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Milsha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#611

Finally read the chapters! Was really busy :/

Oh pix is what Arnav calls Maya?? :D Haha! It brought a smile on my face.. how he had started calling her that again.. Just meeting Khushi brought positive changes to his life.. When maya kept on asking about the message it just reminded me of my school times. How i used to annoy my best friend like that :P haha!

These two will never accept that they had something going on back in the past!! Hmpphhh! I hope la and maya make them both spill it out! ;)

All in all, it was a wonderful update! X

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ipkndlover75

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Posted: 10 years ago

#612

Amazing update!!!...

Just felt like going on n on...loved ur writing style!!!

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@shekha2012

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Posted: 10 years ago

#613

WOW this is a SWEET update

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shamy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#614

Mirabelle such sweetness and poignancy in Arnav and Khushi's relationship just as it is between Arnav and Maya and Khushi and Lavanya! All of them come across as such genuinely beautiful people and I want to root for Arnav and Khushi just like Maya does! I love your story and Saturday can't come sooner!

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-Saumya-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#615

You know there are those stories which force you to think again, makes you notice you wouldn't have before and the bits you carry with long after. This story is just that and more.

Your characters are sketched beautifully and I really like how we unfold another layer to them with each chapter. Khushi has sort of an air of melancholia surrounding her and if not for Meera, I'm not how would she have managed. Also, I love how Arnav and Maya share such a wonderful relationship. Maya seems like an amazing person.

So Arnav called out to Khushi in unconsciousness. This made him (and us) definitely surprised. I wonder what happened in that one week though. Something poignant definitely.

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luvbug

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Posted: 10 years ago

#616

fantastic update...really loved maya and Lavanya...awesome friends... friends are so precious 😊

feel so happy after reading this update...and love their chat awesome 😃

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Poju

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Posted: 10 years ago

#617

Wowww..finally Khushi messaged😉😆

Can't wait for Khushi to come to Delhi.. Felt sad that both of them are holding themselves back.. They truly need each other.

Loved the way u have portrayed Arnav and Maya's relation.. Very pure and true.. Also every Khushi should have a friend a companion like Lav..

N I fully trust u DAT u will bring out the best out of them..

Waiting desperately for ur update..

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sunitikapoor

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Posted: 10 years ago

#618

Very cute update...and end made me smile when they both are exchanging their thoughts through sms. What happened in that One Week that Arnav and Khushi are not able to forget each other in the last 10 years. I simply like Maya, and love your ASR thoughtful and wonderful human being...you have shown us a great friendship between Maya and Arnav...Lavanya and Khushi.

Waiting for Khushi to come to India and waiting for her to meet Mohan and Arnav. While writing his name Mohan...I just have a question...like why Meera and Mohan...any reason behind it. Just curious nothing else.

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Barunz4ever

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Wow loved reading it!!! Though the NK n khushi part makes me cringe..coz for me it is n wl always be Arnav Khushi Hamesha ..forever. .Can't imagine nyone beyond this eternal couple..But I suppose your story needed that past n well I m glad now the future is with Arnav😉..N also glad that Arnav khushi met n had feelings for each other first 😛 , n that didn't work for reasons I am dam curious to know !!

Lavanya , khushi n Aakash's friendship is rocking!!!

N just like nani I too am confused thinking about Arnav n Mayas relationship. .If they are such good friends n share such great camaraderie with each other , why did they divorce.??.I think best buddies can make great partners in a relationship..N after divorce too they are in such great space with each other, which is almost rare..

Their past of 1 week is making me too curious..Could u pm me ur updates...I sent you a buddy request too...n thanks a ton to deepthi for suggesting me this one..My email ID is..roopsi871@gmail.com

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JJKKL

@JJKKL

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Posted: 10 years ago

#620

Beautiful Chapter Mira. The parallels of friendship between Khushi-Lavanya and Arnav-Maya was nice to see. Countdown started for the arrival in Delhi.

Questions,questions,questions everywhere...

This chapter made me think about marriages. Of different kinds.
You have portrayed a few in this FF.
That of Lavanya and her husband I can understand. Have seen many around.
That of NK's parents is also quite common

But the other two is not so common. I am assuming Arshi's connection was strong for both of them and out of this world. But something happened later which made them go their separate ways.

Khushi found so much happiness with NK. Forgot ASR completely ? Not sure.

ASR had a marriage and a kid. But got divorced. But still in a very friendly relation with Maya. I am yet to see a divorced couple who are great friends.

Did ASR love Khushi so much that he could not forget her even after Maya came into his life ?

Would Khushi have thought of ASR the same way if NK was still around ?

Questions,questions,questions everywhere...

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