Karna FF-Time Travelling in Mahabharata !!! (Completed) - Page 74

Originally posted by: roshanay

Nice chapter dear... waiting for d next! Hope u give us some karn swarna moments... and as far as swarna belongs to future part... I disagree ;)! I dont think just because she was born in future she is supposed to belong there! No! She belongs where her heart belongs to and I think thats with karn! She found a home and happiness in him which she never did in her own tym and also she found a family which she nevver had even when she did have it!! Also her education doesnt make her one from the future! It just gives her an unique identity! But this is my opinion! Anyways hope u continue sooon

Originally posted by: sania_58

Chapter 16, part 2 comment,

After a long time I am finally back with my comment.😊
Hope U miss me.😆
Aww Madhu I dearly missed u here 😳
Actually busy with some personal work & in IF, in Manmarziyan Forums & also with my fictions.
ohh, Its difficult to manage fictions, Hats Off to U for handling both with perfection👏👏👏
Hhmm I observed that...infact I m yet to read ur FF Checkmate. I have bookmarked it & will start to read soon 😛
Writing two...no now I have started my 3rd one...God save me...How will I manage...I m already doing a bad job of updating my stories superlate.

Interesting update.👏
Loved Swarnali & the children part.
& the witty Swarnali.
I loved writing this part_Swarna with the Karn's little chubby kids 😳

& Bheem, usse main kya kahu???
Bheem... yeah I often wonder whether his resentment towards Karna is more after Karna sided with Dury or just becoz he beileived that a sutaputra is not more equal or shoukd claim to one like his brother Arjun

My Arya did it on my behalf.😳
Arya hhmmm 😳

Loved the Karna-Arjun & Swarnali Madhav face off👏
I still remember I had to whack my brains for days... to write these face-off esp Swarna & Madhav one
I loved the descriptions.
Overall, Superb part.👍🏼

Originally posted by: sania_58

Chapter 17, part 3

awesome, awesome, awesome.👏
Superb update Hemu.👏
Simply superb
🤗

Loved Swarnali & Draupadi's convo.👍🏼
U managed well.
This was a tricky part to write... I wanted a mildly scathing yet a balanced convo betn them 😊
Loved Karna Swarnali's private moment.I always love this 2 together.❤️😳
Karn was naughty here... isn't he 😉 😳
Loved the description of Indraprastha.👏
ohh, its magical.
I always wondered the maya sabha hall to be one of the optical splendour... & the description was necessary since Swarna's scientist eyes would definitely observe & study this optical maginificance
Wonderful update Hemu.
Great Going.👍🏼

Btw, Kunti maa, arghh😕
What about Kunti ma... tight lipped as ever 😡

Originally posted by: sania_58

Chapter-18

another amazing update Hemu.👏
Beautifully described.⭐️
The problem of polygamy.One wife with children, but another...😭😭😭
ohh, I feel sad for Swarnali.😭
I wanted to explore the issue of polygamy in my story & os one of the reason I have included Vrishali in my story. And yes the issue of being childless yet u r a mother to the children from ur husband & his first wife. What emotional transition would have Swarna go thru? That made me write this chapter.

But loved Karna Swarnali scene.😳😳😳
They are perfect couple, because they are best buddy.👍🏼
They understand each other perfectly 😳

I dont want Swarnali to go back to Kaliyug.
I want her with Karna only.😳😳😳
Hhmm future chapters will tell

superb part.👏
simply mindblowing.Great Going. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: sania_58

Chapter 19- Part 1

Thrilling update😊
Loved Swarnali & Shoan's convo.😊
the whole part is beautiful.
but the best thing is Karna's realization.Its simply brillaint & rocking👏
Karn was going thru mixed emotions...he was elated & yet deep down he knew he & his friends somewhere in the midst has crossed the limit

Swarnali Pregnant???
I never mentioned that she is preggy 😲
Well, will find in next chapter.

Nice Update

Originally posted by: sania_58

Chapter 20, part 2

Woww, woww, woww👏
this three wow for ur imagination.👏
You changed the epic.
I was a bit worried how my readers would have respond to this massive twist in the epic but I always intended this twist while starting this FF

But so brillaintly, My God.You are a brillaint writer Hemu.👏⭐️👍🏼
Loved each lines, every descriptions.
simply superb.👏👏👏
Thank u Madhu 😃

Swarnali revealed Karna's birth secret.😲
I didn't expected this.
I know nobody expected this 😉 But Swarna did know the truth from the beginning she was just luking for a right moment but she never got one until it was too late. i mean half the damage is still done...but yet she hoped she could salvage something by revealing the truth... & did not one Drau to go thru VH

Loved this part.😃
Wonderful, mindblowing, FATAFATI.👏👏👏
Great episode.👍🏼

Originally posted by: sania_58

Finally the recent chapter comment,
ohh, I catch up with your updates.

Wonderful update.
but Kunti, ohh I hate her so much.I always hate her, in your fic, I hate her the most.
The most selfish & manipulative lady.
A mother responsible for her son's death.Chalo, she never accepted.
But sach to nahin badal jayega.
I too hate her... calculative and shrewd she is instrumental in bringing her firstborn's downfall 😡
In Star- Bharat, when Radha maa compared Kunti with a crocodile, I rejoiced the moment.
Arrey me too...we think alike when it comes to Karn 😳 & Kunti 😡 but I hated when ⭐️ Bharat made my Karna a crying Puppy 😡

Another big wowww for this chapter also.
Loved the part.
U rocked Hemu.
Awesome, superb mindblowing update.
Great Going.
Thank u dear 😳
waiting for the next.
Will update soon

Waiting for your next story also.
Aah I have already started one. Even u have posted ur comment there. And u know the story again features our dear Aham

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31

Oh my God!!! So ppl came here to find out swarna.and swarna revealed the truth..kunthi maa!! Woahhh...whattta stubborn lady..I know u will just remain mum .. K ! I loved the last part of convo BTW karn and angarani..loved this karn so much..so it seems we r travelling to the end??