome chap 5..

What a tight friendship. ..

They stand strong for each other...

The way la asked khushi seriously tenacious. .

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madhu1210

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Posted: 10 years ago

#986

Lovely 6 n 7th chapter. .

La with khushi nice bonding. .

Arnav n his ex wife beautiful friendship which is rare specially after divorce. .

Lived the she kept on asking Arnav about khushi..

Thanks to La khushi text back to Arnav

Chap 8 , 9 n 10th superb..

NK is the one who helped khushi to live again n now it's so difficult for khushi without him..

Wow, all packed n set for India trip...

So much whirlwind is going on in Arshi...

Manorama n buaji going to understand that arshi needed each other..

So thoughtful of Arnav to give her a phone loved his text..

Maya kailash too good..

Wow buaji great invited Arnav for lunch..meera n Arnav going well..

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955548

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Posted: 10 years ago

#987

How fluently those thoughts You have penned.

Maturity & fluency to be admired.

'Her hands were cold to touch. He squeezed them hard as if to wake them up to his warmth '

And where Khushi's thoughts turn to the fear of loneliness.

So true when one becomes 'one minus two'

Reality of Life.

❤️S

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955548

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Posted: 10 years ago

#988

Loved the way You have showed the relationship between :-
Maya & Nani
Mother & Son
Arnav & Maya
Between Akash -Lavanya -Khushi
Interestingly interwoven.
This intense yearning - this ache making Arnav restless.
'Will there be a message from Her'
Loved Lavanya & Khushi's friendship.
Love the way the threads of the story making this fabric more colourful.
And Maya's words 'The Khushi'
Emphasis on those words & unravelling 'The Khushi' - interesting
Where & Why & When everything turned Sour between Arnav & Khusi ?
??????????
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955548

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Posted: 10 years ago

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As Oscar Wilde said 'Memory...is the dairy we all carry about with us '

We file away those moments somewhere back of our mind.

We can never wipe them away. Cannot erase them.

It all happened a decade ago yet so vivid in Arnav's mind as it came flooding back.

10 years ago their path crossed. That one week so well left it's stamp on those moments spent together. The Stolen Moments:-

You have so beautifully summed it up.

'No just Her. Me. Together'

Inner Turmoil on each other's heart.

It still affects each other..

Image of the 'Dimpled Soul' floats in his mind.

Daughter & Mother both affected Him.

Wayward thoughts. Anxiously awaiting for that phone to beep

Emotions...ah they had to be restrained.

And then that phone does a jig.

Echoing the jig of his heart.

Sleep gone good- byes.

Yet those all important messages- soothing

The Giver of the Gift brings that much needed peaceful sleep.

And loved the Rhyme

2 little Dicke Birds...K.I.S.S.I.N.G...

Loved the way this chapter evolves.

Peep into their echoing thoughts.

❤️S

P.S.:-

'Your memory is a monster;

You forget- it doesn't.

It simply files things away, It keeps things from You

& Summons them to recall with the Will of it's Own

You think You have the Memory;

BUT it has You'...John Irving...

Just wondering those names:- Meera ka Mohan?

Big Sister protecting little Brother...

ITAFAK...

My imagination running wild...

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955548

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Posted: 10 years ago

#990

Thank You for taking time to read my comments.
It is a partnership between the Writer & the Reader
They go Hand in hand...
enough said...
Beautifully said -'Death is a bitch- Lav...and I have to live with it'
Lavanya's inquisitive questioning...
Memory of the first time...
That one week with Arnav.
...They were memories only that.
Those memories neatly put away right at the back with the rest of them.
Held no promises - No future...
Loved the openness between the friends
And the beautiful warm relationship between Khushi and NK's mother
Bravo to You MB
A decade pass-by.
ALL the firsts without NK
Part & Parcel of being a single Parent.
First baby steps to be taken towards those Dormant Memories.

❤️S