A SWARON FF : IT ALL STARTED WITH A SMILE part 27 updated pg:144

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VReSh

@VReSH

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#581

Hmmm... Suspense!!! hmmm ok kohi nahi... But i know jus for tgis Sharon Sucide tho nahi karegi... may be she is crying her heart out ya faint ho gayi ho... well no Predictions... plz Update soon :)

P.S Amazing Work as Always :)

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Astha singh

@3sisters

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#582

Yap tum logo ne isse bahut buri jagah stop ki isliye update jaldi jaldi and i think it's little small also pir bhi it was nice swayam gussa tha pir bhi care kar raha th thanks for the pm

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@ndcdance

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#583

this was a mindblowing update..

at 1st i thot..its serious..but now it seems...the situation has chilled down,.and this is wat i lyk...if i think that swaron patch up is close...then ill be vv happy..😃

Varna bhi ill keep waitingf or it,,😉

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..RiSha..

@..RiSha..

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#584

you little devils i wont spare you both

you spoiled it all though in a good way

it was like all good things has to come to an end

sharons emotions came out loudly but in anger she spoke rubbish

but you know wat i wanted i wanted swayam to be acting as angry jus to make her realise

though evn this is gud now the evil returns you ended up with a cliffhanger

now dont make our stomach ache with anxiety and predict the worst

love *_*

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#585

So nothing serious prob..
Misunderstanding it is..
This will resolve soon..

Sharon must be planning something..
Like ..romantic

Thanks 4 d pm

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ujwal

@ujwal_v

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#586

swaron fights..hate it

nd wat was dat at the end😲

Again wrong time pe end kiya..

nw update soon

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Nishtha

@Nicky-nish

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#587

Y Y Y!!!!!
U always ended chaptrs in mid...
Abt d update it ws amazng...
Cn feel sharon's pain nd anger towards her parents...
Her anger towards swayam ws nt ryt bt nt evn cmpltly wrng...
Evn swayam's anger ws justified as he was hurt...
Plz plz plz update soon
Thnx fr pm

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gsk4

@gsk4

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#588

Beautiful Update. But i would blame Swayam for not supporting Sharon, but ok for argument sake he was trying to bridge the gap between Sharon and her parents but he didnt have to stretch his anger so much. Even in original D3 i always felt Swayam was unfair to Sharon, always taking the opposite person side rather than his girlfriend. One time ok, two time ok but always? In this FF Sharon has been always described as an introvert and a person standing in the corners rather than mingling with others. When she didnt want to go into relationship with Swayyam for the same reason, its Swayam who begs her says give him a chance to prove his love.

You have written it beautifully, i am waiting to see what happens and i sinerely hope she hasnt attempted suicide.. It would be sad.. I loved the way Swayyam waited for her to reach the apartment and to put on the lights.Nowadays who cares so much..Update fast.😃

Edited by gsk4 - 10 years ago

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Aneesha

@aneesha93

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#589

Oooh am relieved after reading the update😊. Lovely update. Sharon's emotional outburst hurt Swayam. It was very well written. Poor soul. Loved how he dealt with Sharon in the office. You indeed stopped at the wrong place. Is Sharon planning to make Swayam forgive her in the bathroom with her antics Swayam was awaiting for in the car? (Or may be even better)😉. Looks like that to me.

Thanks for the pm. Update soon.