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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .Sanskruti

All the elders in MB were much concerned with results than reasons🤢😕!! **Sighhh*** Had it been vice versa ***Sighh***


Yeah... thay are more concerned who will win the royal crown rather than who is acting so and what is the reason behind it. All concerned and blinded with their own interest of who will ultimately sit in the coveted throne
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: love.piyali

Amazing yaar...I loved it...I just hate Kunti...even when I was watching Mahabharat I used to hate her because she was more concerned about her dignity than her own child...I always think thay what kind of mother is she! Even in Kaliyug mothers are more considerate than her then how could she be so inconsiderate, manipulative and cruel! All the women folk in Mahabharata are problematic...even though I'm a woman and I hate to admit this but Mahabharata is a result of mistakes of women in the epic! Be it Satyavati, Kunti, Draupadi, Gandhari or anybody else! It was our kind that led to this war and not a brothers fued!



Thanks for the comments Piyali 😳
Well Kunti's character brought out the black shade of a character of a mother who is always regarded as or assumed as next to god to a child. But Kunti's selfishness and shrewdness dismissed the assumption. I feel from human psychology point of view, her character is another interesting one to study after Karna, Bheeshma & Drau.
Coming to who is responsible for waging the war between the two sets of cousins, its different opinion for everybody just like that they have different POV for Karna. I feel that women & men in MB are equally responsible for the apocalypse at the end of that era.

Thanks again for reading my story I will PM u my next update 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: angrani

I read all the three chapters i left ...

I am deeply saddened by swarnali's condition ...
But she loved sons of vrishali ...

Wow J u r back. I missed u in IF 🤗
Yeah...Swarnali had to go thru the emotional turmoil for not being a mother. But she showered her love to KaVru's sons since she was there when they were born, all her motherly feelings came within her tending and caring them along with Vru. A part inside her telling her that she wants to be a far better mother to them than her own mother who had no place for her daughter 😔


But blood is blood then
I could not believe ... Kunti is portrayed very wretched she didn't accept him

Kunti did not speak up but her actions and body language said otherwise. I felt Kunti would not have easily come over her guilt of abandoning her son & accept him so easily in public. In the epic she did not even after Karna's death but after Krishna's insistence that she she revealed her well guarded secret. She did not even bow down and even let her son Arjun to commit fratricide. So showing TT Kunti blurting out the truth overcome with guilt and pressure is not what I believe kUnti's charcater is.

Yes as far as loyalties are concerned
Whether Kunti spoke the words or not the seed of shifting loyalties was already planted and that's what Shakuni later questioned Karna about his loyalty towards Dury. It was obvious and Karna stood on the threshold of the either side.

Now swarna will find a way ...
Well I cant tell u that now...I will update in the next chapters 😳

But i am glad karn knows his origin but just saying swarna belongs to future ...
I know they will part their ways
Well it has to end where it was started...but where will Swarna finally be... u hav to wait for the upcoming chapters 😉


Thanks for the sweet comments J 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice chapter dear... waiting for d next! Hope u give us some karn swarna moments... and as far as swarna belongs to future part... I disagree ;)! I dont think just because she was born in future she is supposed to belong there! No! She belongs where her heart belongs to and I think thats with karn! She found a home and happiness in him which she never did in her own tym and also she found a family which she nevver had even when she did have it!! Also her education doesnt make her one from the future! It just gives her an unique identity! But this is my opinion! Anyways hope u continue sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 16, part 2 comment,

After a long time I am finally back with my comment.😊
Hope U miss me.😆
Actually busy with some personal work & in IF, in Manmarziyan Forums & also with my fictions.
ohh, Its difficult to manage fictions, Hats Off to U for handling both with perfection👏👏👏

Interesting update.👏
Loved Swarnali & the children part.
& the witty Swarnali.
& Bheem, usse main kya kahu???
My Arya did it on my behalf.😳
Loved the Karna-Arjun & Swarnali Madhav face off👏
I loved the descriptions.
Overall, Superb part.👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 17, part 3

awesome, awesome, awesome.👏👏👏👏👏
Superb update Hemu.👏👏👏👏
Simply superb
Loved Swarnali & Draupadi's convo.👍🏼
U managed well.
Loved Karna Swarnali's private moment.I always love this 2 together.❤️😳
Loved the description of Indraprastha.👏
ohh, its magical.
Wonderful update Hemu.
Great Going.👏👏👏👍🏼

Btw, Kunti maa, arghh😕😕😕😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter-18

another amazing update Hemu.👏👏👏👏
Beautifully described.⭐️
The problem of polygamy.One wife with children, but another...😭😭😭
ohh, I feel sad for Swarnali.😭😭😭😭
But loved Karna Swarnali scene.😳😳😳
They are perfect couple, because they are best buddy.👍🏼
I dont want Swarnali to go back to Kaliyug.
I want her with Karna only.😳😳😳

superb part.👏
simply mindblowing.Great Going. 👍🏼
Edited by sania_58 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 19- Part 1

Thrilling update😊
Loved Swarnali & Shoan's convo.😊
the whole part is beautiful.
but the best thing is Karna's realization.Its simply brillaint & rocking👏👏👏👏👏👏
Swarnali Pregnant???
Well, will find in next chapter.

Nice Update
Edited by sania_58 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 20, part 2

Woww, woww, woww👏👏👏👏
this three wow for ur imagination.👏
You changed the epic.
But so brillaintly, My God.You are a brillaint writer Hemu.👏⭐️👍🏼
Loved each lines, every descriptions.
simply superb.👏👏👏
Swarnali revealed Karna's birth secret.😲
I didn't expected this.

Loved this part.😃
Wonderful, mindblowing, FATAFATI.👏👏👏
Great episode.👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally the recent chapter comment,
ohh, I catch up with your updates.

Wonderful update.
but Kunti, ohh I hate her so much.I always hate her, in your fic, I hate her the most.
The most selfish & manipulative lady.
A mother responsible for her son's death.Chalo, she never accepted.
But sach to nahin badal jayega.
In Star- Bharat, when Radha maa compared Kunti with a crocodile, I rejoiced the moment.
Another big wowww for this chapter also.
Loved the part.
U rocked Hemu.
Awesome, superb mindblowing update.
Great Going.
waiting for the next.

Waiting for your next story also.

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