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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: palakajenian

hey i m here although late but kya karun i was really stuck with my brothers wedding nd then after marriage rituals nd work uff ek nanhi si jaan kya kya kare
now coming to the part starting thodi confusing thi i mean kab mall se achanak flower shop agayi pta hi nah chala wo to tab pta chala jab girl ki dress description read kiya tab pta chala ki scene change hogya
then loved hiw u show ar next meet its its totally unexpected in the temple
armaan car broke down nd ridhz came to take something for the bouquet loved how armaan thinks that he is hallucinating ridhz but is situation par mujhe ek song yaad aya arz kiya h

milke bhi hum na mille tumse na janne kyn
Millo ke h fasle tumse na jaane kyn hmmm

sorry 😛
now aage so it anjali is ridhz nd minni cousin nd they have a great bond but i have confusion how come ar didn't meet in anjali atul marriage nd hows it possible that they both are so close to anji before marriage still didn't met each other once

then mall scene is really funny yeh teeno behno ne bechare sid ka kya hall kiya he he he after reading the scene i was laughing like crazy minni omg yeh to pakka chota packet bada dhamaka type h he he he poor sid
ar second meet is also awsome loved how they start fighting in middle of the parking lot its really a fun to read
loved the bouquet pic its so beautiful nd different
loved this part too as always
u know wat i just loved ur story its so unique nd different from all others
i just loved this story coz of ur writing style
in this story every single character is special nd has its own importance its not just ar and this is a love story but still has its own phase nd essence
it has humor , masti , fun, suspense omg again ek to i hate nd love this hate as u always end the part like this state in which i have curiosity to read the next soon are sb kya hoga, who is the person ? i mean har part ke end mein u always create a suspense
anyway now do continue soon ok i can't wait to read more ur making me addicted to it *pout*



Hey palak
Its ok
U r not late as maine next update to ab tak di nhi so next update dene tak u r not late
Aww...So sad kitna kam karte ho ap

Wo starting me u see waha i wrote Few moments before somewhere else means
Yeh mall wali happenings k kuch waqt pehle kuch aur jagah pe jo hua wo describe kiya
U know what
i also remembering this song when i was writing the scene
😆
Hey don't be sorry feel free to sing & talk
Evrything is allowed here😉😆

Ok about ridz being anji's close still don't know armaan
that part next part me explain hua hai isiliye i didn't dig it much here
So ap next part pado agar phir bhi apko confusion lage to feel free to ask😊

yea indeed minnie is chota packet badi dhamaka
i m so glad that u like the part

well i think evry one have individual importance & i just try show it
That's a huge compliment for me
Thanks a lotsss

Well i love to give surprises so i always just try to make all surprised
ye i will
May b tomorrow or day after tomorrow as i was supposed to post yesterday only but i stuck with something
Awww u r so cute
Lv u :*
Tc


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ruppkotha



I'm sooo happpyyy that u like the part this much

yea i know me too like purple so much ki har jagah purple hi add karne ko mann karti hai
isiliye to purple orchid baad me purple car...😉

yeh bhi sahi hai...
dupatta to sirf armaan k face pe hi a jati hai
oh i over whelmed with ur complimentsss😃
yea true aur bas do din pehle hi to mile dono aur itna sara jhagda bhi kiya so itna jaldi vulna is not possible na

waise tweety to hai hi
Par isbar usne dialogue boli thi in that situation ek dam last me ek gana gayi thi wo bhi AR meet k baad

😆
Tujhe itna hasi ayi ki tu gir gayi...
Bechari...tch tch tch😆

I can imagine how happy u were
I m glad jo likha tujhe pasand aya
Waise main khud boht confused thi tujhe kaisa lagega
itna dar dar k likha na yeh scene sirf mujhe hi pata hai
teri comment padte waqt bhi i was bitting my lips ki pata nhi tujhe kaisa lagegi
But finally u like it i m happy
Yup another sherni😉

yea i know

Acha tu kaisa sochi thi
Jara mujhe bhi to batau
Main bhi toh janu akhir tu kaisa soch rhi thi
Pata hai maine woh smart hndsome wala part baad me edit kia when i post
Coz maine pehle kuch aur lkikha tha lekin jab post karne gayi to kuch aur idea aya to i wrote that

yea update to ready hai but kuch problem a gayi thi i hope kal ya parso may b
Abhi to i m writing next part ki next wali part
lv u
:*
Tc


Har jaga purple add karney ka to mera bhi man karta hai...
Chalo hum dono saath saath har cheez purple paint kar detay hai..hehe 😆

Tweety to merey one of fave characters mai say hai...
I want a tweety...har situation kai liye dialogue and song...
Life aik dum bollywood style ki ho jay gi..!!!!

Mai bechari..but mujhey to maza aya tha...
Us din ka laughing session bhi complete ho gya..!! 😉

Arreyy..itna confuse honey ki koi zarurat nahi...
I was already sure aap jo bhi likho gi mujhey buhattt pasand aye gaa...
And aya bhi...and don't bite ur nails 😆
But I am reallyy overwhelmed kai aap ney meray liye itnaa socha..!! 😳

Ummm..mai to socha tha...romantic sa mahol hoga...
Bg music bhi chal rha hoga...but yai sab to bas 5 minutes kai liye hua..!!
And there famous fight started...mai to bhul hi gayi thi AR fights kai liye famous hai 😆
But...jo bhi hua...it was Zabardast..!!!! <3

Okayy...waiting 4 the next update...
Wow...apney next ki next likhna start kar di..?!
Kya speed hai..!!
Luv u too...tc :*

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MadihaKSGian


Har jaga purple add karney ka to mera bhi man karta hai...
Chalo hum dono saath saath har cheez purple paint kar detay hai..hehe 😆

Tweety to merey one of fave characters mai say hai...
I want a tweety...har situation kai liye dialogue and song...
Life aik dum bollywood style ki ho jay gi..!!!!

Mai bechari..but mujhey to maza aya tha...
Us din ka laughing session bhi complete ho gya..!! 😉

Arreyy..itna confuse honey ki koi zarurat nahi...
I was already sure aap jo bhi likho gi mujhey buhattt pasand aye gaa...
And aya bhi...and don't bite ur nails 😆
But I am reallyy overwhelmed kai aap ney meray liye itnaa socha..!! 😳

Ummm..mai to socha tha...romantic sa mahol hoga...
Bg music bhi chal rha hoga...but yai sab to bas 5 minutes kai liye hua..!!
And there famous fight started...mai to bhul hi gayi thi AR fights kai liye famous hai 😆
But...jo bhi hua...it was Zabardast..!!!! <3

Okayy...waiting 4 the next update...
Wow...apney next ki next likhna start kar di..?!
Kya speed hai..!!
Luv u too...tc :*



Neki aur puch puch
Btw u know what
right now also i m wearing the dress its also purple
Mere room k bed sheet is also purple
So u can see how much i lv it...

yea i know isiliye toh shashank call it bolly bia,...😉

Are wah itna confidence aise kaise???????
Hey mai nails bite nhi karti

Acha ji tumne romance shomance sochi thi

waise ab tak maine kisika romance dikhai nhi to i m not sure about that ki age kabhi likh paungi ya nhi
pata nhi likhungi bhi toh kaisa hogi
Coz mujhse toh shayed nhi hogi yeh sab bate
i just hope age jake sabko disappoint na kardu

well next ki next to kabse atki padi hai
pata hai kyun
bas ek pic chahiye thi wo collect nhi ho rhio thi isiliye

lv u also
Tc
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ruppkotha



Neki aur puch puch
Btw u know what
right now also i m wearing the dress its also purple
Mere room k bed sheet is also purple
So u can see how much i lv it...

yea i know isiliye toh shashank call it bolly bia,...😉

Are wah itna confidence aise kaise???????
Hey mai nails bite nhi karti

Acha ji tumne romance shomance sochi thi

waise ab tak maine kisika romance dikhai nhi to i m not sure about that ki age kabhi likh paungi ya nhi
pata nhi likhungi bhi toh kaisa hogi
Coz mujhse toh shayed nhi hogi yeh sab bate
i just hope age jake sabko disappoint na kardu

well next ki next to kabse atki padi hai
pata hai kyun
bas ek pic chahiye thi wo collect nhi ho rhio thi isiliye

lv u also
Tc
:*


Hehe...itnaaa acha lagta hai purple..?!
Btw...bedsheet to meri bhi purple hai but with slight blue colour...so almost same pinch ho gya 😃
Shashank nai aik dum perfect naam select kia..!!!

Bas...confidence koot koot kar barha hai mujhmey...
Lekin itna bhi zyaada nahi kai over-confidence ho jau..aik dafa galti ki thi...
Exam mai over confidence dikha kay..!! 😛

Aap nai abhi tak romance nahi dikhaya to mainey bhi abhi tak nahi likha...
Even I am a little bit nervous...but no prob..aik dusrey ki help kar ley gai 😉

Well, I wish kai pic jaldi sai miley..
So humey part parhna naseeb ho..!!
Luv u veryy muchh..tc
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: megha_kajen

RESs

unress

part was super awsume...

loved it whole...
Ar milte hi fight shuru...
unhe dusra kaam ni hai kya...
haahhahaha😆
and anjie is riddhima's cousin..
wow...
pehle hi samajh jana chahaiye tha...
chal koi ni...

and bechara sid...sab usse kitna pareshaan karte hain...minie...
ne uske uppar coke gira diya...aur phir anjie ke mood swings ke vajah se uske feke hui chizon ka shikaar bechaara sid ho gaya...

i pitty on him...😉

anyways...chal ab next uppd8 jaldi diyo...

cua...
luv u loads...



Lv u Rj :*

Hai na dusra kaam par fight is more important for them na
Jab baat ego pe ajay notthing can be more important

Ab kya kare wo galat time pe galat baat bolegi to aisa hi hogi na😉😆

yea yea bas tere hi intezar kar rhi thi
but intezar karte karte so gayi to isme mera kya galti hai bol????
lv u
Tc
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: MadihaKSGian


Hehe...itnaaa acha lagta hai purple..?!
Btw...bedsheet to meri bhi purple hai but with slight blue colour...so almost same pinch ho gya 😃
Shashank nai aik dum perfect naam select kia..!!!

Bas...confidence koot koot kar barha hai mujhmey...
Lekin itna bhi zyaada nahi kai over-confidence ho jau..aik dafa galti ki thi...
Exam mai over confidence dikha kay..!! 😛

Aap nai abhi tak romance nahi dikhaya to mainey bhi abhi tak nahi likha...
Even I am a little bit nervous...but no prob..aik dusrey ki help kar ley gai 😉

Well, I wish kai pic jaldi sai miley..
So humey part parhna naseeb ho..!!
Luv u veryy muchh..tc



Aur nhi to kya

Wo to hai
waise pic to next prt ki next wali k liye chahiye thi
Btw don't worry part is on the wayyy
lv u
:*
tc

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Posted: 10 years ago
Here goes the next part...

Yeh dharavahik ek kalpanik katha ha, is kahani ke sabhi patra evam ghatnaye kalpanik hai, Aur Isska udeeshya kissi bhi dhaarmik bhawnaon ko thes pahunchana ya ritee rivajon ka uphaas karna nahin hain, yaadi inka kisi vyakti ya vastu se koi sambhad hota hai to usse matra ek sanyog kaha jaye ga.Iske liye authority ya ni ki writer ya ni ki main uske liye jimiddar nhi hu...Kripa karke sare galtiyaan maafi ki nazar se dekh lijiye...
Shukriya


Precap:

Jagti hui ahat
Adhuri mulakat
Purane rishtoon ki dor
Ek nayi kirdaar
Takdeer e bahar
Le chala kismat bhi dono ko ek dusre ki or
Kuch nayi sajish
Kya hogi buri ya karegi khushiyon ki barish...
Pad bhi lo ab
Phir chal jayegi pata sab...


Part 12

The bell ring...again & again
Riddhima & minnie look at each other than leaving a deep breath open the door.
Riddhima(loudly):Kya hai?
Person(while holding his ears):I'm sorry
Minnie(angrily):Ap to do ghante pehle pohchne wale the na??
Person:I was stuck..i'm really really really sorry Choti...(while making pouting face & holding ears)
Minnie & riddhima was standing at the door blocking the way to go inside while looking different side as if they didn't hear anything..
Person(turning towards minnie bending at her while whispering at her ear): Choti tu maan ja na plz plz plz...
Minnie(Pushing the person away):Nhi manti kya karogi??
Person(while taking out two big bar of dairy milk silk): To phir yeh to main laila aur saran ko de deti hoon...
Minnie(before the person could make any move take the chocolates & with attitude said):Thik hai thik hai chalo is bar k liye chod diya...
Here riddhima who till now was watching minnie & this person's action shocked watching minnie agreed so easily.
Riddhima (making her face like O'):Hawww minnie tu itni jaldi party badal di...
Minnie (while looking at the chocolate bars & then at riddhima then hiding it behind her):Nhi nhi maine bilkul maaf nhi kia(then whispering to the person)Maine maaf kardiya tension not
Riddhima (who notice this): I heard that..huh..(Then stomping her leg at floor go inside while the person run behind her)I hate both of u...
Person (while running to match with her speed & holding ear):Sun na chutki plz na yaar
Riddhima (huffing puffing):I'm not chutki...Don't u dare call me that(stopping & pointing a finger towards her)
Person (looking that situation is getting worse): ok fine Riddhima sun na yaar raste me traffic..
Riddhima (cutting her in between): Get some reasonable coz 1st...har bar apka yehi hoti hai...aur aj to apne puja bhi miss kardi..aur apne mujhe phirse chutki bulaya aur toh u don't even sorry...
All the other family members were looking at the doe while Padma shaking her head comes forward looking at the guy who was wearing a Capri color shirt with Deep Space Sparkle color jacket with dark blue denims.& called him:Abhi..
The person turn & while touching her feet then hugging her said: Mumma
Well guys this person is none other than Abhimanyu but here his surname is Gupta

Little sadu type but still good
Want everything to be perfect
In profession he is a doctor
Loves his family & specially his sisters a lot...
He is Riddhima & Minnie's elder brother.
He called minnie as choti & riddhima as chutki..
Which irritate riddhima the more
& he just love to irritate riddhima more
He is a very protective brother & pamper them a lot...
Uski jaan basti hai apni behno me...
& about his sisters they are also very protective about him
How...?well let me tell u all about his love life u all will definitely know how much possessive his sisters are..
Jab bhi yeh banda kisiki sath relation me jati hai yeh dono behne ake agle hi din break-up karwa deti
Coz unko is ladkiyon pe bharosa hi nhi hai na...
They know their brother is handsome so always be a protective shield for him
& he do the same ;)
For him in my style kahu to...
Koi Naa Jaane Kittho Aaye Hai Tu
Sab De Dilon Vich Ho Gayi Kukdakoo
Enna Sona, Enna Cool,
Munda Enna Wonderful
Ennu Vekhe Je Kudiya Toh Kehndi
O My God O My God O My God
Haan Munda Sab Mein Sab Ton Best
Munda Better than the Rest
Ennu Vekhe Ke Munde Toh Kehnde
O My God
O Seena 6 Biscut Da
O Munda 6 Foot Da
O Dheere Dheere Karda Dhamaal Sa
O Munda Kukkad Kamaal Da
O Kudiya Te Ho Jaayegi Fact
O Di Chaal Da, Kukkad Kamaal Da
O Munda Kukkad Kamaal Da
O Munda Kukkad Kamaal Da
O Bando Mein Banda Perfect Bemisaal Sa
Kukkad Kamaal Da
More about him story k sath sath pata chal jayegi...
Now back to story...
He meet everyone while all greet him happily. Actually he was gone for a medical conference for 5 days which is out of the city but hearing about his sisters arrival he patch up everything & finish it in 3days to come back, he was supposed to attend the puja also but he got late..
Actually he got late for traffic & for irritating riddhima more he didn't even said sorry to her & upar se chutki bhi bulaya when she was already angry...
So now riddhima is angry... let's see kaise manate hai yeh apne behen ko...
Suddenly riddhima's call ring she going away from others receive it and it ws sid,he told her he can't find anji anywhere..
Riddhima (getting worried & angry on him):kya matlab nhi mil rahi hai tune unko chod ke gayi hi kyun maine tujhe unhe chodke jane ko boli thi kya
Other end (whining): meri kya galti hai wo hi to mujhe bheja to main kya karu
Riddhima (angrily): tujhe to main baad me dekhti hoon(Worriedly)pehle main dekh to lu wo kaha hai (warning him)aur jab tak wo mil na jay u dare to go anywhere stay there only
She started to call her
Scene faded at her tensed face
At car

Anji is crying loudly while armaan passing tissue box while driving with one hand anji took it and keeping it no her lap again continue her task..
Armaan (looking at her who was continuously crying from last 20mins): kya hua anji jab se mile ho rote hi ja rhi ho at least say tooo kya hua hai????
Anji (While taking out tissue from box): Kuch nhi *sniff**sniff*
Armaan (patiently as their car is now stuck on traffic): agar kuch nhi hai to y r u crying????
Anji (in between crying): kyun ki *sniff**sniff* kyun ki atul na *sniff**sniff* mujhe na *sniff**sniff* ab pyar hi nhi karti *sniff**sniff* usne 1hour k bolke gaye *sniff**sniff* aur 3hour tak no contract*sniff**sniff*..
Armaan: not again (mumbling to himself while with one hand stretching at her forehead then keeping a fake smile turn towards anji & with sweet coated voice) aisa kuch nhi hai anji champ ek important meeting attend kar rhi hai isiliye wo call nhi kr payi, now stop crying yaar plz..baby par bura asar pad jayegi.
Anji(hearing him started to cry more loudly):see*sniff**sniff* tumhe bhi bas *sniff**sniff* baby ka hi khayal hai *sniff**sniff* kisi ko to meri parwa *sniff**sniff* hi nhi hai.. *sniff**sniff*
Armaan (trying to making her understand): anji u know aisa nhi hai..
But anji still continue her crying. While her phone ring. Armaan ask her to receive. She look at the caller and its riddhima & she received..
Anji (while sniffing): Hello
Other end (totally worried): Di ap kaha gayeb ho gayi sid kabse apko dhund rhi hai ap thik to ho na????
Anji (still sniffing in between):Ha*sniff**sniff* main agayi ammy k sath *sniff**sniff* tu use bol de *sniff**sniff* waha se chala jay..
Other end (worriedly): par di ap bina bataye kyun agaye????
Anji (sniffing in between):wo*sniff**sniff*ammy agaya tha*sniff**sniff*to maine uski wait nhi ki.. *sniff**sniff*
Other end (suddenly realizing something): di ap ro rhi ho????
Anji (sniffing): nhi*sniff**sniff* main nhi *sniff**sniff* ro rhi hoon.. *sniff**sniff*
Other end (more worried): di u know ap mujhse jhut nhi bol sakte bolo na kya hua ap thik to ho na????
Anji (still sniffing): yea*sniff**sniff*I'm f9*sniff**sniff*
Other end (taking sigh of relief): acha phir bolo y r u crying????
Anji (still crying): I'm*sniff**sniff* not *sniff**sniff*crying.. *sniff**sniff*
Other end (with faking anger): Di jhut mat bolo..i know u r crying i can hear that
Anji (with pout): acha*sniff**sniff* thik hai *sniff**sniff*ro rhi hoon, happy???? *sniff**sniff*
Other end (smiling at her voice as she know now she must be making face):ap ro rhi ho how can i be happy????Bolo kya hua hai????
Anji (with small voice): nhi *sniff**sniff*kuch nhi *sniff**sniff*hua..
Other end (with scolding voice): di jhut mat bolo,batao mujhe kya hua????
Anji (slowly in between sniff): bas *sniff**sniff*wo atul ne *sniff**sniff*ab tak na *sniff**sniff*call receive nhi ki *sniff**sniff*..wo *sniff**sniff*mujhe ab *sniff**sniff*pehle jaisa pyar *sniff**sniff*hi nhi karta.. *sniff**sniff*
Other end (making her understand): Di u know DR busy hogi tabhi call nhi kia hoga ap hi to bol rahe thi na he loves u the most aur apke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai right????
Anji (while little voice): hmm.. *sniff**sniff*
Other end (again making her understand): Di dekho apko pata hai na wo kitna bada business sambhalti hai to ho jati hai na kabhi kabhi..aur yeh baat apne hi to batai thi mujhe remember..and u also love him more when he took responsibilities haina????
Anji (again slowly): hmm (by now stop crying)
Other end (trying to make her smile): Di ab don't be sad mujhe meri di k muh me badi si smile dekhni hai chalo is motiyoon ko mat bahao aur u know i don't like tears in my di's eyes..chalo jaldi wipe it up..
Anji:hmm(while wiping her tears& armaan was watching her in shock thinking yeh kya ho rhi hai coz jab bhi anji start to cry at least 2-3hours to kisi k baat nhi manti aur bas continue crying & here kisi k ek call se she end her crying session in just only in 20min yeh to miracle ho gayi)
Other end (knowing she might be wiped her face till now): Chalo u wipe ur face na ab give me a big smile aur aise hi muskurate raho taki jab hum dubara mile apki chehre me wo khilkhilati muskurahat ho is gandi si asu nhi..(While making face saying the word gandi)
Anji (smiling making armaan more shock):thik hai par pakka tu ayegi na mujhse milne phir se????
Other end (Smilingly): off course di u know ab mere pass boht time hai to I'll obviously meet u and wo bhi boht jaldi...
Anji (giggling like teenagers making armaan more & more shock):sachi...
Other end (giggling like kids):muchi..chalo ab ap apna purse open karo and see waha ek while box hai check it ok
Anji (opening it):isme kya hai???
Other end:are maine bol diya to kya fayda u check the packet and waise main na apko ek important baat batana to vul hi gayi..
Like this they keep on talking on phone and here armaan was just stealing glance at anji watching her smiling taking a sigh of relief that at least she stop crying but still curious whom she is talking with as she was laughing and talking as if kumv k mele me bichde hue behne milgayi..
After almost 30min finally anji hang up and smile towards armaan while taking out chocolate box form the white packet

Armaan (watching it): anji yeh chocolate tumhe kisne di,u know ur sugar is high..(While taking the chocolate box form her)
Anji:ammy give it back to me.yeh sugar free chocolates hai meri behen ne khud laye hai mere liye paris se..(Irritatingly)
Armaan (giving back still frowning then remembering something): waise ek baat batao tum waha mall me akeli kya kar rhi thi????tumne to bola tha tumhari cousin tha sath me lekin jab main gaya to waha to koi bhi nhi tha..
Anji(while eating chocolates):Are nhi ammy wo log aye the but badi mumma ki call agayi thi to wo log wapas chale gaye lekin uske frnd ko chod k gaye the mere sath taki main akeli na rahu..
Armaan (talking with her while starting the car engine as ab tak to traffic me hi beithe the dono): Par mujhe to waha koi nhi dikha..
Anji:wo main hi use bheji thi kuch ice-cream lane but tum agaye to mujhe ghar ana tha to maine bina inform kie hi tumhare sath chali ayi..
Armaan(curiously) :Waise yeh tumhari konsi cousin hai jo aya hai tumhari shadi me nhi tha kya?
Anji(Still engrossed in eating chocolates): Aya nhi,ayi hai means dono hi ladki hai, Yeh mere boht hi pyare do behn hai,tumhe yaad hai main bolti thi meri ek behen hai jisne papa ko raji karwai thi jab tumhare kehne k baad bhi papa nhi man rhi thi tab...yeh bohi hai...they were out of country that time bcoz wo choti wali cousin ki kidney problem hui thi to wo log sab abroad me the still ridz ne papa ko bas phone pe baat karke hi raji karwa li thi...tum usse nhi mile kyun ki wo bas do din pehle hi india aya hai she didn't even meet atul but atul se to phir bhi phone pe ek bar baat hogayi thi uske sath aur pata hai wo gappu se bhi mil chuke hai skype pe..aur phir wo apna internship leke itni busy hogayi thi wo jayada social net pe bhi online nhi rehti hai uske friends se mujhe bas uski updates milti thi unlogo ka ek group hai 5 log main sabse to nhi mili bas 2logo se baat hui hai meri baki ka sirf naam suna hai..tum shayed ek ko jante ho humare hi company mee hai as chef
Armaan(looking at road):Koan kya naam hai???
Anji(still engrossed in chocolate):Sid naam hai uska humare company pe as head chef k job me hai
Armaan: Surname bolo anji there are 3 sid in office unme se do hai side k hai siddhi shah aur ek hai siddhant mody which one
Anji(getting confussed):Ab mujhe itna thodi hi pata hai..Mujhe bas uska naam sid pata hai isse jayada mujhe nhi malum ridz ne jab milwaya tha tab sirf sid hi boli thi ab isse jayada mujhe kya pata...
Armaan(laughing): tum bhi na anji
Anji(looking at him): what main bhi na ammy acha wo chodo...main ridz k bare me bol rhi thi na to suno..Aur itne din baad wo india wapas ayi hai aur aj mujhe milne aya to main na pehle gussa thi par usne mujhe manaya boht der se...Ridz is just such a sweet heart
Armaan(Hearing all this getting curious): Waise Ridz cool name, Single hai ya avaiable??
Anji(stop eating & looking at him): Oye ammy meri behen pe line marne k bare me na sochna bhi maat...
Armaan(getting in their house gate & stopping the car while taking his both hand like peace) :Peace young lady nhi sochti tumhari behen k bare me waise bhi armaan malik ladkiyoon k bare me nhi sochte lkadkiyaaan armaan mallik k bare me sochte hai u know... 😉
Anji (getting out from car): Good for u...Kyun ki usse jitna dur rahogi tumhare liye hi better hogi...
Armaan (giving the car key to driver for park it & going behind her): Kyun Tumhari behen boht darwni hai kya...Kahi vampire toh nhi hai na ki sari khoon choos le..
Anji (walking inside & sit on sofa): Shut up ammy, she is the most beautiful girl anyone could fall in love with her Tum jab milogi to jaan jaogi...
Armaan(curiously): Acha aisa hai to y r u saying its good for me to stay away..
Anji(while sipping on juice which one of servant give to her): Uske sath humesha body guards jo rehte hai...
Armaan(sitting with her on opposite sofa): Oh really aisa kyun tumhari behen ko akeli chalna nhi ati...Ya phir choti bachi hai...Ya use apni body guard se hi pyar hai like the film bodyguard (then started singing & doing that bodyguard me muscle wala step which salman did on this song's starting) Aao ji, baou ji dil se dil milao ji aa gaya hai dekho bodyguard
Anji(laughing at his antics): Are tu bhi na ammy yeh body guard wo wali muscle wali bodyguard nhi hai..
Armaan(surprised): Acha toh phir kaise body guard hai???
Anji: yeh hai mere bade papa aur Moddy urf ridz ka bada bhai & uski choti behen...
Armaan(hearing it raised one brow): Yeh kaise bodyguard hai
Anji:yeh boht hi khatarnak bodyguards hai...once u meet them u got to know about them pata hai they are very protective about her & wo bhi unka boht care karte hai..
Like that anji keep praising about ridz making armaan more desperate to meet her.
Armaan (thinking something): Is it the same one with whom u r talking to phone in car
Anji(while munching more chocolates) : Yea kyun?
Armaan: Tab to isse milna hi padegi akhir dekhu to who have such power over anji to stop her cry in just 5 min talk (mumbling to himself while anji shake him looking as if what) Nothing just like that to show her pic at least jab tak hum mil na le...
Anji (while taking out her mobile to search for today's selfie's she got with them then watching armaan curiously looking at her but suddenly thinking something said): Are devar ji itni jaldi bhi k ya hai, Dekh lena aur mil bhi lena ek dam face to face..
Armaan (Disappointedly): Thik hai bhabi ji agar apki yehi aggyea ho to yehi sahi...
Then both laugh at their last typical dewar-bhabi calling thing & retired to their room,
Here at rangin ashiyaana

After the call end riddhima call sid & ask her to reach rangin ashiyana & watching everyone laughing & abhi also enjoying she turn to go towards somewhere then come back after a while..
After coming back she saw sid is also there,she go there & scold sid for his deed which actually was not his fault as anji send him to outside..
In all this while riddhima didn't talk with abhi not even single bit..
Which abhi notice but think to do something later after her anger reduce a little..& let irritate her some more time...
Snakes were served when riddhima was busy thinking something let's see kya soch rhi hai yeh...
Riddhima(in mind):Yeh itn maja kar raha hai yahape beith k abhi tak mujhe sorry tak nhi bola...(then smirking evilly) But koi gal nhi riddhima gupta ko irritate karne ka fal to yeh jarur bhukte ga...

In mean while Laila bring tea which fall on sid's lap & sid got up abhi said he want to change so he took sid with him..they both moved towards abhi's room which was in 1st floor near riddhima's room.All this riddhima didn't notice bcoz she was too much engrossed in her thoughts. But when she realized this she asked about them & in few minutes she excused herself also to go behind them...

After a while there was a sound of splash & a huge thing fall & someone screamed...
All headed towards the voice & left shocked watching the scenario before them...
All saw Sid was on the floor of abhi's room & some marble was laying under his leg & he was fully drenched in cold water totally shivering badly..
Abhi who was stopped a while ago to make a call was shocked to see sid's condition
While riddhima trying hard to stop her laugh looking here & there as if she don't seen anything
Minnie is already laughing,nani & shashank has a smirk on their face as they guessed already whose prank is this & for whom..
Only Padma go near him while making him stand up & quickly asking laila to clean the place she took a towel & started to dry his head while he is shivering & giving some worm cloth of abhi make him agree to change it while he is having problem to walk because of the fall...

Actually hua yun riddhima put one ice bucket in such a way at connected with abhi's room door that whenever anyone open the door the bucket will fall on their head...& kuch marbel on floor so they slip..All know who could have done it as only riddhima was missing for a while baki sab to ek sath hi thi to when Sid was out of sight all turned towards riddhima while riddhima hide behind shashank..

Padma (angrily): Riddhima yeh tumne kia na?
Riddhima nodded her head a little while making shashank shield of her.
Shashank (defending her): Padma jane do na bachi hai...
Padma (glaring at her): Apko yeh bachi lagti hai umar dekhi hai apne iski itni badi hogayi hai but bachon wali harkaten klarte rehte hai..kal bhi sid ki upar prank khela aur aj bhi usi...
Riddhima(instantly cutting her in between): yeh uske liye nhi tha(then lowering her voice)Main kya karu agar wo galat time pe galat jagah all time pohch jati hai to...
Abhi(from behind them): to phir yeh prank kya mere liye tha?
Riddhima didn't said anything to him & all got the answer from her silence
Abhi apologized for making her irritated a lots & give some ice-cream which he actually was bring for her earlier before going to conference was kept on fridge & riddhima happily took it & say sorry too.

After a while when all thing sorted out Sid comes out & while he got to know about everything he just makes face & while riddhima holding his both ears said sorry with which make everyone laugh & Sid removed her hand form his ear then riddhima holding her own ear said sorry & hearing ridz's cute sorry he melted also.

After that they all were sitting on dinning for food...But suddenly ridz got a call & hearing the person other side She just jump & all look at her..She told them about their other friend's arrival while Sid made a sulking face hearing the person's name...
Next day
Hearing about the person's arrival Rahul & Sid also comes for breakfast then they will head back to office actually Rahul come in his wish & sid comes in orther's wish as use us insaan se bilkul nhi milna thi but Rahul dragged him here.While they were waiting for the person suddenly door bel ring Rahul , Riddhima & Minnie run towards door but Sid just only seat in the dinning...
They open the door & saw the person standing there..
They all just hug the person instantly...
That's it for today
I hope u guys like it
Thank's for giving ur precious time to read it
Milte hai kuch dino baad
Tab tak
Khuda hafiz
Lv u all
tc
Rupkotha
Edited by Ruppkotha - 10 years ago
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Hiyyaaa Baby Girl..
I m back with the comment huhahahah hehehe...
About the part kya kahun... It was mast as usual...
Enjoy every bit of part...
Itne mein comment tohdi na pura ho sakta hai right hehehe...
chalo aage badte hai saat saat ;)

I was wondering yeh koan hai jo itna der tak bell baja rahi hai...
Lolz, Ridz and Minnie got irritate and open the door...
Baapre , Ridz toh hamesha jhansi ki rani avtar mein hote hai eheheh...
As I read na, mujhe laga yeh Abhi ho sakte hai...
As Abhi ki entry nehi huva hai aur yeh toh ladka hai toh uska naam hi mere dhimag mein aa rahi hai...

Dekhte hai meri guess sahi ho ti ya nehi... Pichli part mein kuch kaha nehi kyunki mujhe toh yeh nehi pata yeh ladka hai ya ladki hehehe...Ladka huva toh Abhi hi ho sakte hai...
oh toh pehle se hi dono wait kar rahi ti iske liyeh...
hahahah Minnie ne Chocolate dekhte hi apna gussa bhula diya aur maaf kardiya...
choti naam sunke mujhe kissi ki yaad aagayi... :/
Aur Chutki hehehe, nice nickname...
Minnie ne toh rishwat lekar maaf kardiya... Lekin lagta hai yeh jo bhi hai usko Ridz koh mana ne mein mehnat karna padega hehehe...

Yeyyy yeyyy Meri guess sahi hogayiii hahahhaa...
Yeh toh sach main Abhimaniyu nikla...
Oh ho, toh yeh Ridz and Minnie ki bada bhai hai, nice nice...
Seems like this is gonna be interest hahahaha...

Accha issiliyeh Riddhima gussa hai apne bhai se kyunki woh late hogaya..
Lekin bechara Abhi bhi kya kar sakte hai jab traffic beech mein aagaya toh hahaha...
Abhi was purposly irritating Riddhima by teasing with that name and not saying sorry hehehe...
Seems like yeh bhai behen ke jodi bohot mast rishta nibane wala hai aur bohot masti karenge..

Oh ho, ab yeh Anjali kaha gayi... Poor Sid hamesha phas jaate hai in Gupta ladies ke beech...
bechare koh baat baat pe daat padte hai hehehe...

Yeh lo, Anjali toh Armaan ke saat hai hehehe...
lekin yeh Anjali koh kya huva... Pakka Atul ne call nehi ki aur waapas nehi aaya issiliyeh yeh ro rahi hai...
Poor Armaan, pas gaya is rotuli Anjai ke saat... Baat baat pe roti kyun hai yeh... Not really like the Anjali hehehe...
Hahaha, I was right... Yeh toh issiliyeh ro rahi hai thinking Atul and no one else love her...
Bas sabko baby ki fikar hai hehehe and Armaan expression was worth...

Ridz itni pareshan hai aur yeh Anjali madam gayab hogyi ti apni devar ji ke saat Sid koh chodke hahaha...
Poor Sid, get scold by Ridz hehehe...
Love Ridz and Anjali conversation, how easily Riddhima calm down her and make her understand...
Ridz successfully make Anjali stop crying and smile..
Hahaha yeh toh aisa huva, Ridz rock and Armaan shock hahaha...
Jis ladki itni der se ro rahiti , Ridz ne itni jaldi chup karaya...
Its call Ridz power na hahaha... mast hai...

Ohhh, seeing this girl affect on Anjali, Armaan is thinking to meet her...
Waise usse kya bata woh uska Basket hai ehehehe...
Lolz, aur Anjali warn him before Armaan could even think of flirting with her sister...
Love Anjali and Armaan bonding of bhabhi devar... :)

Back to Rangin Ashiyana...
Hahha, Ridz is thinking why Abhi is not saying sorry to her...
Something is cooking in Ridz mind hahaha... jo hoga bilkul accha nehi hoga I can say...
Lolz, I was so right hahahaha...
I was laughing so much u know reading Sid condition...
Poor soul always get trap in Ridz pranks ahahaha...
sabko pata chala woh Ridz ne kya aur Shashank aage aaya apne princess koh bachane uske mom se hehehe...
Hahaha sahi kaha Ridz ne, Sid galat time pe galat jhaga pochte toh woh kya karte...
Lolz, Abhi come to know it was mean to be for him hahahaa...

thank god they end the war for the day... I have a feeling more pranks are on the way as the stories goes seeing how much naughty Ridz is...
Lolz, Ridz hold Sid ears and sorry to him hahhaa... That was so funny...
Lekin end mein she hold her ears and said sorry, hehhee...

Ab phirse new character coming in the coming part ...
By god tum toh mujhse accha suspense rakh rahi ho... Wondrr ab koan aane wale hai...
Maybe Sister lovely is coming back hahahah... lekin woh itni jaldi nehi aayenge I know...
Ridz ke friend hai toh hmmm... Lets see koan ho sakte hai...

Hogayi comment complete hehehe...
So in simple, its awesome blossom part...
Full of Masti and I just love the bonding each character share with each other...
Continue super soon...
Muwaahhh :*
Love u infinity and eternity...
Take care <3
Edited by RihooHaws - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
ress
unresss...

part was super awsume aishhuu...
loved it mahn... 😃

u know... mujhe somewhere idea tha...ke yeah abhimanyu hoga...
cozzz almost San DMG characters toh is me aa chuke hain...
bas Nikki ki kami hai... 😉

bechaara sid...
I really pitty on him... 😆
bechaare ki koi galati ni hoti... tab bhi... sabse daant khaata hai... and pranks ka nishana banta hai... splly riddhima ke...
hahahahaha [Rolf]

and... and...and...
armaan surprised ke kisi ne Anji ko within 10-15 minutes me chup
Kara diya... 😉 😃

hhmmm...and curious to meet her...
nice... ;)

and phirse ek aur entry...
bas kar darling...
kitni entries karayegi...
anyways part was super awsume... fabulous...
upd8 soon...
bye...
cuaa..
muahhh :* ❤️
Edited by megha_kajen - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey dear

First of all, I am really sorry for taking much time to comment
But I am not getting time at all 😕

Anyways, I loved the 2 last parts
(I forgot if I commented on the last part)

So Abhi is Ridz and Minnie's elder bro and liked the intro for him
He likes to irritate Ridz by calling her chutki 😆

Anjy and Armaan interaction was really nice

and poor Sid he always becomes
the prey of Riddhima's pranks😆🤣

Continue soon dear
Eagerly waiting for next part
and will also try to comment sooner😉

Sorry once again for the late comment.


Thanks for the PM

Take Care
Luv u 🤗


Edited by Jess2014 - 10 years ago

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