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Mirabell

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Posted: 10 years ago

#961

Originally posted by: xshilohx
I will be back! 😛

And as always, I will wait. :)

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seshatree

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Posted: 10 years ago

#962

I would say that this was a lovely and heart rending update. Loved the way ASR handled the small child...

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saschades

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Posted: 10 years ago

#963

another beautiful update

thanks and sorry for late response xx

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Jessie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#964

Both of them are eager to meet one another but Khushi is keeping a distance.

The invite by Buaji and Manorama was nice, in keeping with being courteous.

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sunitikapoor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#965

I love the pace of the story. ...brilliant update...I love this Arnav...love the way he is showing his patience towards everything which is coming in his way. I love this Meera...very cute child. Absolutely loving the bonding between Meera and Arnav. Very beautifully written...specially Khushi's anxiousness.

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Seeta

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Posted: 10 years ago

#966

What touched me the most about this chapter is the support system both Arnav and Khushi have... It's like fans rooting for their teams to win...

I hope Mohan warms to Khushi as much as Meera has to Arnav..

Time has wonderful way of healing along with moments of reflection on the past.. The past is something that cannot be erased but simply has to be accepted, it is how we move forward that will define us from this moment onwards..

Khushi's upbringing may make her hesitant to reach out to Arnav as much as she would like to .. Society has a horrid way of endless gossip to belittle you..

I feel there are many cupids in your story and only one arrow has to hit the target right !!

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Mirabell

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Posted: 10 years ago

#967

Originally posted by: LadyR
What touched me the most about this chapter is the support system both Arnav and Khushi have... It's like fans rooting for their teams to win...
I hope Mohan warms to Khushi as much as Meera has to Arnav..

Time has wonderful way of healing along with moments of reflection on the past.. The past is something that cannot be erased but simply has to be accepted, it is how we move forward that will define us from this moment onwards..

Khushi's upbringing may make her hesitant to reach out to Arnav as much as she would like to .. Society has a horrid way of endless gossip to belittle you..

I feel there are many cupids in your story and only one arrow has to hit the target right !!

@blue - Word! So beautifully said! And this truth is so elusive.. if pasts are our shadows that follow faithfully, then it behooves us to accept their presence in our present. :)

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seeta naipaul

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Posted: 10 years ago

#968

His Nani and her mother in law are seeing signs that there us some sort of attraction between Arnav and Khushi

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SS88

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Posted: 10 years ago

#969

This is a beautiful story, probably one of the most beautiful ones I have read. On IF or otherwise. Thank you or writing this. I want to write more, but I'm overwhelmed by grief , love and awe. Grief for Khushi, Meera and Manorama. Love for all your characters and I'm in awe of your mature storytelling. Keep up the good work.