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Wow this story is just amezing ... Very real ... And very emotional ... And also full of life , friendship ... Friends are something you in your life that you yourself choose to be with it is not given to you so it's a special bond in one's life ... I just love this relationship that everyone shares here be it akash Lavnya Khushi or Arnav and maya
It's very special ...

I would love to read more on this story
Can you plz pm me
Or e mail me
archi3848@gmail.com

I loved how you began, alternating between Arnav and Khushi's monologues. You can tell how deeply that time of their lives, that one week is etched within their hearts and minds. I don't think it is easy sharing a memory with someone because when we do, our memories become more real than ever. And we can never be sure whether we want to go back to that place again knowing how acutely it affected us once. It makes me all the more curious now and I can't wait for the story to unfold.

I also need to thank you for having characters like Lavanya and Maya. The best friends, companions, cushions to fall back on, the ones to hold you and guide you. They're both equally beautiful and special.

But the last part, so relatable. Obviously. The pressure to deliver a satisfactory response. Especially when it comes to matters of the heart. Not too formal, not too eager, not so quick, not so late. Ooof! All that struggle. 😆
It was cute, actually and such a sweet way to get things rolling in motion. Because now that Khushi is going to be in India, I expect some major match making and more revelations okay? Or whatever way YOU decide to tell us the story. Your reader trusts you with your characters and story, which is now a part of us as well!

Already SO EXCITED about Chapter 8,
Isha

P.S Mere Meera Mohan kab milenge? I love love when you write about kids in general. It's so endearing and fun to read.

P.P.S. Maya Vallabh Singh is my spirit animal.

i totallly loved this chapter... this part brought many surprises though after reading the previous chapter I was sure of Maya been a good human being but now after reading this I am really liking this Maya girl... amazing conversation between Arnav and Maya... not even for a second it felt that they were 'x'...the level of comfort, care, respect and the happiness that they seek for each other is amazing.

What a wonderful story. Absolutely love it.

Meera what an outstanding writer you are dear..i just clean bowled over your way of unfolding the story..i really now desperate to know what happened in that one week that they started feeling for each other knowingly or unknowingly but both are again in refusal mode of like nothing happened and moved on..or have they met each other after their marriage? Maya's character was a very suprise for me too..i m surprised to see the friendship even after divorce..but i loved her way of asking abt the massage which came of khushi's or not..and loved arnav and khushi's sms changing..and both thinking that now ball is on her or his side alternatively..and sleep is far far away from arnav's eyes..ye to hona hi tha..yaar ab yeh saturday kab ayega? Plz jaldi update kijiye..

Amazing update! Loved the camaraderie between maya nd Arnav.
And arnav's Excitement was very contagious.

Nice update. However I didn't figure wats the age of Mohan? 6?

Thanx.
Meg

Lovely updates...
Well written...
Continue n do pm me...

Heya M ;)
I read all the updatd parts of your ArShi simple,unique n b'ful story in-a-go!!

I cried :-
I smiled too :)) specially after reading Chapter 7 :*

Loved the story alott...
Loved ur words more that convey myraid of overwhelming emotions..happy n sad!!

Post Asap!
Cheers!!

And yeah..that was my first post in IF :p
(and this one 2nd) :)

Originally posted by: LuniatAN

And yeah..that was my first post in IF :p
(and this one 2nd) :)

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