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JJKKL

@JJKKL

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Thanks to Choti for recommending this. Am a big fan of hers though never commented on her stories. She has many fans to write comments and that too so well. So I was always a silent reader. Hope you are reading this Choti.

Mira, when I read your introduction I was wondering whether I should read further. Because I believe in one man - one woman relations. Particularly in Indian stories and serials. Western world is okay for me. I appreciate even infinite loves for the same person. Ironic isn't it ?

But I continued to read. And am glad I took that call. Very well written. As if you were holding my hand and taking me behind Arnav to take a look at what is happening in Khushi's place. I felt like a drone camera hovering behind Arnav looking inside the house. WoW. So well written. ANd I cannot believe you are not a writer.

Waiting for the next. Will send you my email

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hararnav

@hararnav

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

wow.. brilliant...

u got me the first line itself... the hesitation whether to knock or ring the bell or just go back... its so hard to describe the feelin of meetin a dear one after a long gap and u hav decribed it beautifully...

dont wanna ask abt the flashback and details.. will wait for u toreveal everythin slowly..

can see how much u loved meera's wrk, u hav dedicated and used her name too.. so sweet:-)

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headtotoe

@headtotoe

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

I liked what I read... Thanx to Choti !!! I followed her recommendation and it turned out to be very nice...

Mature romance is something that everyone do not try their hands at as its very difficult to emote there but you have done a fantastic job in the first update itself !!!

Would love to complete his journey with you...

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kushikumari

@kushikumari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

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anukap

@anukap

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Thank you choti desi for recommending this very promising story. A great beginning mirabell, looking forward to it unfolding.

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pinkly

@pinkly

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

This is an excellent start. Meera seems like an adorable bubbly girl. NK is no more. I also guessed Arnav and Khushi were more than friends. Something happened and they went separate ways. Going by the ASR reputation, he must have pushed her away due to his big ego :-). Nicely written. I would definitely like to read more and know what happens next in Arnav and Khushi's lives.

Since you have mentioned the updates will be posted every Saturday, I will check this thread itself to read next chapters.

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anera

@anera

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#57

i will def follow this one
i would not be regular activ --exams
so
nice start

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Seeta

@LadyR

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

A very nice start. You have captured many emotions of Arnav and Khushi in your first chapter look fwd to more.

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sman

@sman

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

what an awesome story line..loved it..its so intriguing..

Thanks Choti for recommending..else I would have missed the awesome story

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kushiarnav1

@kushiarnav1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#60

simple and complicated love story...can wait to read about their past...

thanks to chotidesi ...for posting this story link on her beautiful story thread...

looking forward to the next chapter..
cheers.