A SWARON FF : IT ALL STARTED WITH A SMILE part 27 updated pg:144 - Page 60

Originally posted by: sanchiswaron

The end was so shocking for me to comment about that first -_- when will you stop hanging things in mid >_< :(

Hope she hasn't done something idiotic :| at the cost of her life :'(

Indeed I liked the chap ^_^ something different from their usual romance

You wrote it really well and so much in one chap except the last incident -.-

Could totally feel her anger for her parents and so for Swayam for taking decision for her :'( though she got carried away but that was all in flow :(

I love Swayam for his concern No doubt Sharon changed him *-*

Update :( abhi bata what happened :(

Pleaseee

Thanks :*

Originally posted by: --Keechu--

It was a fab update dear...👏

very well written

Loved it ... the emotions of Sharon and swayam u penned so beautifully...

frustration of Sharon we can understand...and her each line was so powerful...

Loved the way u pulled it out...it was nice... i was feeling so sad while reading this..for obvious reason...😭

And the last part was good..where he was dropping her ...

and as always u stopped at wrong place ... god knows wht gonna come ...

plzz update fast this time..

ANd thanks for the pm...

love u

~Keechu

Originally posted by: Hp_TvD_mAnIc

aswom updateee ... khai nuaghty naughty to nhai...

updatee soon...

Originally posted by: tinku82

U left in mid way...

were thr is nothng to comment on...

but was nice though

update soon pls dont leave in mid with surprise...

😊

Originally posted by: SHA_85

Luved upd

sharon ne aapni feeling share kiyi bcz of it i luved upd

swayam's anger was nyc

n m guessing ki sharon ne swayam k liye kich surprise kiya h bcz she knw's swayam well na

so m nt guessing she vl b crying or sumthg

bt i dnt knw wht is????? so jaldi jaldi upd karo n let me lnw did i guess rght or wrng

as i said last tym i love u n nw i do more bcz sharon' POV u hv written amazing

Originally posted by: 3sisters

Yap tum logo ne isse bahut buri jagah stop ki isliye update jaldi jaldi and i think it's little small also pir bhi it was nice swayam gussa tha pir bhi care kar raha th thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: __nidhi__

di..!!

this is not fair..

beech meine chod diya😭

plsshh...

update soon..!!!

Originally posted by: VrushanianAdity

I don't know if I should smile for the fact that the precap you had given us in the last update and the way it made me anticipate this chapter did not come true.. (For which I'm obviously glad 😃) or should I just stay the way I am, stunned. I swear, the last line made my stomach churn.🤢

You left it mid air and you both know that so well..

Coming to the update, I loved Sharon's frustration, because it was so genuine (I know frustration is not meant to be genuine but, I hope you get what do I mean. 😉)

Thanks for da Pm and plz plz plz plz plz UPDATE soon..