Arhi SS: Tewari & Sons, No. 23, Chandni Chowk (THREAD I) - Page 55

Enjoying the story very much. Not going to analyze much, but will take each character for what they are. Enjoying how you tell the story and am looking forward to the big "grave" incident that occurred at "Tea with Mr Raizada Sr."

A very well written update nd after each update u make me more impatient to read next one.now come to the update... i like Arnav's dad he seems like a nice person nd Poonam singh Raizada... she is such a cold hearted woman...Anjali is a very sweet girl nd m liking her character ...after this chapter i can understand Arnav cold attitude towards Akash...his parents fondness towards Akash made him like that bec no child wants to share his love so it was natural for Arnav to react that way...loved to get a glimpse of Arnav nd Khushi cosy moment nd the way he pacified her...surprised to find that Aman liked Khushi nd now m curios to know what will be the eqution between them after his returning back to India...so Arnav was irritated that Khushi behave with him differently comparison to others nd m wondering why its matter to Arnav ?...was there some hidden fillings? Oh!...there r so many question nd i know i have to wait for the answer...plz ...plz update as soon as possible...

read all chapters in one go.. this is a pretty amazing story!

awesome update... oh so khushi had to leave her studies/college coz of the raizadas???

In hindsight Arnav should have stayed when khushi was there for tea...May be poonam raizada would be back and so goes the plan down!

Again, the latest note from the past from was so interesting, just like the rest of the story! And again, you left us in more suspense😆 You are definitely becoming the new cliffhanger queen!!!

First off, I was laughing out loud at the "superiority over her inferiority complex" line - that was just simply brilliant. Only a rich snob like Payal can get away from saying something so ridiculous😕

Again, you highlight the blatant classism that exists - if someone rich, say Payal, saved Mr. Raizada's life, she would have been feted, given lavish gifts, etc etc. However, when a poor girl saves his life, she loses her job, and ultimately loses her chance to complete her college degree. Poonam Raizada may be a smart businesswoman but whatever she must have done to Khushi on that upcoming Thursday must be tragic and ruthless😭 I wonder if this is what Arnav still feels bad for in the present time or if he has done something more to Khushi to bring her down.

Glad Arnav actually acknowledges that Khushi helped save his dad's life. The scene of him comforting Khushi was actually really touching. Though he might not know why, to him, padak padtha hai dammit!!

Khushi has shown so much resiliency in this story already. When she was let go at AR, she picked right up and found something else. Good for her!

One of the things that you highlighted in the last chapter was Arnav being upset about Khushi behaving different around him. Did it even occur him that maybe he has received that kind of treatment from Khushi because of the way he's behaved with her? In public, he's completely cold and indifferent to her, whereas he seems like a decent friend to his new-ons buddies. When he is with Khushi alone, he actually warms up and is somewhat friendly with her. Why is it okay for him to act one with with others and different with Khushi, but when she does the same, he thinks of it so badly? What a double standard😡

Interesting back story of why Arnav and Akash were never so close - looking forward to their meeting to see how they are with each other now.

Aman liked Khushi? In what way? As a friend or more? It's interesting that Arnav knows this!! Wonder if Khushi realized it or not.

There's just so much detail and content you deliver in a single update that I feel like I can keep trying to figure out how it makes sense in my head and speculate what happened/what's going to happen!! Great work - looking forward to reading the next part soon. 😃

I am finding Khushi's character so poignant and there is something so endearing about Khushi and the challenges she faces so stoically that it just breaks my heart.

Extremely interesting story. Absolutely loved reading it. :) I love the way you have portrayed Khushi's simplicity and her background and how much of a misfit she is with the rich kids. I really felt bad for her that so many of the rich kids are so mean to her. I am so looking forward to Aman coming back and falling for her and making Arnav jealous. Please continue soon. It was such a wonderful treat reading your writing. 🤗

awesome story...read it in one go...