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This was so worth the wait. I hope that you had a lovely travel.
Back to khushi, I simply adore your khushi. I like that she is so stoic, and does show her vulnerbilies, yet she is so vulnerable. I am waiting her to be khushi. Like my pun? Similar to arnav I too am desperate to know what has happed to khushi after leaving college. So two mysterries are solved today. One tewari is khushi's step father. Could not have guessed it in a million years. But interesting fact nonetheless. And the other poonam raizada terminated khushi's scholarship. I wonder why she did it. It was such an awful thing to do. I cannot wait for arnav to partner with khushi and have that rubbed it on poonam riazada's face...I am waiting here for some poetic justice. I am not a very vindictive person but ...
I liked arnav a little bit more in this chapter, may be because he was honest about what he thought about khushi, and also because he remembered her birthday. It was so poignant that even her parents had not called her. Why, do they not love her? At least she has such a good friend in akash.
I never liked Payal, and i liked her even less in this chapter. I cannot appreciate people who come off as being so entitled. Payal to me is the epitome of class snoberry and entitlement. I really enjoy this class dymension of your story.
The discription of khushi and her beautiful saree, with a modest blouse, and unplucked eyebrows are memorable. Your khushi is becoming more appealing in every chapter.
Want to meet Aman and see how things unfold.
I am unable to find the appropriate language to say how wonderful it is to read your work. Thank you so much, you are a phenomenal story teller...
Waiting for more...
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