Arhi SS: Tewari & Sons, No. 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD I)

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Ananya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#661

ooohh hey. I'm bong too. And dilliwali too. De taaali!

Really enjoyed your note. Just wanted to say that. I really respect people who write good notes 😆

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amus5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#662

hola! arshians out there ...here comes Miss Tip-top in Yellow Boots ready to answer your questions...so please line-up to shoot your queries ...she is all set to answer them ... 😆

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canapoem

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Posted: 10 years ago

#663

Radhika, you are writing the story superbly. 👏There are no doubts whatsoever in anyone's mind. So whatever our comments or assumptions or predictions or derivations are, dont ever change the story line you have in your head.

Akash will end up with the Opposite Chawla!!! 😲 Seriously!!!

Actually I dont mind even if Khushi ends up with Akash, (Arshi fans might throw chappals at me for this comment), but really in this story anything can happen and I know you can make anything happen. 😊

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

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Posted: 10 years ago

#664

You're on the right right path... Don't explain your characters and don't change the storyline because of comments but do get inspired and get ideas. Sometimes I feel some comments are more thoughtful than the story itself (no kidding) :D

If a comment moves you and if you think the reader has taken a lot of time and effort, do try to thank. However we know that it isn't poosible at all times. So thank you notes are enough :) but you can totally do without them too! I mean this story is pretty awesome...so we should thank you, right :D

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Radhika

@YellowBoots

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Posted: 10 years ago

#665

Originally posted by: canapoem
Radhika, you are writing the story superbly. 👏There are no doubts whatsoever in anyone's mind. So whatever our comments or assumptions or predictions or derivations are, dont ever change the story line you have in your head.
Akash will end up with the Opposite Chawla!!! 😲 Seriously!!!
Actually I dont mind even if Khushi ends up with Akash, (Arshi fans might throw chappals at me for this comment), but really in this story anything can happen and I know you can make anything happen. 😊

Look at this, people, she is inviting me to the dark side.

Akash + Juhi was just a comment on lark. But ya, why not?!

@Anarocksick: Hiya! I knew it. My people are all over the place 😆

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sman

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Posted: 10 years ago

#666

Originally posted by: Anarocksick
You're on the right right path... Don't explain your characters and don't change the storyline because of comments but do get inspired and get ideas. Sometimes I feel some comments are more thoughtful than the story itself (no kidding) :D
If a comment moves you and if you think the reader has taken a lot of time and effort, do try to thank. However we know that it isn't poosible at all times. So thank you notes are enough :) but you can totally do without them too! I mean this story is pretty awesome...so we should thank you, right :D

I totally agree with Ananya..just get inspired by our comments and do your own thing

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Sj236

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Posted: 10 years ago

#667

Yea, please do not change the original story line at all coz you have been writing fabulously :)
Also according to me, you should reply to the comments at your convenience since it can get quite hectic replying to each comment since you are updating twice a week.
Its just a suggestion and hope we get d update tomorrow :)

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Jay

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Posted: 10 years ago

#668

This is the best note I have ever red 👏😊. Please stick to your original story line 😊. I don't mind to see Akash having hots for Kushi 😳.

I was just trying to understand meaning behind "Yellow Boots" username and came across that girl in yellow boots thriller movie 😆. Now I am sure you are indeed working for some shady investigating agency 😉

Edited by jduke - 10 years ago

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Arnima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#669

Payal and Arnav are a different ball-game altogether. Payal is entirely too self-absorbed and independent and doesn't really care about anyone else. Not to mention snobbish. And clinical (huh! some resume that is!). While I really don't know what to make of Arnav. His family's validation is important for him, he wants to make amends to Khushi and seems nice enough. Though a bit confused. Lack of love aside, they don't even have much respect and admiration for each other apart from their professional relationship. It's probably the genes- they all seem varying degrees of dysfunctional to me anyway.

But what really takes the cake is your Khushi. It saddens me to see her so weighed down by life and abandoned by her own family. Her loneliness rips you apart and her melancholy is painfully tangible. The most innocent and simple soul but the most wronged and misjudged person. It was sickening and painful to her life being controlled and messed around by elitist snobs like Poonam Raizada and some New On-ites. Thank god for Preeto and Akash. And probably Lavanya too now.

Waiting to see what new angle Aman brings now and for the past to unveil with all it's ugliness.

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shr1234

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Posted: 10 years ago

#670

Stellar one, Dear :)

Khushi has really been through a lot and her fight is still on.. even her parents alienated her! I wonder what did Poonam actually do?

Arnav and Payal are a mystery.. but then what is not a puzzle here? Dragging Sonu as dowry to Raizada house... another didi and HP in making! You know with all New-On-ites gathering again and with that Chawla lady and Poonam.. I have some apprehensions..

Read your note.. Radhika.. just stick to your own plot dear, you are a gifted writer, it will always be a pleasure to read you :) Sending you a buddy request :)

Edited by shr1234 - 10 years ago